shelleycat1
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I have lost contact with my usual editor, no answer in over a month. So they are busy, on holiday or ill, and I'm growing impatient to publish the story. This standalone story is complete, about 13500 words long. It was inspired by one of the writing exercises in the Authors Hangout forum. So I am looking for an editor or beta-readers. Any help will be appreciated.
Title: Programmed to be a good daughter
Notes will say: She finds no demons under the bed. People close to her are worse
Tags: Science Fiction, sci-fi, Mind Control. non consent, non-consent, noncon, Romance, betrayal
Start of story:
Annie was surprised when Mark was first invited round for dinner. She did not feel anything else when they were introduced across the table, and afterwards were told to go upstairs and do homework together. Her feelings would change later when he gave her a bunch of flowers.
She took Mark up to her room, feeling shy as she invited him in. She liked pink, so the room was pink with some stuffed toys on the bed. I wonder what he thinks of it? It's my room, just where I want to be, nothing to do with him, she answered herself. She had seen Mark at school, the same year as her, but had never spoken to him. He was just one of the other pupils, not in her circle and she never thought about him. Her textbooks were neatly lined up on the shelving with decorations and two jars of flowers, and of course her special pink-and-blue folders. One with a pink heart on, for her wedding plans, and the other for cookery had a coloured cake on the blue covers. Mark seemed overwhelmed, but it was just the way she was. She didn't care what people thought, as long as she was a good daughter, was polite, and as long as her parents loved her.
Title: Programmed to be a good daughter
Notes will say: She finds no demons under the bed. People close to her are worse
Tags: Science Fiction, sci-fi, Mind Control. non consent, non-consent, noncon, Romance, betrayal
Start of story:
Annie was surprised when Mark was first invited round for dinner. She did not feel anything else when they were introduced across the table, and afterwards were told to go upstairs and do homework together. Her feelings would change later when he gave her a bunch of flowers.
She took Mark up to her room, feeling shy as she invited him in. She liked pink, so the room was pink with some stuffed toys on the bed. I wonder what he thinks of it? It's my room, just where I want to be, nothing to do with him, she answered herself. She had seen Mark at school, the same year as her, but had never spoken to him. He was just one of the other pupils, not in her circle and she never thought about him. Her textbooks were neatly lined up on the shelving with decorations and two jars of flowers, and of course her special pink-and-blue folders. One with a pink heart on, for her wedding plans, and the other for cookery had a coloured cake on the blue covers. Mark seemed overwhelmed, but it was just the way she was. She didn't care what people thought, as long as she was a good daughter, was polite, and as long as her parents loved her.
