Story: "A Quiet Little Town"

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A journalist hears about a sleepy little village in the English countryside that's full of sex crazed women, and goes to investigate, hoping to write a story on it to make himself the big bucks. He soons finds that a town full of Nymphos is too maybe much for one man to take on...

Deepest Thread is currently 15, and I'm trying to expand it some. Had some great threads from Bobrt, but a few more contributors would be ace. Also, I'm pretty new to chyoo still, and erotica in general, so any feedback on what I'm doing right or wrong would be appreciated.

http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.cover/7657

 

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Been adding quite a bit to this, with some much appreciated help from others. I'll try to add a continuation of any thread that gets useful feedback, and would be happy to add a thread to the story of anyone who adds one to this.

 

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updated!

Quite a few updates in a few different storylines, some great stuff from velios. Current deepest thread is 24 deep!

I'd love to get some feedback on this if you've read/played it.