Writing a sub wife story - BDSM themed- Need Editor Help

[hellothere3]

Hello, I'm in the midst of improving my writing skills, and need help with story continuity and editing. Feel free to take a look at my previous work, however, I don't think they're great, and am working on my writing.

Feel free to reach out, thanks in advance

 

[Andreas_Kreuz]

You have a PM.