PatCarrington
fingering the buttons
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- Jul 24, 2004
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it seems to me that an item that is missing at this poetry board, one that seems to be present at others, is a thread where a poem can be placed for INTENSE examination. where the poem can be torn down and critiqued with no gloves on, word by word, phrase by phrase, thought by thought. where a poem can have the shit kicked out of it, and be better off for it. who can't use a good ass-kicking every now and then?
people try to do just that in stray threads. trent dutch has a poem up now. eve had her gorgeous "Bread" up last week. but on those threads, punches get pulled, because no one is sure how harsh critique and suggestion would be taken.
i think we need a thread where you know going in that you can free yourself of all restraint and just let loose. and any poet who puts a poem up knows exactly what he/she is in for.
why not give these poems a thread of their own, where the poet can get what they are looking for?
one poem at a time.
a thread where no flirting, licking, or fucking are allowed or tolerated. there are plenty of places for those things here.
a thread where you do not come for blind praise and ego-stroking. (they are also here in abundance if you need them).
right now, i take the poetry i want seriously analyzed and do it privately here, in pm's. but that method, by its nature, is restrictive, because it is a 2-party communication rather than a free-share of ideas, where one thought can geometrically lead to countless others.
i don't know if this will fly, but i'm going to give it a go.
i will put up a poem below that i would like intense comment on. i wrote it yesterday, i think it has potential, and i want it to be battered and cut, and come out prettier than it went in. i want to do whatever i can to bring that potential out.
what better way to do it than expose it for examination?
patrick
people try to do just that in stray threads. trent dutch has a poem up now. eve had her gorgeous "Bread" up last week. but on those threads, punches get pulled, because no one is sure how harsh critique and suggestion would be taken.
i think we need a thread where you know going in that you can free yourself of all restraint and just let loose. and any poet who puts a poem up knows exactly what he/she is in for.
why not give these poems a thread of their own, where the poet can get what they are looking for?
one poem at a time.
a thread where no flirting, licking, or fucking are allowed or tolerated. there are plenty of places for those things here.
a thread where you do not come for blind praise and ego-stroking. (they are also here in abundance if you need them).
right now, i take the poetry i want seriously analyzed and do it privately here, in pm's. but that method, by its nature, is restrictive, because it is a 2-party communication rather than a free-share of ideas, where one thought can geometrically lead to countless others.
i don't know if this will fly, but i'm going to give it a go.
i will put up a poem below that i would like intense comment on. i wrote it yesterday, i think it has potential, and i want it to be battered and cut, and come out prettier than it went in. i want to do whatever i can to bring that potential out.
what better way to do it than expose it for examination?
patrick