FrancesScott
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Perhaps because the OP had an idea in mind for what they thought would be a cool and uplifting thread, and they expected it to go one way, but it disappointed them when it didn't.










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Perhaps because the OP had an idea in mind for what they thought would be a cool and uplifting thread, and they expected it to go one way, but it disappointed them when it didn't.
I have no control over how you react to things or interpret them. You seem to be basing your argument on assumptions about things - my mental state - about which your have no privileged knowledge. But it’s your prerogative to think what you want. It’s mine to say you’re wrong when the subject is me.
Maybe reread what I wrote and see if it’s just slightly possible you are misinterpreting things. It’s a good exercise to do sometimes on-line. I think what I wrote was neutral and fact-based, but YMMV.
Perhaps because the OP had an idea in mind for what they thought would be a cool and uplifting thread, and they expected it to go one way, but it disappointed them when it didn't.
I can think of several "logical" reasons why a relative newb would post a thread like this, and those reasons have nothing to do with wanting others to come and suck the OP's literary dick.
Nobody's angry at anybody here, and there's no need to assume anybody has bad faith in their posting. With respect, you seem to have drawn that conclusion about the OP on what, from what I've seen, is very scanty evidence.
Your prerogative. Others saw it differently. It’s a free world, for now at least.Reread it. Nope, that's still how it reads.
Sorry, dude.
The word is clique and we have that here like any other group does. Being a good/bad popular/unpopular author on 'story side' does not always translate here where the back slapping, high fiving and wagon circling rules.I am merely pointing out that it was evident from replies that there are circular relationships of recommendations, and there are star authors. In retrospect, neither of these should have been surprising developments.
I knew it! The Underground Lesbian Army is finally making a move?!It’s a free world, for now at least.
I heard you were denied lit tits because you didn't describe them as being triple D'sI knew it! The Underground Lesbian Army is finally making a move?!
Fuck, I knew I should have bought myself a pair of tits instead of spending the money on a motorbike...![]()
Apple-size is the way to go.I heard you were denied lit tits because you didn't describe them as being triple D's
We are? I don't even have my boots on yet. I don't even have boots yet! Can we at least wait until I can afford a good pair of boots?The Underground Lesbian Army is finally making a move?!
Dealer's choice on this one.... should I be drinking?
I feel like I should be drinking.
I've been drinking Jim beam and coke for two hours, you have some catching up to do.... should I be drinking?
I feel like I should be drinking.
You aren't fooling us with that casual talk, General Wanda. We know you are preparing the weapons of mass lesbianization.... should I be drinking?
I feel like I should be drinking.
All of those things, honestly. But I can offer a somewhat different pitch.Let’s pick on @onehitwanda - why is Damselfly so good? Characters? Plot? Language? Beauty? Themes? The feelings it generates in you? All of the above? I don’t mean a full literary review, but something.
I second this. I think a good rule of thumb is not to assume that others are acting in bad faith. It just sours everything when too many people make this assumption. I agree with you; I didn't interpret the OP's post this way and I think SinclairGroupLLP is off base. But even if there were a basis for SGLLP to express this opinion, why express it? What's the point? Assume that your fellow AH participants are acting in good faith, even if you have your doubts, and this will be a much more pleasant place to hang out in.
I was channeling Porco Rosso (among other things), so this is high praise.It honestly felt like experiencing a Ghibli movie in text form
That’s exactly the type of analysis I wanted to read, thank you.All of those things, honestly. But I can offer a somewhat different pitch.
Anyone who's read Wanda's work before knows the dialogue between her main characters is top notch. But what stands out, to me anyway, about Damselfly is the richness of the worldbuilding she begins with and how she feeds it to the reader throughout the story. The first 3/4ths of the first page sets the scene with exquisitely-crafted vocabulary and dialogue with some ancillary characters without being heavy-handed in terms of exposition. We don't meet the female love interest until the last 1/4th of the first page and their first earnest one-on-one conversation doesn't happen until midway through the third page. Everything before and around that serves to set the rich backdrop of the world that these characters inhabit and its done in such a way that feels natural and lived-in. The care she takes with crafting her prose is evident and makes for a vivid read.
It honestly felt like experiencing a Ghibli movie in text form, and that's only the first third of the story. I could go on but you said not a full literary review.
You seem very angry. I’m sorry if I have contributed to that in some way. Not my intent.Simon, c'mon. Do you actually follow this practice? I've seen you get into arguments with people, so I'm not sure why my pointing out my view as to what Frances meant was somehow out of line. Nor do I think it's out of line to call out the cynicism. But hey, I've got things to write, so I'll just go off and do that and leave you guys to your hypocrisy.
Simon, c'mon. Do you actually follow this practice? I've seen you get into arguments with people, so I'm not sure why my pointing out my view as to what Frances meant was somehow out of line. Nor do I think it's out of line to call out the cynicism. But hey, I've got things to write, so I'll just go off and do that and leave you guys to your hypocrisy.