FrancesScott
Not a virgin
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I think I have a few, but one that occurs to me is what I might call intentional repetition, there is probably a more learned word for it. What I mean is things like these not actually drawn from any story, but I do this a lot:
I felt an inner warmth. A warmth that somehow felt familiar, evocative even.
I realized that I was trembling. A trembling that was only growing as her hand slid lower.
I normally am hawklike in hacking away any repeated words, but find myself doing it on purpose sometimes. For the avoidance of doubt, I’m not claiming I invented this, just that I use it.
Do you have any distinctive elements to your writing.
I felt an inner warmth. A warmth that somehow felt familiar, evocative even.
I realized that I was trembling. A trembling that was only growing as her hand slid lower.
I normally am hawklike in hacking away any repeated words, but find myself doing it on purpose sometimes. For the avoidance of doubt, I’m not claiming I invented this, just that I use it.
Do you have any distinctive elements to your writing.