Idea - mom son pool party new neighbours

[Abreb9]

I thought I read it before can’t find it anywhere have posted a thread no luck must have dreamt it.

A mother and son have moved across country.
The son is in school/college.
He is a good footballer, the captain is tasked with making the new guy fit in. The captain brings the new guy to his house he meets the family etc.
The captains father is the coach invites the new guy to the party tells him to bring his mother too.
The mother is newly single very conservative etc. she agrees to go. The party is in the garden a few of the team are their and their mothers. The mothers strip down to swimsuits. The team form a plan. The new guys mom is in swimsuit and first time he ever seen her in anything like that. The coach and his friends are occupied.
The sons and moms end up hanging out playing games getting drunk and then the inevitable happens.

Any one with more patience and better with words than me could make something out of it?

 

[Rob_Royale]

The title I can work with. The rest of it, doesn't do much for me.

So Janice and her son Will, move into the neighborhood after a messy divorce. Next door is an attractive older couple, Maria and Ted. They hit it off right away and Janice and Maria get acquainted over the backyard fence. After Janice and Will get the unmaintained pool and yard under control, they ask the neighbors over for a BBQ.

This BBQ is super hot. Lot's of sexy looks and innuendos. The night after the BBQ, Will comes home from sports practice tired and goes to bed, while Janice quietly walks next door.

A few days later while Janice is at work, Ted asks Will if he'd come over and help him out with a project.

For the next several weeks, both Janice and Will go to great lengths to hide from the other, that they are having threesomes pretty regularly with the neighbors.

For Maria and Ted, it's the best of both worlds and they are having the time of their lives.

 

[Fuumayami]

The title I can work with. The rest of it, doesn't do much for me.

So Janice and her son Will, move into the neighborhood after a messy divorce. Next door is an attractive older couple, Maria and Ted. They hit it off right away and Janice and Maria get acquainted over the backyard fence. After Janice and Will get the unmaintained pool and yard under control, they ask the neighbors over for a BBQ.

My initial thoughts was that as well. A busty mom and son get to know the attractive couple next door in who they share sexual affairs with. The "twist" was that these couple are very sexually adventurous and persuasive that they were able to convince the mother and son to FUCK which happens at a certain event, AKA hot foursome happens at the pool party!

But OP wanted to do some kind of MILF manor type setting. That too also sounds very hot. Hung young footballers fucking each other's mom and even their own at that too. That's what's I got from reading the post.

 

[Rob_Royale]

My initial thoughts was that as well. A busty mom and son get to know the attractive couple next door in who they share sexual affairs with. The "twist" was that these couple are very sexually adventurous and persuasive that they were able to convince the mother and son to FUCK which happens at a certain event, AKA hot foursome happens at the pool party!

But OP wanted to do some kind of MILF manor type setting. That too also sounds very hot. Hung young footballers fucking each other's mom and even their own at that too. That's what's I got from reading the post.

Yeah. I can easily see it getting incestuous. It's just not my thing.

 

[Fuumayami]

Yeah. I can easily see it getting incestuous. It's just not my thing.

Your idea is pretty solid too. Love the idea of a mother and son who has no idea the other is sneaking into their sexually adventurous neighbor to have their way with the wife or husband and even having threesomes with them too! I see the story concluding with the inevitable reveal on what the mother and son are doing with the neighbors and accepting the fact they're in this weird relationship with them.
This could also be really hot, instead of a mother and son, a young couple. A stay at home wife who has too much on her time and a busy husband who always seems to be "working late." They seem to have the secret all figured out, until the neighbors plan to reveal it all at the pool party. Hot steamy foursome!
I can see the characters now:
Male Neighbor has a big cock but low stamina.
Female Neighbor is a busty big titty woman with a high sexual appetite.
Young Husband has an average cock but high stamina and sexual appetite.
Young Wife is petite with a great ass and tight pussy.

 

[Andreas_Kreuz]

I like the original idea. The conservative mum follows her son to this party, that turns out to be more raunchy than she has ever experienced before. There are a number of football players and their mums. She feels humiliated because she only has a conservative one-piece swimsuit while the other mums daring bikinis. She notices that the mothers and boys mingle more intensively than would be appropriate. There are catcalls, slaps on the bottoms, bikini slips, etc. She notices that her son is hit upon by one other mom.
The host suggests that she might put on a spare bikini she has upstairs. She agrees. Maybe the host helps her into the bikini with a bit of extra touching.

As they are back downstairs, she gets complimented about her hot body, which makes her both intimidated and horny.

The party goes on, slowly building up tension. Footballers start sporting hard-ons under their swimming boxers without being shy about it.

She also gets felt up. Her wetness is undeniable, so she plays along. She is torn between outrage and week knees.

She notices that every so often one mom disappears with a football hunk. They come back a while later with red cheeks and messy hair.

A bit later she sees her son being led upstairs by one of the hot football moms.

She follows him upstairs. She hears sounds, investigates and watches her son fuck the milf.

The guy who has felt her up, finds her as she is watching. They start making out in front of the bedroom. This way she does not notice that her son is done and comes out and sees her topless and being fumbled. They pass each other as her son puts away his dick and her lover pulls her into the bedroom.

To be continued.

 

[KatrinatheNudistMom]

Very hot concept... love the ideas of originally mom and son unaware they were in 3somes with neighbors... until either through dares or alcohol the mom and son become intimate with each other with the help of the neighbors

 

[Andreas_Kreuz]

The conservative mum follows her son to this party, that turns out to be more raunchy than she has ever experienced before

I wrote it. Anyone wants to review it? 4500 Words.

 

[Rob_Royale]

I wrote it. Anyone wants to review it? 4500 Words.

I'd be happy to read it once it's posted. Looking forward to it.

 

[Waiter519123]

Very hot concept... love the ideas of originally mom and son unaware they were in 3somes with neighbors... until either through dares or alcohol the mom and son become intimate with each other with the help of the neighbors

I think that’s a great twist. I would add that the neighbor is a mom of a son also. She starts sucking your sons cock then offers you to finish sucking your son cock off as she pushed your sons face into her pussy.

 

[CyndiOldermen]

Oh damn I loves this idea... love to see the mom and son end up together with the help of the neighbors who in turn are related to each other

 

[Andreas_Kreuz]

Where does this story go to? Is the party enough of a climax to make a complete story?

As I said, I am working on the story. I followed pretty much the initial suggestion and the story culminates at that party, There the mom observes her son to fuck one of the hot milf football moms. At that moment the mom sheds her inhibitions and fucks a team mate of her son, which in turn her son observes. I stayed away from incest, but it is pretty close to it because of the strong overlaps. I added some build up to make her transformation plausibe.

It currently ends as mother and son head home. The mother now a self assured cougar. But it does not really have drama, no conflict, no antagonist and not a compelling resolution. So while it is hot, it is still a bit lame.

Any ideas?

 

[Rob_Royale]

So while it is hot, it is still a bit lame.

True. But there is room in erotica for stories with no drama, no conflict, no antagonist and no compelling resolution. Call them stroke stories or what have you, but sometimes it's fine to have it just about the sex. I've written them both and there seems to be readers for both. So if your idea is just a sexy situation unfolding, why the hell not?

 

[Andreas_Kreuz]

Hi, part 1 of the story is now published: https://www.literotica.com/s/football-moms-club-01

 

[Rob_Royale]

I will check it out.

 

[Andreas_Kreuz]

Hi, part 2 of the story that is based on this thread just got published: https://literotica.com/s/football-moms-club-02