Pokemon story (I know, I know)

[mistermyst13]

Hello,

I'm looking for an editor/beta reader(s) for a Pokemon story. A friend and I are working on it, and think we have a good first chapter. I know it's not everyone's cup of tea, so I figured it might be easier to post here for a broader audience then trying to pick an editor and hope for the best. Fyi it's more Monster girls/guys then just straight beasts. Look up Kinkymation for what I am trying to do. It's a retelling of Red's story, obviously with adults. Also there will be a pretty wide spread of sex, vanilla, with mons, mons on mons, lesbian sex, gay sex, group, harem, etc. My friend asked me to post it since I already have a presence here on Lit and we're looking for people to help. Let me know if you're interested, just reading and comments will help too honestly. Thanks for your time.

Cheers!
-Mr. E

 

[StillStunned]

Remember that you won't be able to use characters that are children in the show, even if you age them up to be adults.

 

[mistermyst13]

Remember that you won't be able to use characters that are children in the show, even if you age them up to be adults.

Well I'm blending the anime/manga/games together, but how does it work then? I know there a porn parody, that is laughable or nightmare fuel depending on your perspective, but it uses Ash and Misty. How did they get away with it? I'm not using Ash I'm using Red, in not so many words, and several characters cross over and no specific ages were ever given. I'm not trying to argue, I do actually want to know, we put a fair amount of time and work on this.

 

[Bramblethorn]

Well I'm blending the anime/manga/games together, but how does it work then? I know there a porn parody, that is laughable or nightmare fuel depending on your perspective, but it uses Ash and Misty. How did they get away with it?

Most likely Laurel (the moderator) missed that reference. If it gets reported, it'll be taken down.

I'm not using Ash I'm using Red, in not so many words, and several characters cross over and no specific ages were ever given. I'm not trying to argue, I do actually want to know, we put a fair amount of time and work on this.

According to https://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/List_of_character_ages, the Red, Green and Blue games state that Red is 11 years old. It mentions him as being 20 in some of the later ones, but I'm assuming "Red" is where his story is told, in which case this would be very much against Literotica's rules.

Hosting porn stories about sex with pre-teen children can get website owners in a lot of trouble. There have been a couple of cases where site owners were jailed on obscenity charges for hosting such stories. Nobody knows exactly how far First Amendment protections extend here, and the site owners have stated that they don't want to host stories about under-18s having sex, including "aged-up" fanfic of characters who are under 18 in the source material.

 

[PennyThompson]

Is there a super important reason you couldn't just use an original, explicitly adult, MC in the Pokemon setting?

I haven't played the original Gameboy games, but it's not like the game characters are extremely distinctive and well developed, are they?

 

[mistermyst13]

Is there a super important reason you couldn't just use an original, explicitly adult, MC in the Pokemon setting?

I haven't played the original Gameboy games, but it's not like the game characters are extremely distinctive and well developed, are they?

I spoke with my writing partner and I think we have a work around. We were using the story (although its not much) as a frame work, and we might have a way to use established characters for our purposes in introducing new characters

 

[mistermyst13]

Ok so I think we have it figured it out now, the MC and the Rival are OCs now. And much of the original cast is gone, so still looking for a proof reader/editor or beta reader.

 

[mistermyst13]

Still looking FYI