idea i had but am having hard time writing.

[Moose1989]

A freshman in college feminine beta geek type (Adam) is a tutor for the college and ends up being assigned the tutor for his old middle/high school bully (Joey) who's a dominant brutish type Alpha and throughout the story the bully begins to forcibly feminize him in their first incounter Joey tells Adam to call him daddy Joey and Adam refuses which results in a severe spanking that leaves Adam crying and begging daddy Joey to please forgive him and through the story progression Joey introduces chastity, crossdressing ,female hormones, a name change legally to amy as it more appropriate and sexual acts that humiliate and break Adam/Amy into a submissive sissy who worships daddy Joey ending in her dropping out of college to focus on daddy Joe's needs and wants as his feminized sissy slave.

 

[TheWritingGroup]

Not my kink, but in general:

Don't try to write a story. That's a very scary thing for your first try. Instead, write one scene. For the outline you have here, you could write just the spanking scene, for instance. That might even be too big for your first try. Write just part of that scene, say the dialog (what people say). Just write the words Joey and Adam say.

Once you have that, add another part, say how it feels. Is this story told by Amy, after the transformation? Have her tell the reader how it felt.

Then add another part, say describing the look on Joey's face.

Once you have that scene written, you can work on another one.

Good luck.

-Eddie

 

[Rob_Royale]

Eddie's right. Stories are hard. You've got a plot, character backgrounds, and a setting, that you have to work into the story so that it's not a huge info dump. That takes practice. You need an engaging intro-beginning and a satisfying ending. It's very daunting.

So do a single scene story. You're idea isn't my thing, but It can be incorporated here no problem. Just do Joey and Adams first encounter. Don't worry about the story progression, keep their background brief but describe the location in detail. Bring the reader into that location. Describe their personalities through the dialogue. Josh is confident and authoritative, while Adam is nervous and a little frightened.

There will be plenty of dialogue in this situation and describe what's going through Adam's mind as he finally submits to the better man.

This is enough for a story. 2.5-4.5k words, get yourself published and see what the readers think. A second chapter can let you flesh out their world a little more and let the readers know that there is more coming.

It's very much a baby steps kinda thing. I recommend the free version of Grammarly to help you get spelling and grammar sorted. Good luck.

 

[TheWritingGroup]

You could just write how it feels for Adam when he's spanked, in first person. "I could feel his knee digging into my belly. It made me feel so soft. I could punch Joey in the stomach and he wouldn't even flinch. Just lying on his knee was enough to hurt me." Like Rob says above, just that short scene would be something you could publish here.

-Eddie

 

[Moose1989]

Eddie's right. Stories are hard. You've got a plot, character backgrounds, and a setting, that you have to work into the story so that it's not a huge info dump. That takes practice. You need an engaging intro-beginning and a satisfying ending. It's very daunting.

So do a single scene story. You're idea isn't my thing, but It can be incorporated here no problem. Just do Joey and Adams first encounter. Don't worry about the story progression, keep their background brief but describe the location in detail. Bring the reader into that location. Describe their personalities through the dialogue. Josh is confident and authoritative, while Adam is nervous and a little frightened.

There will be plenty of dialogue in this situation and describe what's going through Adam's mind as he finally submits to the better man.

This is enough for a story. 2.5-4.5k words, get yourself published and see what the readers think. A second chapter can let you flesh out their world a little more and let the readers know that there is more coming.

It's very much a baby steps kinda thing. I recommend the free version of Grammarly to help you get spelling and grammar sorted. Good luck.

Thank you this information is very helpful I'll put your suggestions to good use I really appreciate your feedback thanks you again.