THBGato
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And verily there was much joy and great rejoicing as rumours of a new Broken Spokes story did spread around the internet!starts banging away at my keyboard
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And verily there was much joy and great rejoicing as rumours of a new Broken Spokes story did spread around the internet!starts banging away at my keyboard
As it happens, I have a new Booty Short almost ready to go. 'nother couple of weeks maybe.And verily there was much joy and great rejoicing as rumours of a new Broken Spokes story did spread around the internet!
Finally, something that suits my tastes. But where did you publish it?I cut my teeth on star-wars lesbian slash fanfiction featuring Revan and Bastilla Shan from "Knights of the Old Republic".
KotorFanMedia, which died many years ago. Not even the Internet Wayback Machine has it any more. It's for the best.Finally, something that suits my tastes. But where did you publish it?
My husband asked me why I write on Lit. Because it's fun! Most of the people on here are wonderful folks. Even getting hit on, I've never had anyone persist after I tell them that's not why I'm here. And I can't tell these stories anywhere else, certainly can't sell them! They've been filling my head for my entire life, and I jumped at the chance when I found a place they could be posted and appreciated. (well, jumped at the chance after I over-analyzed it for a couple of years.)My original motivation was that I just like to make characters with tons of issues, then I keep making their life better and better until they're on top of the world.
One of the things that keeps me addicted to writing is the little bursts of intense joy I get when I accidently write something good, whether it be funny, intense, dramatic, satisfying etc
You wrote: " I love wordplay, I'm awfully pungnacious."Why do I write on Literotica? Simple...
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In all seriousness, though:
I cut my teeth on star-wars lesbian slash fanfiction featuring Revan and Bastilla Shan from "Knights of the Old Republic". I'm not proud, but people seemed to enjoy my writing. I'd discovered Lit somewhere along the way, and enjoyed the works of Pacofear (who for the longest time I used to think of as Pacobear, because my mind is weird that way). "Words on Skin" unlocked something in me; I looked at a lot of top-list stuff in I/T (my kink at the time) and was... I don't know, unfulfilled? There wasn't enough story to many of them for me. So I challenged myself, I guess - the old, proud "I bet I could do better."
Somehow, it seems, I could. I wrote "Alexis" in a few evenings after work; the entire genesis of it was an image of a blonde girl backlit by sunlight, and... well. Here we are. I was young, and the story has numerous flaws, but people loved it. That was the start. I learned a few things, got better... or at least, better at flying by the seat of my pants. I love wordplay, I'm awfully pungnacious. I love dandling a sentence on my knee and getting the exact phrasing that conjures the scene that I wanted to...
Time's rushed on, though.
I'm very different to the thirty-three year old girl who wrote that. I'm older, slower, got more scars. As one of my idols, Margaret Ogden, put it - "The animal is tired" and the world is greyer and has more shadows around the edges of things. I worry; I worry about the people I love, about their children who I adore who are growing up in this world that feels so intent on tearing itself apart. Galadriel's warning that "Your Quest stands upon the edge of a knife." has never felt more apt.
Writing is catharsis; I write here as an outlet. I write about young girls, and their heartaches. And as I write I remember the stupid young girl I was and all the time I wasted chasing things and people who I thought would fix me. I'd be the first to admit that I love being popular for something (at last, right? Fuck each and every one of you, VGHS class of 96) and the slow trickle of comments on past stories is sometimes needed far more than I wish it were. Would I write if nobody was there to see? Perhaps, but the stories would be very different. Writing gets scenes out of my mind - good ones, and bad ones. If my writing makes people feel, and wipe their eyes, and go and hug someone they love... well, that's a good thing, and the world could do with more of that.
Okay but... inquiring minds want to know... did you bother with KotOR II and if so, which 'ship are you sailing there?I cut my teeth on star-wars lesbian slash fanfiction featuring Revan and Bastilla Shan from "Knights of the Old Republic".
Kotor II and I have a... complicated... relationship. I don't agree with most of the premise behind it, and Kreia pissed me off. I never finished it, whereas I replayed Kotor over and over and over because I was so in love with Jennifer Hale's voice.Okay but... inquiring minds want to know... did you bother with KotOR II and if so, which 'ship are you sailing there?![]()
I think it stems from that fact that while five years of Creative Writing classes helped me develop, Erotic Fantasy was not the sort of thing you could read out or submit in a Zoom class. It got to the stage where I would submit stories to my tutor to vet before they were released for the class to read, and yes it was a case of knowing how far I could push the line. She only commented once that one story was porn, but it's how we learn.I've been asked about this - and about my reaction to stories with low view counts and is it worth writing when you only get a few k views, and I did put some thinking into this. I'd be interested to hear what yu all think about this one too?
For myself - some of my stories have low views for the effort I put in - my last 3 Jeong Park chapters have about 10k views each - but they score 6.5 / 4.7 / 4.7 - the readers of Jeong that are following the story love them, but I think it's down to dedicated fans now - which I don't mind at all because I'm pretty sure at this stage those are dedicated readers - and 10k ain't bad. My absolutely lowest view is a short sci-fi story that was written for an invitation-only event and again, I dn't worry about it - it was fun to write and the story was something that I wanted to write.
Well over half my stories have less than 50k views but again, a lot of them were semi-experimental and me trying out new things or a different genre so again, I don't worry about it- I treat Literotica as a learning curve and somewhere to try things out and if it doesn't work, I try and figure out why and use it as a learning experience.
It's funny because it was a lot of my earlier stories that get the 60k-100k views. The ones between 100-200k views are a bit of a mixed bag.
I only have 4 stories with more than 200k views each - and those and a couple of the 100k+ ones are the ones I am focusing on redoing to self-publish - that combo of views and ratings is how I prioritize if I am going to do anyhing else with them. The rest are just fun and to learn from. LOL
All of that said, I joined Literoticas and started posting stories here as a "learn to write and see if readers like my stories" exercise. Getting a novel published by a mainstream publisher is a diabolically hard exercise and you have to get thru the filters to even be seriously considered - and erotica is almost impossible to do that with. What Literotica was for me was a trial run - do readers like my stories? Turned out they did, but it also turned out my early writing was pretty crappy to start with - you're much better in your head than you turn out to be on the display or on paper to start woth LOL - which is why you see so many crap Kindle ebooks that are self-published. Ego overrides skills - and a lot of kindle writers just churn out crap and I didn't want to go there so instead of adding to the crap I used Literotica to develop and hone my writing - and got it to where a small erotica publisher approached me (back in 2018) and a fairly well-known published sci-fi author asked me to co-write a novel with him back a couple of years ago (I still have to write that one). So as an approach, it worked for me.
So my approach is, disregard the views and the ratings and just write for myself and to develop my writing skills - too many writers on Lit don't focus on that part of it because it doesn't interest them and it's not their priority and nothing at all wrng with that- they are writing to get the stories and fantasies in their heads out and read, without worrying about improving because they have n real interest in being published or whatever - we all have our own reasons for writing and for publishing them here on Lit
Whereas MY aim longer term is to self publish and publish and go commercial and maybe even make a livimg out of it if I can. I'd love to do that- so I have an objective, the focus, and a plan to get there - and I see Literotica as my training ground, with Laurel and Manu providing me with millions of readers to try my stuff out on and it doesn't cost me a thing except my time. From that POV, I dont worry about views - I write to learn and to entertain readers and I experiment all the time with stories, genre, subject, and I try to learn from each story I write.
To start with the big thing I had to tackle was dialog and characterization - and then hooks - those hooks are a big thing - you have 50 words to hook a reader, and then you need to keep reeling them in and jerking the hook tighter with each chapter. My aim is to make a story un put downable. When I get a comment saying I stayed up until 5am because I couldn't put it down, THAT is a winner for me. Now I'm into plot and plotting which has always been a toughie for me. My stories are very linear and not at all complex. I probably won't change that too much but understanding plot and story structure and things like that really helps - when I starrted it was sort of instinctive because I read so much and I guess I just absorbed it, but it helps to know all the theoretical underpinnings - and now I have 2 shelves in one ff my bookcases on writing. All sorts of subjects, and they're quite useful. I have 3 or 4 books on revisions LOL. Synrax. Structyure (even grammar and speling LOL). Dialog. Characterization. Plotting,
So when I started on Lit, I already had a goal and 10 years later I am waaaay closer to being there - and the only thing slowing me down is my own innate ability to procrastinate LOL. Literotica's been everything I wanted and just writing here has helped me so much along my path, as has the encouragement and help of a lot of people here on the AH as well as my readers.
So what do you want to achieve and where do you want to go and how is Literotica going to help you get there.
Myself, I love the huge #'s of readers - any story will find an audience here, and they're readers who WANT to read erotica - so unlike Amazon, for example, a lot of audience filtering has already been done for us. So even what we might think of as a paltryt 6k or 7k views translates into thousands of readers who took the time to read our story. I think the stats say the average book only sells about 1200 copies, so putting aside that Lit is free, 6-7k views is ALREADY thousands of readers ahead of where the average book is on Amazon.
Readers generally translated into followers, and what I've found myself is that for the few things I have published, a lot of Literotica readers have followed across to Amazon and THAT translates into sales. Hasn't made my fortune and I'm not retiring on it but it's paying fr the coffee. LOL
So what's your take? What are YOU using Literotica for?
for me, there is something powerful about putting some words together that turn the reader on. I love hearing feedback where one of my readers likes to read my stuff on a kindle (and in public like on train or a plane). something kinky, where the reader gets turned on and needs to release that pressing orgasm but isn't able to. did that make sense?I've been asked about this - and about my reaction to stories with low view counts and is it worth writing when you only get a few k views, and I did put some thinking into this. I'd be interested to hear what yu all think about this one too?
For myself - some of my stories have low views for the effort I put in - my last 3 Jeong Park chapters have about 10k views each - but they score 6.5 / 4.7 / 4.7 - the readers of Jeong that are following the story love them, but I think it's down to dedicated fans now - which I don't mind at all because I'm pretty sure at this stage those are dedicated readers - and 10k ain't bad. My absolutely lowest view is a short sci-fi story that was written for an invitation-only event and again, I dn't worry about it - it was fun to write and the story was something that I wanted to write.
Well over half my stories have less than 50k views but again, a lot of them were semi-experimental and me trying out new things or a different genre so again, I don't worry about it- I treat Literotica as a learning curve and somewhere to try things out and if it doesn't work, I try and figure out why and use it as a learning experience.
It's funny because it was a lot of my earlier stories that get the 60k-100k views. The ones between 100-200k views are a bit of a mixed bag.
I only have 4 stories with more than 200k views each - and those and a couple of the 100k+ ones are the ones I am focusing on redoing to self-publish - that combo of views and ratings is how I prioritize if I am going to do anyhing else with them. The rest are just fun and to learn from. LOL
All of that said, I joined Literoticas and started posting stories here as a "learn to write and see if readers like my stories" exercise. Getting a novel published by a mainstream publisher is a diabolically hard exercise and you have to get thru the filters to even be seriously considered - and erotica is almost impossible to do that with. What Literotica was for me was a trial run - do readers like my stories? Turned out they did, but it also turned out my early writing was pretty crappy to start with - you're much better in your head than you turn out to be on the display or on paper to start woth LOL - which is why you see so many crap Kindle ebooks that are self-published. Ego overrides skills - and a lot of kindle writers just churn out crap and I didn't want to go there so instead of adding to the crap I used Literotica to develop and hone my writing - and got it to where a small erotica publisher approached me (back in 2018) and a fairly well-known published sci-fi author asked me to co-write a novel with him back a couple of years ago (I still have to write that one). So as an approach, it worked for me.
So my approach is, disregard the views and the ratings and just write for myself and to develop my writing skills - too many writers on Lit don't focus on that part of it because it doesn't interest them and it's not their priority and nothing at all wrng with that- they are writing to get the stories and fantasies in their heads out and read, without worrying about improving because they have n real interest in being published or whatever - we all have our own reasons for writing and for publishing them here on Lit
Whereas MY aim longer term is to self publish and publish and go commercial and maybe even make a livimg out of it if I can. I'd love to do that- so I have an objective, the focus, and a plan to get there - and I see Literotica as my training ground, with Laurel and Manu providing me with millions of readers to try my stuff out on and it doesn't cost me a thing except my time. From that POV, I dont worry about views - I write to learn and to entertain readers and I experiment all the time with stories, genre, subject, and I try to learn from each story I write.
To start with the big thing I had to tackle was dialog and characterization - and then hooks - those hooks are a big thing - you have 50 words to hook a reader, and then you need to keep reeling them in and jerking the hook tighter with each chapter. My aim is to make a story un put downable. When I get a comment saying I stayed up until 5am because I couldn't put it down, THAT is a winner for me. Now I'm into plot and plotting which has always been a toughie for me. My stories are very linear and not at all complex. I probably won't change that too much but understanding plot and story structure and things like that really helps - when I starrted it was sort of instinctive because I read so much and I guess I just absorbed it, but it helps to know all the theoretical underpinnings - and now I have 2 shelves in one ff my bookcases on writing. All sorts of subjects, and they're quite useful. I have 3 or 4 books on revisions LOL. Synrax. Structyure (even grammar and speling LOL). Dialog. Characterization. Plotting,
So when I started on Lit, I already had a goal and 10 years later I am waaaay closer to being there - and the only thing slowing me down is my own innate ability to procrastinate LOL. Literotica's been everything I wanted and just writing here has helped me so much along my path, as has the encouragement and help of a lot of people here on the AH as well as my readers.
So what do you want to achieve and where do you want to go and how is Literotica going to help you get there.
Myself, I love the huge #'s of readers - any story will find an audience here, and they're readers who WANT to read erotica - so unlike Amazon, for example, a lot of audience filtering has already been done for us. So even what we might think of as a paltryt 6k or 7k views translates into thousands of readers who took the time to read our story. I think the stats say the average book only sells about 1200 copies, so putting aside that Lit is free, 6-7k views is ALREADY thousands of readers ahead of where the average book is on Amazon.
Readers generally translated into followers, and what I've found myself is that for the few things I have published, a lot of Literotica readers have followed across to Amazon and THAT translates into sales. Hasn't made my fortune and I'm not retiring on it but it's paying fr the coffee. LOL
So what's your take? What are YOU using Literotica for?
I recommend adding to your forum signature a link to your stories' page. It lets people here find them much easier.I've discovered that publishing here has some side effects. I find myself eager to have my stories read by as many people as possible, and avidly track the view count and ratings.