Attempt at a funny story

[chewymin]

Hey everyone, so I am writing a story that is intended to be a dumb, funny story. It loosely based off the Rick and Morty skit, Bee keeping age, but full of dad jokes and stupid comments. I would really appreciate if someone would be willing to read it, and give me some fees back.

Normally I would reach out to volunteer editor, but the few that are active tend to have a lot on their plate so I figured I would reach out here.

My story is in word document, so if are are willing send a private message with an email address and I can send it your way. Thanks!

 

[PennyThompson]

How many words is it, what's the category and genre, and what's a brief synopsis of the plot? Those kinds of details will help people decide if they want to give you a beta-read or not

 

[chewymin]

How many words is it, what's the category and genre, and what's a brief synopsis of the plot? Those kinds of details will help people decide if they want to give you a beta-read or not

You are absolutely right! So I would put in the erotic coupling, slow burn, taboo adjacent? Categories. It is fairly long a bit over 5k words... And Im not done with it. That is why I would like a beta read, to see if I'm just dragging things out. The plot is, as I said, loosely based off the skit beekeeping age, just Google it if you haven't seen it. A daughter and her best friend come home from college, the best friend is lusting hard after the divorced dad. No incest!