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So I'm wanting to write some stories about catfights in which one of the girls completely dominates the other and goes on to humiliate the girl by stripping her naked. The dominating girl also further embarrasses her by doing things such as mocking or spanking her.
But I'm not so sure about how to describe the fight and depict all of the action and the various movements and positions without it being boring. It's mainly a wrestling with some slapping and some pulling of the hair.
So does anyone know of some good stories here that fit my description. I would like to see how other writers handle the subject. Any opinions or suggestions?
For those interested, the story will look a bit like this:
A cute young girl, 18 years old, is mouthing off to an older woman in the mall. The older woman is 40, or maybe 50, so the arrogant brat does not think much of her and freely teases her about her looks without fear of retaliation. But she is soon proven wrong; this lady is a real fighter. The older lady wrestles her to the ground and strips her naked, pulling her sundress over her head and stripping off her underwear. A crowd gathers around them, encircling the fight and cheering on the victorious lady, who waves the young girl's stripped garments over her head.
The young girl then makes her way to her feet naked and in tears, unable to escape her opponent because of the crowd blocking her exit. The lady begins shouting orders at the girl and she soon realizes that she is at this lady's mercy and must do as she says if she wishes to leave any time soon.
The lady bends the girl over her knee and proceeds to spank her big round ass while the girl begs for an end to the humiliation. Then with her cheeks sufficiently reddened, she is ordered to stand up and take back the insults she spewed at her older opponent, especially those insults made about the shape of her body. She is ordered to use the same insults on herself and she complies, calling herself chubby and saying that she has a fat ass. The woman says that she finds this appropriate since now her goods are actually on full display and the crowd can accurately judge.
The girl is then ordered to get on her hands and knees and kiss her opponents feet. After this the girl then begs for her clothes back, but the lady instead picks up her clothes and throws them into the crowd. The girl starts crying and the lady says"this is what happens when you mess with a real woman. Now get lost." She turns the girl around and gives her one last slap to her backside before sending her off. The girl runs down the mall naked and in tears.
Basically, I am aiming to write very mean-spirited catfight stories in which two girls hate each other and go at it. Then in the end its all glory for the winner and pure humiliation for the loser. Thoughts, anyone?
But I'm not so sure about how to describe the fight and depict all of the action and the various movements and positions without it being boring. It's mainly a wrestling with some slapping and some pulling of the hair.
So does anyone know of some good stories here that fit my description. I would like to see how other writers handle the subject. Any opinions or suggestions?
For those interested, the story will look a bit like this:
A cute young girl, 18 years old, is mouthing off to an older woman in the mall. The older woman is 40, or maybe 50, so the arrogant brat does not think much of her and freely teases her about her looks without fear of retaliation. But she is soon proven wrong; this lady is a real fighter. The older lady wrestles her to the ground and strips her naked, pulling her sundress over her head and stripping off her underwear. A crowd gathers around them, encircling the fight and cheering on the victorious lady, who waves the young girl's stripped garments over her head.
The young girl then makes her way to her feet naked and in tears, unable to escape her opponent because of the crowd blocking her exit. The lady begins shouting orders at the girl and she soon realizes that she is at this lady's mercy and must do as she says if she wishes to leave any time soon.
The lady bends the girl over her knee and proceeds to spank her big round ass while the girl begs for an end to the humiliation. Then with her cheeks sufficiently reddened, she is ordered to stand up and take back the insults she spewed at her older opponent, especially those insults made about the shape of her body. She is ordered to use the same insults on herself and she complies, calling herself chubby and saying that she has a fat ass. The woman says that she finds this appropriate since now her goods are actually on full display and the crowd can accurately judge.
The girl is then ordered to get on her hands and knees and kiss her opponents feet. After this the girl then begs for her clothes back, but the lady instead picks up her clothes and throws them into the crowd. The girl starts crying and the lady says"this is what happens when you mess with a real woman. Now get lost." She turns the girl around and gives her one last slap to her backside before sending her off. The girl runs down the mall naked and in tears.
Basically, I am aiming to write very mean-spirited catfight stories in which two girls hate each other and go at it. Then in the end its all glory for the winner and pure humiliation for the loser. Thoughts, anyone?
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