Nightscream89
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So I have this idea in my head, but it has some gaps in it that I'm struggling to fill in.
It will be a fetish story, I want to include voluntary humiliation and watersports.
It's about a recently divorced woman in her late 30's/early 40's. I want to write in first person and start it off where she is in some sort of sex club.
Her hands are cuffed, but I make it clear that there is a release mechanism that she can activate at any time.
She is wearing a mask that obscures her identity but it also doubles as a blindfold. It's clear that she is in this situation to let herself be ravished by a bunch of strangers. (So the scene that follows here will be at the end of the story and will be in present tense, I hope I can pull it off to make it a nearly clausterfobic present tense, gangbang scene where she can't see anything so I'll have to describe touch, sound, smell etc. from a first person perspective.)
Then she tells the reader how she got there (This will be in past tense as if the MC is telling it. In a "I bet you are wondering how I ended up here." Kinda way.)
So It started when she caught her husband (now ex-husband) in bed with a girl who looks like she's in her early 20's. I say caught, but basically her husband knew she would come home around that time and did it on purpose. After she walked in on them, her husband handed her divorce papers. He didn't even have the decency to put on clothes before handing the papers to her. After he just calmly walk back to the bedroom to continue with his new girlfriend. She left the house crying and went to her best friends house.
She comes pretty decently out of the divorce financially. She isn't rich, but she's not struggling either. Her ex-husband is distant, when she asked for an explanation he simply said that she was now 'too old', he wanted kids and in his opinion she is too old to have kids. He is a couple of years older than her, but he just said it's different for men.
So I have all that pretty much down, but I kinda need semi-believable scenario's that lead her from a crushed, recently divorced, woman. To a woman who is chained and blindfolded ready to let herself be ravished by strange men. I do think I want to have her best-friend be familiar with sex-clubs etc. and be more open about sex and that that leads her towards that, but I can't seem to grasp specific scenario's that lead her down this rabbit-hole. So I thought maybe you all here have some ideas for that.
It will be a fetish story, I want to include voluntary humiliation and watersports.
It's about a recently divorced woman in her late 30's/early 40's. I want to write in first person and start it off where she is in some sort of sex club.
Her hands are cuffed, but I make it clear that there is a release mechanism that she can activate at any time.
She is wearing a mask that obscures her identity but it also doubles as a blindfold. It's clear that she is in this situation to let herself be ravished by a bunch of strangers. (So the scene that follows here will be at the end of the story and will be in present tense, I hope I can pull it off to make it a nearly clausterfobic present tense, gangbang scene where she can't see anything so I'll have to describe touch, sound, smell etc. from a first person perspective.)
Then she tells the reader how she got there (This will be in past tense as if the MC is telling it. In a "I bet you are wondering how I ended up here." Kinda way.)
So It started when she caught her husband (now ex-husband) in bed with a girl who looks like she's in her early 20's. I say caught, but basically her husband knew she would come home around that time and did it on purpose. After she walked in on them, her husband handed her divorce papers. He didn't even have the decency to put on clothes before handing the papers to her. After he just calmly walk back to the bedroom to continue with his new girlfriend. She left the house crying and went to her best friends house.
She comes pretty decently out of the divorce financially. She isn't rich, but she's not struggling either. Her ex-husband is distant, when she asked for an explanation he simply said that she was now 'too old', he wanted kids and in his opinion she is too old to have kids. He is a couple of years older than her, but he just said it's different for men.
So I have all that pretty much down, but I kinda need semi-believable scenario's that lead her from a crushed, recently divorced, woman. To a woman who is chained and blindfolded ready to let herself be ravished by strange men. I do think I want to have her best-friend be familiar with sex-clubs etc. and be more open about sex and that that leads her towards that, but I can't seem to grasp specific scenario's that lead her down this rabbit-hole. So I thought maybe you all here have some ideas for that.