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Trudy’s BNWO Anniversary Gift by Serena Steele Monroe

SerenaSteeleMonroe

SerenaSteeleMonroe

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Well, I've done it again! Another story in my BNWO universe. I got a bit ballzy and put in Loving Wives: only two hearts so far, no comments, 109 votes, a meager 1.39 score. But I knew what it'd be there. I'm waiting for the hateful comments to start. But if you would read it and let me know what you think, I'd appreciate it. I really dove in headfirst in this one, full-on cuckolding and black superiority with no vanish applied.

Trudy’s BNWO Anniversary Gift
 
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I'm not surprised at your rating. It was pure interracial fetish. Bigotry at its finest. None of the characters had a single redeeming quality. To have a story go twelve hours on LW without a comment tells me people simply did not bother. I bet the ones you get later will be one or two word comments.
 
SerenaSteeleMonroe said:
Well, I've done it again! Another story in my BNWO universe. I got a bit ballzy and put in Loving Wives: only two hearts so far, no comments, 109 votes, a meager 1.39 score. But I knew what it'd be there. I'm waiting for the hateful comments to start. But if you would read it and let me know what you think, I'd appreciate it. I really dove in headfirst in this one, full-on cuckolding and black superiority with no vanish applied.

Trudy’s BNWO Anniversary Gift
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This link doesn't work; you can't link your story directly from your author dashboard because anyone who clicks it will be redirected to their own dashboard. You have to link it from the actual URL of the story page itself.
 
Nynah said:
This link doesn't work; you can't link your story directly from your author dashboard because anyone who clicks it will be redirected to their own dashboard. You have to link it from the actual URL of the story page itself.
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I changed it, thank you very much.
 
Gamblnluck said:
I'm not surprised at your rating. It was pure interracial fetish. Bigotry at its finest. None of the characters had a single redeeming quality. To have a story go twelve hours on LW without a comment tells me people simply did not bother. I bet the ones you get later will be one or two word comments.
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Unfortunately, I have to agree. OP has three stories, and they have progressively gone from something a bit different for the genre and more like a femdom story down into the fetishizing of racism the niche is known for.

Putting this in LW is a kamikaze mission. Normally I rag on that crowd's over reactions to stories, (Mine included LOL) but this one really is asking for it.
 
lovecraft68 said:
Unfortunately, I have to agree. OP has three stories, and they have progressively gone from something a bit different for the genre and more like a femdom story down into the fetishizing of racism the niche is known for.

Putting this in LW is a kamikaze mission. Normally I rag on that crowd's over reactions to stories, (Mine included LOL) but this one really is asking for it.
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I know it is, @lovecraft68, but it was suggested that I embrace the tropes. It was also told I shouldn't ever put my stories in LW. But I wanted to see what'd happen.
 
lovecraft68 said:
Putting this in LW is a kamikaze mission. Normally I rag on that crowd's over reactions to stories, (Mine included LOL) but this one really is asking for it.
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LC68 takes the side of LW regulars? Man, pigs must be having a field day, flying over the frozen expanses of hell.
 
They're called acronyms. Usually, it's done because typing out the entire phrase can be overly wordy. It's also usually a sign that you've spent too long in the military.
 
SinclairGroupLLP said:
You'd have probably hit a solid 4.6+ if this went in IR, lol.
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The story would have probably reached a 3.3 to 3.7 anywhere else. I have no delusion that people who are not into fantasy would like it. It's intentional reading of a story you know is going to piss you off that's the part I don't get. It has BNWO in the title, so people can tell that's what it's about. It isn't there to drive away readers. But to inform those who like this type of story and those who don't, what it is about. No one buys a book to have the privilege of telling off the writer or downvoting them. But I don't read things (here or anywhere else) that I know I won't like.
 
SerenaSteeleMonroe said:
The story would have probably reached a 3.3 to 3.7 anywhere else. I have no delusion that people who are not into fantasy would like it. It's intentional reading of a story you know is going to piss you off that's the part I don't get. It has BNWO in the title, so people can tell that's what it's about. It isn't there to drive away readers. But to inform those who like this type of story and those who don't, what it is about. No one buys a book to have the privilege of telling off the writer or downvoting them. But I don't read things (here or anywhere else) that I know I won't like.
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There are a lot of folks who are fans of their specific genre choice - LW, I/T, etc - and tend to read or look at almost everything that gets posted in those areas. And in LW at least there are definitely people who enjoy throwing tomatoes and they go out of their way to do that.

Putting this in IR, where we all know what BNWO is and the audience tends to be receptive of stuff like that, would get you a big jump in ratings. I thought it fits in well with most of the tropes that seem to play well in IR.

This is why the categories exist, after all. It's as much to help us authors as it is to help the audience.
 
Again, I put it there only to see the reactions, and I did leave a note of for ADMIN, to put elsewhere if she wanted... It isn't that important to me that it's getting hammered in votes or comments. I expected it and wasn't at all disappointed.
 
Gamblnluck said:
I'm not surprised at your rating. It was pure interracial fetish. Bigotry at its finest. None of the characters had a single redeeming quality. To have a story go twelve hours on LW without a comment tells me people simply did not bother. I bet the ones you get later will be one or two word comments.
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The shortest comment is five words, and the longer ones are much longer. Again, I was writing to the tropes, which may or may not be racist.
 
You are a far better person than I am! If I got hit with a sub-2 score on a story I knew wasn't horrible, I'd probably get drunk, lol.
 
SinclairGroupLLP said:
You are a far better person than I am! If I got hit with a sub-2 score on a story I knew wasn't horrible, I'd probably get drunk, lol.
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I'll take it out on my boys if I get down about it. LOL... My partner and our grieving friend, not children. They like the pain, I like giving, might be a wee bit hard on them if I'm angry over score, but so far, I'm not.
 
Still not "BNWO", I think @jaF0 means -- It's two people having lots of vocal sex. I've read a lot worse here, but the "meh" to "yuck" from the readers is not anything to do with race. I don't think femdom goes down well in LW, it kind of blows people's fuses
 
SerenaSteeleMonroe said:
Again, I put it there only to see the reactions, and I did leave a note of for ADMIN, to put elsewhere if she wanted... It isn't that important to me that it's getting hammered in votes or comments. I expected it and wasn't at all disappointed.
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The problem you might have given yourself, if you do post stories in the inter-racial category (which is probably where they belong), is that the LW hordes might follow you, and forever hammer down your stories. Being deliberately provocative when you're new to the LW dynamic might haunt you.
 
SerenaSteeleMonroe said:
Again, I put it there only to see the reactions, and I did leave a note of for ADMIN, to put elsewhere if she wanted... It isn't that important to me that it's getting hammered in votes or comments. I expected it and wasn't at all disappointed.
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Really? I'd hate to go through the effort of writing a story to have it trashed. You say tropes, but you describe a black man having a penis that is 'too big for any normal woman to accommodate', yet your young white female main character takes it down the throat.
The very fact you specify race puts it into IR.
Now I'm not talking how the MC loves the woman's milk chocolate colored skin etc. as part of the description.
I'm talking the wimpy white boy with the miniscule cock, while the virile black man sports a penis only seen on a large farm animal.
 
ElectricBlue said:
The problem you might have given yourself, if you do post stories in the inter-racial category (which is probably where they belong), is that the LW hordes might follow you, and forever hammer down your stories. Being deliberately provocative when you're new to the LW dynamic might haunt you.
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I doubt many will follow somebody just to downgrade their stories. If the story appears in IR, then it will stand or fall on its own merits. Other categories, beware.
 
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