Studley does ALL the women in a family.

[Five_Inch_Heels]

I've had bits and pieces of this rolling around in my head for a while, but haven't been able to pull it together.

Maybe it starts with getting a guy's wife. Then he gets her mother. Then the guy's sister. Then their mother.

Culmination is a party where Studley lines all of the women up side by side and penetrates them all while the male members of the family watch.

Wife, sister(s), mother, mother-in-law, sister(s)-in-law, maybe even the cousins.

Tried a variation of it the readers didn't love. Plan was to add this in the next chapter.

 

[Husky_Embrace]

Might the problem be that it has too many fantastical attributes? Don't get me wrong. I've seen a lot of improbable stories. Male power fantasies or easy gratification are apl over the place. Even so this gies a bit further.

People are able to forgive some improbabilities up to a point. Having sex with all women? Probably still okay. The party is a bridge too far though. At least in my optics of an average erotica reader, of which I have no scientific basis. How will you ever get them to all be there, including their sisters, cousins, mothers and whatnot, so engage in sex with a single person, which is likely so short there's little to enjoy, and have all men connected present, watching and doing nothing? I buy a close knit family gang banging each other before I believe this scenario.

So that would be the problem to solve I think. How can you make them watch and accept it all? Some trickery that they don't know it's only one dude fucking them? It is only revealed during the sex somehow?

Personally I would leave it at the guy having sex with all the women individually. It is outlandish, but as it is only one thing people can more easily accept it.

 

[Rob_Royale]

I agree with @Husky_Embrace. The idea is wildly implausible. That's not to say it wouldn't be a good story though if you can explain why he's so studley all of a sudden. Magic spell, cursed item, a new aphrodisiac, the influence of same crazy Sumerian sex god?

 

[TheWritingGroup]

I agree with @Husky_Embrace. The idea is wildly implausible. That's not to say it wouldn't be a good story though if you can explain why he's so studley all of a sudden. Magic spell, cursed item, a new aphrodisiac, the influence of same crazy Sumerian sex god?

My immediate thought was that this could only work if it was either a mind-control story, or the guy somehow got crowned king or the equivalent.

--Annie

 

[faceache]

I did read a written story years ago along these lines. A male visitor lodger for a few weeks. He fucks the wife a few times with the husbands permission. The lodger also fucks the two adult daughters on different occasions. None of the know about each other until they all reveal they are pregnant.