My attempt at 'stroke' incest

[lovecraft68]

I've been here a long time and during that time my style has always been slow burn style stories with some conflict and drama before getting to the action. I especially stress this in incest stories where I find it challenging to get people to buy into something unrealistic being somewhat plausible. This is why my stories tend to be in the 6 page or longer realm.

However, there have been times I've wanted to cut loose and pretty much pen a 'suddenly, incest!" style story, but could never find a way to make it work within my muse.

Until I came up with the idea of Confessions, a fictional site on the dark web where people come to confess their real-life incestuous experiences. Because of the nature of them, they can be easy first-person stories that don't need a lot of build up because the stage is set in that you know they're there because of an incident with family.

Published this a couple months ago and thought I'd see what people here think of both the concept and the no slow burn, 'shit just happened' style done in not quite a full 2 lit pages

https://www.literotica.com/s/confessions-three-minutes-to-glory

 

[Dreamerman77]

Great idea. I also find most of the stories in this category so superficial, what comes to the plot, that the stories are... Well, bad. I have hard time getting into the action when the story is under 10k, unless IT has already happened before the story begins... And you found the work around.

I wish I would have come up with that .

Adding the story to my Read Later list.

 

[TheGreatOz]

I've just written the first part of my first incest story https://www.literotica.com/s/my-mother-my-personal-whore-pt-01

I wanted to give it a sort of internal logic even though its fantasy rather than the "I fuck my mother" implausibility you were talking about. I needed about 9K just for set up, and the almost completed part is about the same. Will be about 40K I think when its finished.

 

[StephanieGilbert321]

I've been here a long time and during that time my style has always been slow burn style stories with some conflict and drama before getting to the action. I especially stress this in incest stories where I find it challenging to get people to buy into something unrealistic being somewhat plausible. This is why my stories tend to be in the 6 page or longer realm.

However, there have been times I've wanted to cut loose and pretty much pen a 'suddenly, incest!" style story, but could never find a way to make it work within my muse.

Until I came up with the idea of Confessions, a fictional site on the dark web where people come to confess their real-life incestuous experiences. Because of the nature of them, they can be easy first-person stories that don't need a lot of build up because the stage is set in that you know they're there because of an incident with family.

Published this a couple months ago and thought I'd see what people here think of both the concept and the no slow burn, 'shit just happened' style done in not quite a full 2 lit pages

https://www.literotica.com/s/confessions-three-minutes-to-glory

Your writing is incredible. The hardest thing is coming up with some interesting way for the Mom and Son to come together, as they say.

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

Until I came up with the idea of Confessions,

I've always leaned towards the 'Penthouse Letters' type of story, almost a diary entry or confessional type tale.

 

[LFM90]

I wish 2 consenting adults such as aunt and nephew having a “relationship” was more common

 

[ADirtyPerv]

I find that 15k is a solid sweet spot that balances setup and delivery without losing reader attention. But I've only got 9 stories up so far, so a limited perspective for sure.

One of my favorites to write was It Just Happened, only 3.5K words, and balancing the shortness of the story with it still feeling realistic was really tough. The goal when I wrote it was definitely "suddenly, incest!", with a bit of accidental cheating as a side effect. Definitely a kind of confession story.

 

[lovecraft68]

This thread proved a point.

 

[LFM90]

This thread proved a point.

How so my friend

 

[dirk2024]

Published this a couple months ago and thought I'd see what people here think of both the concept and the no slow burn, 'shit just happened' style done in not quite a full 2 lit pages

https://www.literotica.com/s/confessions-three-minutes-to-glory

Your three minutes to glory story was fun (and hot).

I also enjoyed https://www.literotica.com/s/confessions-what-mommy-and-daddy-do which I found sweet (and sexy).

 

[lovecraft68]

How so my friend

Another author and I have been discussing how the "me me me" behavior is getting worse and worse as time goes by. This forum has always seen a sad lack of traffic and responses and I think it's getting even worse.

I posted this to just kind of test it out, and if you look, most of the replies are people linking their own stories, one person randomly asking for more aunt stories and one person who said the story was great but talks about the trouble of getting mom and son together. This is a sibling story, so I don't even think they read it, or if so is choosing to go off on another tangent.

One person did simply say they liked it as well as the other story in the series, which I appreciate but its not much in the way of feedback.

Long story short, this sort of shows the "Yeah, that's you, let's talk about me" angle that is becoming way more pervasive here.

I'm not angry about it, I get plenty of attention and have nothing to prove here, its just a bit sad because there are people here who are not established and could use some support and guidance, and I see less of that as time goes by.

 

[ADirtyPerv]

Fair point. I'll admit I came out a little eager on my above post, mostly I thought it was funny that your post and one of my stories lined up the way they did.

I had tried to read the Confessions story you linked months ago but I wasn't a fan of the main character's voice.

I finished it this time and still wasn't a fan of their voice, but the action was well written.

Sorry if I came across as a turd, one of several I guess. Not my intention, just my first post on really any forum.

Cheers.

 

[dirk2024]

One person did simply say they liked it as well as the other story in the series, which I appreciate but its not much in the way of feedback.

Sorry, considering how new I am to writing, I'm not confident in critiqueing another's work. I do like the concept of "Confession's" and hope you write more of them. Sometimes I enjoy "slow burns", sometimes I enjoy "strokers", so I appreciate having both options. Strokers are easier for me to read in one sitting, so, depending on my mood, I sometimes pass on longer stories.

Your characters are believable, both as themselves and as their relationship with one another. Their mutual "ball-busting" is very sibling-like and the exchanges between them were humerous. Their relationship is what I enjoy about brother-sister stories in particular. They have the love and care for one another without it being a romance.

In short, I couldn't find any reason why I shouldn't give the story five stars, so that what I gave it.

 

[LFM90]

Another author and I have been discussing how the "me me me" behavior is getting worse and worse as time goes by. This forum has always seen a sad lack of traffic and responses and I think it's getting even worse.

I posted this to just kind of test it out, and if you look, most of the replies are people linking their own stories, one person randomly asking for more aunt stories and one person who said the story was great but talks about the trouble of getting mom and son together. This is a sibling story, so I don't even think they read it, or if so is choosing to go off on another tangent.

One person did simply say they liked it as well as the other story in the series, which I appreciate but its not much in the way of feedback.

Long story short, this sort of shows the "Yeah, that's you, let's talk about me" angle that is becoming way more pervasive here.

I'm not angry about it, I get plenty of attention and have nothing to prove here, its just a bit sad because there are people here who are not established and could use some support and guidance, and I see less of that as time goes by.

Thank you for explaining it to me I really appreciate and at a lit member I will do better with my feed back