The Hotel Server

[GlennJenko]

In my latest story, the main (interracial) couple are in a hotel ordering room service after a fuck session. When it arrives, the man (aged 29) answers the door almost fully nude. As he's pulling the food in, the server (aged 19) catches a glimpse of the woman (aged 26) shirtless. That's the extent of the server's involvement, but it got me thinking.

Maybe while working in the hotel she sees a few things that excite her beyond just that couple. Things like other handsome guys opening the door with large condoms/wrappers visible, hot couples at the pool, and so on. Maybe it leads to her watching porn on the subject, which leads to her secretly wanting it in real life.

One such time a really attractive, older man (maybe around 40) takes a liking to her and can sense she likes him. He seduces her eventually. What I'm struggling with is exactly how it plays out, and if it should just be her and the guy, or if the guy should have a partner that she's seduced into the middle of. I think both could work with the premise, as either she wishes she was in the place of the woman she saw, or wishes she could join them both.

 

[ericrodman101]

The vibe with opportunistic hotel sex seems to be things happen there which would never happen at home. It's a place to let yourself go. I think the guests wants and wantonness drive a story about a hotel server who gets in way deeper than they ever imagined. It's gonna be group, it's gonna be crazy, it's gonna test her to her limits and beyond.

 

[GlennJenko]

The vibe with opportunistic hotel sex seems to be things happen there which would never happen at home. It's a place to let yourself go. I think the guests wants and wantonness drive a story about a hotel server who gets in way deeper than they ever imagined. It's gonna be group, it's gonna be crazy, it's gonna test her to her limits and beyond.

Great points.

The couple wanting to explore outside their somewhat mundane love life on a collision course with the server who's new to all of it sounds incredibly hot to me. I'm picturing the three of them laying in a partly destroyed hotel room by the end of it with the server covered in hers, the husband's and the wife's cum, wondering how on earth she got there.

 

[Nightscream89]

Great points.

The couple wanting to explore outside their somewhat mundane love life on a collision course with the server who's new to all of it sounds incredibly hot to me. I'm picturing the three of them laying in a partly destroyed hotel room by the end of it with the server covered in hers, the husband's and the wife's cum, wondering how on earth she got there.

After the deed is done, the husbands pulls out his wallet and asks her. "How much?"
The server is stunned, how could this man think she's a prostitute? She feels insulted but then sees the large stack of bills in his wallet. "200" she replied before realizing what she has just done.
"Oh that's cheap, I'll give you another 100 on top, we really enjoyed it thanks."
The server can't believe that the man considered 200 cheap. She wonders how much could she make if....

 

[Rob_Royale]

It's a hot premise. I'd have her bringing libations to a room on a cart only to find two couples barely wrapped in towels so she can enter the room. She's awestruck.
The next night, the same thing, except it's a couple she remembers and a fit young man.
On the third night, she brings up dinner after fantasizing wildly about the couples exploits. The couple are alone and dressed, but she can't help asking, "Got fun plans for tonight?"
Only for the woman to reply. "That depends, what time do you get off work?"

 

[GlennJenko]

It's a hot premise. I'd have her bringing libations to a room on a cart only to find two couples barely wrapped in towels so she can enter the room. She's awestruck.
The next night, the same thing, except it's a couple she remembers and a fit young man.
On the third night, she brings up dinner after fantasizing wildly about the couples exploits. The couple are alone and dressed, but she can't help asking, "Got fun plans for tonight?"
Only for the woman to reply. "That depends, what time do you get off work?"

Oh, I like this!

I was thinking of a dual seduction route, where both husband and wife lay on the charm. That would fit perfectly into it. Maybe the server works on rotation around the hotel, so does a mix of room service stuff, restaurant stuff and working the bars if they're short staffed. That way she can see them around the hotel too, such as seeing the wife in a bikini (I love a poolside scene).

 

[GlennJenko]

After the deed is done, the husbands pulls out his wallet and asks her. "How much?"
The server is stunned, how could this man think she's a prostitute? She feels insulted but then sees the large stack of bills in his wallet. "200" she replied before realizing what she has just done.
"Oh that's cheap, I'll give you another 100 on top, we really enjoyed it thanks."
The server can't believe that the man considered 200 cheap. She wonders how much could she make if....

Apologies that I forgot to reply to this.

It's an interesting idea, but not what I'm really going for here. In my mind it's really centred around letting go of sexual inhibitions, not anyone thinking of involving any kind of payment.

 

[Nightscream89]

Apologies that I forgot to reply to this.

It's an interesting idea, but not what I'm really going for here. In my mind it's really centred around letting go of sexual inhibitions, not anyone thinking of involving any kind of payment.

No problem,

If I think about the premise of breaking her sexual inhinitions, I would definitely use a couple. The wife could be a sort of 'role model' to her. Where the men intrigue her, in her knowledge it is not 'proper' for a woman to do those things.

However now there is a woman in front of her who seems really happy and does do al those things, with her husband and maybe with other men the couple invites into their bedroom. The woman is kind to her and helps her discover new things about her own body, as well as men's bodies.

 

[Rob_Royale]

No problem,

If I think about the premise of breaking her sexual inhibitions, I would definitely use a couple. The wife could be a sort of 'role model' to her. Where the men intrigue her, in her knowledge it is not 'proper' for a woman to do those things.

However now there is a woman in front of her who seems really happy and does do al those things, with her husband and maybe with other men the couple invites into their bedroom. The woman is kind to her and helps her discover new things about her own body, as well as men's bodies.

Yep, totally agree. The woman should be older, attractive and above all, glamorous. Her hair is perfect, her makeup perfect, her lingerie is expensive and her red-bottom high heels have never touched pavement. She's the epitome of sexy, provocativeness and elegance. The way men respond to her is magnetic.

"I wish I could be like this." she says quietly, mostly to herself.

The older woman smiles slyly. "Give me fifteen minutes in that bathroom sweetie, and I'll show you just what sort of siren is waiting behind those brown eyes."

 

[GlennJenko]

No problem,

If I think about the premise of breaking her sexual inhinitions, I would definitely use a couple. The wife could be a sort of 'role model' to her. Where the men intrigue her, in her knowledge it is not 'proper' for a woman to do those things.

However now there is a woman in front of her who seems really happy and does do al those things, with her husband and maybe with other men the couple invites into their bedroom. The woman is kind to her and helps her discover new things about her own body, as well as men's bodies.

Now that I really do like.

The wife can see the server (who I think I'm naming Holly) is interested but holding back so takes it upon herself to show her the way. The wife being the guide is also a good angle for the sex scenes.

As for the "proper" part, that could certainly work. I was planning on Holly being from rural Florida (near where the hotel is based by Miami, from my other story) so having a bit more of a conservative upbringing meant she couldn't properly explore her sexuality

Yep, totally agree. The woman should be older, attractive and above all, glamorous. Her hair is perfect, her makeup perfect, her lingerie is expensive and her red-bottom high heels have never touched pavement. She's the epitome of sexy, provocativeness and elegance. The way men respond to her is magnetic.

"I wish I could be like this." she says quietly, mostly to herself.

The older woman smiles slyly. "Give me fifteen minutes in that bathroom sweetie, and I'll show you just what sort of siren is waiting behind those brown eyes."

Love this, too. I was already thinking of her and husband being older (him around 40, her slightly younger) so it fits perfectly.

Talking of a magnetic response, I think it'd be interesting if the first time Holly hears about the wife is from her co-workers. She doesn't entirely listen but is similarly awestruck when she first sees the wife too.

The wife doing the make up before anything explicitly sexual happens could also be a great way of building intimacy.

 

[Rob_Royale]

I can't wait to read it.

 

[GlennJenko]

I can't wait to read it.

It seems like it'll be fun to write as well. I'm waiting on my latest story to be published, taking a few days for work stuff and then I'll properly get into it.

 

[SmokingFap]

In my latest story, the main (interracial) couple are in a hotel ordering room service after a fuck session. When it arrives, the man (aged 29) answers the door almost fully nude. As he's pulling the food in, the server (aged 19) catches a glimpse of the woman (aged 26) shirtless. That's the extent of the server's involvement, but it got me thinking.

Maybe while working in the hotel she sees a few things that excite her beyond just that couple. Things like other handsome guys opening the door with large condoms/wrappers visible, hot couples at the pool, and so on. Maybe it leads to her watching porn on the subject, which leads to her secretly wanting it in real life.

One such time a really attractive, older man (maybe around 40) takes a liking to her and can sense she likes him. He seduces her eventually. What I'm struggling with is exactly how it plays out, and if it should just be her and the guy, or if the guy should have a partner that she's seduced into the middle of. I think both could work with the premise, as either she wishes she was in the place of the woman she saw, or wishes she could join them both.

I think that premise would make a fascinating series, detailing the various encounters she and they have on their travels and stays at hotels. Almost a limitless pool of scenarios to pull from.

 

[GlennJenko]

I think that premise would make a fascinating series, detailing the various encounters she and they have on their travels and stays at hotels. Almost a limitless pool of scenarios to pull from.

I'm going to focus on the first one for now, though I do think there's ways of them meeting up. Like if they coordinate where they'll go for Holly's spring break, or she has a track meet near where the couple live.

 

[SmokingFap]

I'm going to focus on the first one for now, though I do think there's ways of them meeting up. Like if they coordinate where they'll go for Holly's spring break, or she has a track meet near where the couple live.

All sounds great! Definitely just focus on what you want to write. Hopefully you'll enjoy the scenario and want to add other chapters. But they can essentially be discrete chunks, or train cars, I'll see you later where the training runs no matter how many cars or what kind it's towing.

That was probably a terrible analogy, but hopefully you get the point.

 

[GlennJenko]

All sounds great! Definitely just focus on what you want to write. Hopefully you'll enjoy the scenario and want to add other chapters. But they can essentially be discrete chunks, or train cars, I'll see you later where the training runs no matter how many cars or what kind it's towing.

That was probably a terrible analogy, but hopefully you get the point.

I did, don't worry!

But yeah, I'm thinking this way because my previous works have all been part of a series (and were intended to be from the start) and while I'm proud of them, I got bad burnout while writing parts 2 and 3. So focusing on one before thinking too hard before any more should mitigate that.

The creative juices are certainly flowing for this, though. So thanks to everyone who's pitched in so far and who may do going forward.

 

[Nightscream89]

I did, don't worry!

But yeah, I'm thinking this way because my previous works have all been part of a series (and were intended to be from the start) and while I'm proud of them, I got bad burnout while writing parts 2 and 3. So focusing on one before thinking too hard before any more should mitigate that.

The creative juices are certainly flowing for this, though. So thanks to everyone who's pitched in so far and who may do going forward.

Just throwing this out here, but another idea:

The couple has a young man around 24ish or something? That they hook up with a couple of times, she gets to know him as well. He is a very good looking man.

At the end he asks her out, because he likes and because she seems to like the lifestyle. He tells her he has dated before but he just couldn't give up the lifestyle so it never worked out.

This gives a nice opening for a possible second part where the new couple starts experiencing things together. Or it could just be a happy ending if you decide not to continue it. Also a unique way of meeting someone "Oh yeah, we ended up fucking the same married couple and we fell in love."

 

[BiteMyLip]

A fantasy I RP’d with an online contact years ago, that I will probably write a version of here soon. Feel free to use the idea though - happy for others to interpret it how they want too.

Couple exploring some light BDSM in the hotel room. F shares secret fantasy of her being subject of a voyeur.

M has F tied to a chair wearing lingerie, legs spread open. M calls for champagne to be delivered to the room.

Knock at door, F still tied to chair half naked assumes M will accept the champagne but opens the door and allows young M server to wheel in a trolley with ice bucket, glasses etc. F is torn between panic and excitement.

Server sees F tied up. Unsure what to do. Asks if she is in distress, needs help, gets flustered but also incredibly turned on.

M reassures server this is part of F’s desire to be seen. M asks server if he wants to stay for a glass of champagne. Server is torn about what to do. Says yes. F incredibly turned on at being exhibited like this.

Server visibly aroused. M seduces him into playing with his cock in front of F. Server does so while M makes F suck him off still tied to chair. Server cums on himself, makes excuses and leaves.

M fucks F senseless.

 

[Carnevil9]

After the deed is done, the husbands pulls out his wallet and asks her. "How much?"
The server is stunned, how could this man think she's a prostitute? She feels insulted but then sees the large stack of bills in his wallet. "200" she replied before realizing what she has just done.
"Oh that's cheap, I'll give you another 100 on top, we really enjoyed it thanks."
The server can't believe that the man considered 200 cheap. She wonders how much could she make if....

I have a story sort of like that. A poor college student (girl) is accosted by a drunk in a laundromat, thinking she is a prostitute. When she refuses to have sex with him, he jerks off in front of her, then pays her twenty bucks. After that, she decides that maybe that isn't such a bad way to make some extra cash!

 

[BiteMyLip]

A fantasy I RP’d with an online contact years ago, that I will probably write a version of here soon. Feel free to use the idea though - happy for others to interpret it how they want too.

Couple exploring some light BDSM in the hotel room. F shares secret fantasy of her being subject of a voyeur.

M has F tied to a chair wearing lingerie, legs spread open. M calls for champagne to be delivered to the room.

Knock at door, F still tied to chair half naked assumes M will accept the champagne but opens the door and allows young M server to wheel in a trolley with ice bucket, glasses etc. F is torn between panic and excitement.

Server sees F tied up. Unsure what to do. Asks if she is in distress, needs help, gets flustered but also incredibly turned on.

M reassures server this is part of F’s desire to be seen. M asks server if he wants to stay for a glass of champagne. Server is torn about what to do. Says yes. F incredibly turned on at being exhibited like this.

Server visibly aroused. M seduces him into playing with his cock in front of F. Server does so while M makes F suck him off still tied to chair. Server cums on himself, makes excuses and leaves.

M fucks F senseless.

Here is my version that I wrote:

https://www.literotica.com/s/room-service-76

 

[Rob_Royale]

Here is my version that I wrote:

https://www.literotica.com/s/room-service-76

I'll check it out.

 

[GlennJenko]

Damn, guy wrote a whole story while I'm still in the planning/early writing phase. Kudos, will check it out!

 

[BiteMyLip]

Damn, guy wrote a whole story while I'm still in the planning/early writing phase. Kudos, will check it out!

Haha. As I said, that story has been in me for years, waiting to come out again. Look forward to reading yours.

 

[GlennJenko]

I'm nearing the end of writing it now. Thanks again for all the ideas, they really did help. I still don't have a title for it, though, which is kinda frustrating me.

The only internal question I have to answer now is if I want to just post it, or wait til April for the On the Job story event, as this would be perfect for that.

I also am thinking of potentially turning it into a series. I had an idea for another story knocking around my head that I think can fit into Holly's story. While I am still interested in exploring Holly's relationship with Zane and Talia (the couple), I have what I think is a solid plan for a purely lesbian story, too.

 

[Andreas_Kreuz]

Somewhere in the hints to becoming a prolific writer, it says: Publish. Don't try to make your 1st (or 4th) story perfect. Gather feedback and incorporate it in the next story.
I find publishing frees my mind. And also mulling over a story in some cases destroyed the story, because I started to mess up things.

Do you have someone to proofread the story?