Series Idea: The Cursed Sex Life of Marcy Mackenzie

[Unblemished]

My curse as an author is that I'm constantly jumping from one idea to the next, writing a bit for one story, then a bit for another, etc. At the minute I'm writing a sequel for a story of nine (which the board has helped with) and uploading my old stories from elsewhere onto Lit (well, the ones that meet a minimum level of quality, lol), but I still dabble with other things.

And one of those other projects I've been playing with for a while is The Cursed Sex Life of Marcy Mackenzie. It might not have wide appeal, I don't know, but I like the idea anyway. It would consist of a bunch of related but standalone tales, mostly humorous, set in the life of the titular lady.

The basic joke is that Marcy Mackenzie is hot. Marcy is extremely hot, and very, very, very good in bed. The problem is that she's so irresistible that most guys can't actually handle her, and even experienced studs find themselves cumming early like virgin schoolboys when they try to fuck her. The series would be about Marcy's desperate quest to have a good sex life and get a decent fuck for once.

The stories would be mostly comedy, with a bit of humiliation as she takes cocky guys down a peg or two, and a snarky look at sex which isn't porno-amazing and mindblowing every time. There's a lot of bad sex in the world, sad but true. And of course she'd sometimes get what she wants - I'm not a total sadist.

Admittedly her little problem could probably be solved with a decent sex toy or three, but some people just crave the real thing and anyway, it would spoil the joke.

Character-wise, I imagine Marcy is a bit jaded and has developed a taste for humiliating guys who deserve it, what with all the frustration she must have, but is still dreaming of that perfect fuck. Backstory wise I figure she had good sex early in her love life, so she knows it can happen, but the men who can do it are few and far between - I have a story in mind for how it happened, tentatively titled Marcy's First Time. I envisage her as a curvy redhead.

Example stories could be:

She gets with an extremely arrogant guy who thinks he's gods gift to women, only to find he's bitten off more than he can chew.

She becomes a trophy wife, but her husband gets jealous when he can't satisfy her.

She ends up getting a payout in the divorce and goes on holiday, where a stranger actually has what it takes and totally rocks her world...but she doesn't get his number and never sees him again.

A gang bang where she just jumps from one dick to the next when they cum.

She has a threesome with a husband-wife couple and they just about manage to satisfy her, but the wife gets jealous and the guy intimidated by how fast and hard she makes him finish, so it never happens again.

A guy actually puts in the work and manages to please her, and is rewarded when her jaded, mocking persona absolutely crumbles and she worships his cock like he's a hero. Might have to be the last one, haha.

A lover, maybe another woman, makes her climax with oral, but she can't stop craving dick.

Etc.

Any thoughts on the idea, any suggestions, any interest?

 

[gunhilltrain]

One solution - I've used this gimmick myself in stories - is for her to make the guy come first (either manually or orally) and then go for penetration. Even young guys should have more stamina the second time around. Or the third time around, if that is necessary.

Ideally, he should also stimulate her too, ideally orally and ideally all the way to an orgasm. It doesn't have to be simultaneous; outside of porn, people have trouble coordinating mutual pleasure.

I know, I just wrecked your story idea. I know it's supposed to be a joke, but . . .

 

[Unblemished]

One solution - I've used this gimmick myself in stories - is for her to make the guy come first (either manually or orally) and then go for penetration. Even young guys should have more stamina the second time around. Or the third time around, if that is necessary.

Ideally, he should also stimulate her too, ideally orally and ideally all the way to an orgasm. It doesn't have to be simultaneous; outside of porn, people have trouble coordinating mutual pleasure.

I know, I just wrecked your story idea. I know it's supposed to be a joke, but . . .

Haha, its fine, I know about tricks like that*. I also know that some people struggle even despite said tricks. The idea is that even people who normally have no problems fail with her anyway, because of the whole 'so sexy it's a curse' gag. Is being that much of a sex goddess 100% realistic? Perhaps not, but crazier things happen in erotica.

A guy actually successfully doing all that might well be the 'last story' mentioned in the ideas, heh.

*I once wrote a cuckolding fic (not on here) which literally described a bunch of ways to fix this exact problem. The issue there was that the guy was too proud to admit he needed the help, hence the cuckolding part...

 

[AlinaX]

Maybe the curse is that the more she knows and likes a guy, the less able he is to perform and satisfy her. Thus a hook-up with a stranger in a nightclub toilet can be seriously hot, but dating is a recipe for bad sex. Indeed, being in a relationship can lead to such utter frustration that being paid for sex with some guy she wouldn't normally look at actually doesn't seem so bad.

 

[Unblemished]

Maybe the curse is that the more she knows and likes a guy, the less able he is to perform and satisfy her. Thus a hook-up with a stranger in a nightclub toilet can be seriously hot, but dating is a recipe for bad sex. Indeed, being in a relationship can lead to such utter frustration that being paid for sex with some guy she wouldn't normally look at actually doesn't seem so bad.

Some good ideas here. I wasn't planning on having the curse be quite that literal and supernatural but the themes you're mentioning could definitely show up: liking someone but knowing there's no real satisfaction to be had with them, throwing yourself at someone you'd otherwise hate if it gives you a chance at pleasure.

I imagine Marcy is probably quite scared of catching feelings.

 

[gunhilltrain]

Maybe the curse is that the more she knows and likes a guy, the less able he is to perform and satisfy her. Thus a hook-up with a stranger in a nightclub toilet can be seriously hot, but dating is a recipe for bad sex. Indeed, being in a relationship can lead to such utter frustration that being paid for sex with some guy she wouldn't normally look at actually doesn't seem so bad.

Actually, that scenario likely happens more than one may think - I mean hook-ups and dating.

 

[gunhilltrain]

Haha, its fine, I know about tricks like that*. I also know that some people struggle even despite said tricks. The idea is that even people who normally have no problems fail with her anyway, because of the whole 'so sexy it's a curse' gag. Is being that much of a sex goddess 100% realistic? Perhaps not, but crazier things happen in erotica.

A guy actually successfully doing all that might well be the 'last story' mentioned in the ideas, heh.

*I once wrote a cuckolding fic (not on here) which literally described a bunch of ways to fix this exact problem. The issue there was that the guy was too proud to admit he needed the help, hence the cuckolding part...

There are all sorts of sexual dysfunction problems and all sorts of people with different ways to deal with it. Marcy (oh, her name is in the title), being scared of "catching feelings:" that happens to both men and women.

 

[gunhilltrain]

"My curse as an author is that I'm constantly jumping from one idea to the next, writing a bit for one story, then a bit for another, etc."

Well, you've already posted five stories and they've done pretty well. It's okay to dabble a little bit. It's also okay to write something that just doesn't work. Keep the file anyway; you might get back to it.

Try not to write too many stories at the same time. Some of us can do more than that in the same time frame, but if you are having problems, try to stay with one. Make notes about the other ideas for the moment. In fact, what I do is start a file with just a few lines about the proposed plot. I usually put it in a separate folder. Then, eventually, I may get to it, but also, maybe not.

 

[NewOldGuy77]

A gang bang where she just jumps from one dick to the next when they cum.

Sounds like Lisa Sparkxxx the gangbang world record holder! (919 in 24 hours)

 

[gunhilltrain]

Sounds like Lisa Sparkxxx the gangbang world record holder! (919 in 24 hours)

Lisa Sparkxxx has been getting increasingly chunky recently. Not that I judge people that much on their looks, but she's crossed some kind of weight-gain line.

 

[NewOldGuy77]

Lisa Sparkxxx has been getting increasingly chunky recently. Not that I judge people that much on their looks, but she's crossed some kind of weight-gain line.

Age. Happens to us all. She set the record 15 years ago, 2007. Which gives me a story idea about a retired porn star...

 

[gunhilltrain]

Also, not surprisingly, without makeup, she looks like the lady making my sandwiches at Wawa. Again, I'm no Chad at 67, but she doesn't seem to have much going for her beyond her 919-cock gangbang. Hope she took a few naps during that.

Lisa Sparkxxx

 

[gunhilltrain]

Age. Happens to us all. She set the record 15 years ago, 2007. Which gives me a story idea about a retired porn star...

You could have her entire life cycle. Starts as a teen hooker, graduates to call-girl status, maturates into porn, then MILF/"mature" porn. and finally - God help her, granny porn to supplement her social security checks. For some reason, women in those professions rarely save much no matter how much money they make.

And no, it's not just age. She's doing something wrong to gain that many pounds.

 

[NewOldGuy77]

granny porn to supplement her social security checks.

I LOVE this!

 

[gunhilltrain]

I LOVE this!

It does exist. I'm not saying that old people shouldn't have sex if they wish, but there is something off about them working in porn. For one thing, I suspect the economic pressures are more intense on them as opposed to younger people. Well, you could argue that all porn, prostitution, stripping, and so forth is based on the cash nexus. I guess all jobs are that way, but as one of my characters says (she is a prostitute), "There is a big difference between paying someone to cut your hair and paying them to perform a sex act on you."

 

[Unblemished]

Sounds like Lisa Sparkxxx the gangbang world record holder! (919 in 24 hours)

...fuck me running, that's a lot of dicks.

I think even my fictional cursed sex queen would be begging for mercy after nearly a thousand of the goddamn things.

 

[gunhilltrain]

Oh yeah, the quote is right in here, a few paragraphs down.

Nora Turns a Trick

This is in the same building as "Amelia of Finley Hall," a story I referred to in the other thread.

 

[JaxRhapsody]

Lisa Sparkxxx has been getting increasingly chunky recently. Not that I judge people that much on their looks, but she's crossed some kind of weight-gain line.

Pfft. Looks fine, to me.

 

[gunhilltrain]

Pfft. Looks fine, to me.

Difficult to say. I often like heavier women, but where do I draw the line? Even I don't know. It probably has something to do with factors beyond physical appearance.

 

[JaxRhapsody]

Difficult to say. I often like heavier women, but where do I draw the line? Even I don't know. It probably has something to do with factors beyond physical appearance.

I draw the line at hygiene and fuckability.

 

[gunhilltrain]

I draw the line at hygiene and fuckability.

Most people do draw that line, but a few don't. There are TikTok videos about women who rub their genital fluids on their bodies as a form of perfume. That crosses my line, although I can't explain why it bothers me if it's on her arm but not if it's on my own fingers. Inconsistent, I know - probably has something to do with being an inevitable result of sex versus deliberately spreading it around to go on a date. Most people do wash up within a few minutes, I suppose.

Apparently, it's called "vabbing."

 

[JaxRhapsody]

Most people do draw that line, but a few don't. There are TikTok videos about women who rub their genital fluids on their bodies as a form of perfume. That crosses my line, although I can't explain why it bothers me if it's on her arm but not if it's on my own fingers. Inconsistent, I know - probably has something to do with being an inevitable result of sex versus deliberately spreading it around to go on a date. Most people do wash up within a few minutes, I suppose.

Apparently, it's called "vabbing."

I saw a youtube video talking about that. I have my doubts it works. What I meant was; if shes too fat to fuck is my limit, and the poor hygiene of being bedridden, or nearly immobile, even if they are fuckable.

 

[sirhugs]

I love discussng the merits of enough to hold onto, and what is too much as much as the next dirty old man, but we seem to have drifted away from talking about Story Ideas here into something more suited for... maybe the Fetishes forum?
Someone want to drag us back to Story Ideas please?
FWIW, I agree that the curvier Ms Sparkes still looks like a great comfort ride to me. Maybe a story about her being insecure about the weight gain and seeking validation?

 

[gunhilltrain]

I saw a youtube video talking about that. I have my doubts it works. What I meant was; if shes too fat to fuck is my limit, and the poor hygiene of being bedridden, or nearly immobile, even if they are fuckable.

It was a very small sample size. I can't even find it now, but I haven't looked that intensely. The woman with the most video time had never done it but she hated the idea. There were maybe two others, and they seemed vague about whatever success they had achieved with it. I admit that I had never heard of it before, and I thought I had heard about everything. Obviously, I haven't,

 

[gunhilltrain]

I love discussng the merits of enough to hold onto, and what is too much as much as the next dirty old man, but we seem to have drifted away from talking about Story Ideas here into something more suited for... maybe the Fetishes forum?
Someone want to drag us back to Story Ideas please?
FWIW, I agree that the curvier Ms Sparkes still looks like a great comfort ride to me. Maybe a story about her being insecure about the weight gain and seeking validation?

Hi sirhugs:

I think we just about covered everything with the Marcy Mackenzie concept by this point. Should we start a new thread about another idea?