Woman celebrates trans wife’s name change

[Brandnewbuddy]

So I wanted to think of some shorter ideas to write and figured I’d like them to be short and sweet and I thought of a loving lesbian couple where one or both of them are trans and I thought it would be sweet and kinda hot to have the two of them find a kinky way of celebrating one of them getting their name changed.

The two ideas I’ve come up with so far:

1. Cis wife goes to their favorite bar wearing her wedding ring. Suddenly a gorgeous woman slides up to her and starts trying to seduce her. Wife tells her she’s waiting for her husband but the woman persists and eventually seduces her and fucks her roughly in the bathroom, making her delete her husband’s phone number and come back with her.

Come dribbling down her legs, she goes with the woman to her car: where they finally have a good laugh and cry. Her WIFE wanted to celebrate by having a symbolic seduction and farewell to her deadname. Wife obliged though she didn’t like saying mean things about her wife even if it was part of her fantasy…though she has to admit the sex is a lot better now that her wife has her new name.

2. Wife wants to celebrate her wife’s name change but money’s tight. Wife then gets a playful smile and offers to take her wife’s virginity.

“I mean that sounds fun but I think we already crossed that particular bridge.”

“Nooooo, I fucked a woman who looked like you-can’t remember her name. But unless you snuck off in the minute since you got your passport, I believe (new name) has yet to so much as round first base with me.”

 

[Rob_Royale]

It's an intriguing idea.

 

[PennyThompson]

Woww, cis-woman "cheating," on her "husband," with a trans woman "stranger," and being "forced," to forget about him is INTENSE.

I'm trying to think about how you'd sequence it for maximum impact, though. I feel like just making the truth of the situation a sudden twist at the end doesn't work very well...

But just spelling it all out at the start doesn't work either

I think you would need a framing device at the start of the story, a conversation between the wife and the not-yet-out husband, something that feels unhappy or bitter or frustrated, but written ambiguously in a way that it takes on new meaning as the story progresses, and ultimately turns around and becomes celebratory by the end!

 

[Brandnewbuddy]

I think you would need a framing device at the start of the story, a conversation between the wife and the not-yet-out husband, something that feels unhappy or bitter or frustrated, but written ambiguously in a way that it takes on new meaning as the story progresses, and ultimately turns around and becomes celebratory by the end!

That’s a great point and I think that’s how to do it.

The idea that comes to mind is being deceptive with the narrative:

The fight is reflected on while wife is at the bar. A time where her wife pre-transition is having a rough time but it’s presented in a way to suggest the fight just happened. Maybe Her wife lashed out at her after she couldn’t perform in bed. Maybe she even looks at some texts from when her wife pushed her away (maybe toss in a clue for readers by having the date between her most recent text and the ones where their fighting be different by a few years), so to the reader it looks like a story that’s just about a put upon cis woman going to a bar and hooking up with a trans woman who gives her the loving she’s missing at home.

Maybe as she’s “seduced” other scenes play out reflecting on other times they’ve fought or her wife wasn’t as confident as they are are now.

Then at the end, her wife takes her hand and for the first time it’s mentioned her wife is wearing a matching wedding band and some of the disagreements get recontextualized.

Like maybe there’s a vague: “I saw some photos on your phone…can we please talk?” Text or conversation which readers might think suggests infidelity and it’s revealed her wife one day tried on her underwear and clothes and took a bunch of selfies. At first looking scared and anxious but then looking happier as the pics progressed. Maybe That was the conversation that finally got her wife to come out to her.

 

[VerbalAbuse]

and the audience for this is who? transes who are into girls? a few horny men? who not-so-secretly wished they were trans?

 

[Brandnewbuddy]

I don’t know some readers who just like a lil joy with their stories?