taytay4eva
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It's GOOD, but it's not DONE, so I'm trying to find someone to read it and give me feedback on it, but I have no idea where to go to find such readers.
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Ain't that the truth. I had a tiger team back when I was writing my Arthurian novel, quite some time ago now, who taught me to let go some of my worst habits, and encouraged me wholeheartedly with my best.And then never ever let them go because they are more precious to you than money, or water, or life itself
This is the second time you've made me cry on the smut forum, EBSadly, one of them stopped writing here and we've fallen out of contact. Even sadder, the other came by a month or so ago and said her last goodbye. I don't use betas now, because I already know what these two would say.
Awww, Penny Thompson, that's so sweet. Thank youThis is the second time you've made me cry on the smut forum, EB![]()
It's GOOD, but it's not DONE, so I'm trying to find someone to read it and give me feedback on it, but I have no idea where to go to find such readers.
Why would you want “someone” to read it? If you expect a random person to magically give more insightful feedback than you’d have given yourself, just think about the average quality of comments here. You’ll realize it’s highly unlikely you are going to glean anything useful from an opinion of a random shmuck.I'm trying to find someone to read it
One path to avoid is the one I see most often these days....but I have no idea where to go to find such readers.
Where someone new to the website approaches an established author as a fan, builds a relationship with them by complimenting their stories, only to then turn around and use that as currency so the established author feels obliged to return the favour by becoming a beta reader.
I'm sure most people here have been on the receiving end of that, and it's by far the most annoying part about interacting with readers.
If I have time & inclination, I quite enjoy doing some helpful editing - but only if it feels helpful. If the author fights against or outright rejects all suggestions, it very quickly becomes a waste of everyone's time.One path to avoid is the one I see most often these days.
Where someone new to the website approaches an established author as a fan, builds a relationship with them by complimenting their stories, only to then turn around and use that as currency so the established author feels obliged to return the favour by becoming a beta reader.
I'm sure most people here have been on the receiving end of that, and it's by far the most annoying part about interacting with readers.
You are describing cheese. Or chocolate.And then never ever let them go because they are more precious to you than money, or water, or life itself![]()
I found your suggestions very helpful in the chain story.If I have time & inclination, I quite enjoy doing some helpful editing - but only if it feels helpful. If the author fights against or outright rejects all suggestions, it very quickly becomes a waste of everyone's time.
I don't know how many other categories have a lineage of supportive authors the way LS does, but I'm honored to be a link in that chain.Maybe.
I was that kind of reader you describe: I approached BrokenSpokes having never published anything here, though I was pretty honest and upfront. However, she didn't express any interest in continuing to edit/beta-read my work, so I didn't push her to and I haven't asked her since. Likewise, @Nellymcboatface and @AlinaX were a great help with some of my early stories.
BUT... I also think this is the way of it on sites like this. Looking back on BrokesSpokes' stories, she gives shout outs to other writers like @AwkwardMD and Salandar for editing and beta-reading. People help each other here. There's lots I don't like about Literotica, but this isn't one of those things.
Now that I'm a bit more established myself, I find I get requests from other writers to edit/beta-read their stuff. Provided they are writing in the Lesbian Sex section or their name is @PennyThompson , I usually accept, because it's all about paying it forward. I was helped by those who came before, and I'm more than happy to pass their wisdom on to newer writers (and also assist legends like bi_cathy - swoon!)
Plus, beta-reading as a writer is incredibly rewarding. I can't tell you how much I have learnt from reading drafts by brilliant writers like @redgarters @SugarStorm @DawnDuckie @HelenL , plus those mentioned above, seeing how these have evolved and developed, and really focusing on the craft in their writing rather than merely reading the story.
I'm sorry you find it annoying. I don't. These days I find it flattering. I'm tingling with anticipation at the thought of getting my eyes on an @Areala-chan draft soon! (No pressure, sweetie!)
Maybe I’m confused. But you can’t. I believe / and someone more knowledgeable may correct me - beta readers read finished stories. Alpha readers read stories as they are written.Where do y'all find beta readers for works you're still writing?
I thought alpha readers were the loudmouth bullies who steal all the best stories and make the other readers read things like Reviews &Essays and Humour & Satire.Maybe I’m confused. But you can’t. I believe / and someone more knowledgeable may correct me - beta readers read finished stories. Alpha readers read stories as they are written.
The general expression used here is that beta readers support you while a story is being written, as distinct from editors. That's the Lit convention. I've not heard the expression "alpha readers" in the context of Lit.Maybe I’m confused. But you can’t. I believe / and someone more knowledgeable may correct me - beta readers read finished stories. Alpha readers read stories as they are written.
The general expression used here is that beta readers support you while a story is being written, as distinct from editors. That's the Lit convention. I've not heard the expression "alpha readers" in the context of Lit.
For example, I had the best duo supporting me as a beta readers when I had the chutzpah to take on the Arthurian myth. They kept me above water for a year as I wrote it (104k words), and for a year or two afterwards. They've both moved on from the site now - one I lost touch with as he nursed his mental health through the covid lockdowns, the other sadly said her goodbyes a month or so ago. They're silently in every story I write now.
Maybe so in the outside world, but not here on Lit. Lit betas typically do both - that's the convention here. I've not seen anyone refer to alphas. Not in this sense, anyway.Differences from other roles
Typically, a beta reader reviews a draft that has gone through at least one revision. An alpha reader reviews a draft that is still without an ending or is completely unrevised.
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Beta_reader