ShelbyDawn57
Neo - Philocalist
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- Feb 28, 2019
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I'm working on a story. Duh, aren't we all?
I'm fully aware that one of my dastardly deeds is run on sentences. I'm noticing that more often than not, the culprit is the word 'and'.
I find if I remove it, replacing it with a period and a capitalization, my writing is cleaner and more crisp.
Curious what similar things you might have noticed about your writing. Since this is an Authors hangout, I thought bringing them up might assist writers struggling with form.
I'm fully aware that one of my dastardly deeds is run on sentences. I'm noticing that more often than not, the culprit is the word 'and'.
I find if I remove it, replacing it with a period and a capitalization, my writing is cleaner and more crisp.
Curious what similar things you might have noticed about your writing. Since this is an Authors hangout, I thought bringing them up might assist writers struggling with form.