LiverpoolMaster
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I've already written this up as a story but would welcome any thoughts on changes.
In this dysfunctional family, Dad and teenage daughter - as the reader discovers only late on in a twist-in-the-tail conclusion - are already engaged in incest. Mum is frustrated sexually by the consequent, ongoing lack of attention from hubby.
The story starts with a phone call from the apple-of-her-eye, body-builder teenage son who is attending a regional weightlifting championships event a hundred miles away from home. All public transport has been cancelled because of worsening weather and he can't get back. She leaps in the family car to go and retrieve him without hesitation... or proper preparation.
After picking him up from the event, they make their way back and stop half way at a motorway services area for coffee and a bite to eat. Traffic is light given the weather, and the place is sparsely attended. After a toilet break, son makes his way back to their table to find Mum being jostled and pawed at by some semi-drunk football supporters. With his muscular build and fiery temper, he makes short work of them and they retreat... but not before Mum's top/blouse has been torn, her bra snapped and her breasts make a momentary appearance. She of course has been dazzled by his courage and knight-to-the-rescue manliness.
Following this incident they both feel like leaving but debate whether they ought to stay in the safety of the centre as they can see it's finally started snowing quite heavily. It's only a forty mile run to home - they decide to chance it. After only ten miles along the motorway they have to pull in to the side because the conditions have become just too bad. Snow starts drifting and piling up against the car. They have to huddle together for warmth on the back seat. Owing to Mum's lack of weather-savvy, there's only one thin blanket to cover them. Desperately clinging to each other, Mum's top comes adrift once more against her heroic boy's broad chest...
In this dysfunctional family, Dad and teenage daughter - as the reader discovers only late on in a twist-in-the-tail conclusion - are already engaged in incest. Mum is frustrated sexually by the consequent, ongoing lack of attention from hubby.
The story starts with a phone call from the apple-of-her-eye, body-builder teenage son who is attending a regional weightlifting championships event a hundred miles away from home. All public transport has been cancelled because of worsening weather and he can't get back. She leaps in the family car to go and retrieve him without hesitation... or proper preparation.
After picking him up from the event, they make their way back and stop half way at a motorway services area for coffee and a bite to eat. Traffic is light given the weather, and the place is sparsely attended. After a toilet break, son makes his way back to their table to find Mum being jostled and pawed at by some semi-drunk football supporters. With his muscular build and fiery temper, he makes short work of them and they retreat... but not before Mum's top/blouse has been torn, her bra snapped and her breasts make a momentary appearance. She of course has been dazzled by his courage and knight-to-the-rescue manliness.
Following this incident they both feel like leaving but debate whether they ought to stay in the safety of the centre as they can see it's finally started snowing quite heavily. It's only a forty mile run to home - they decide to chance it. After only ten miles along the motorway they have to pull in to the side because the conditions have become just too bad. Snow starts drifting and piling up against the car. They have to huddle together for warmth on the back seat. Owing to Mum's lack of weather-savvy, there's only one thin blanket to cover them. Desperately clinging to each other, Mum's top comes adrift once more against her heroic boy's broad chest...
