TigerTales
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- Aug 11, 2000
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Repeating to myself... "feedback is good... feedback is good"
Hi folks, I've gotten a little feedback about my second story "Fantasy Island" and while some of it was good, some of it was a bit harsh. I'm told I write like some guys make love... one orgasm and then I go to sleep. Since I'm working on a new story, I'd like to make sure that I improve in that area. The two stories I've published here both concern unlikely sexual partners. I guess my focus has been the conquest or the actual bringing together of the participants.
I can use my imagination and find all sorts of interesting twists to second, third, and fourth couplings.. <hehehe… pausing here to enjoy the imaginations... ahem...> I just wonder if, by the time I set up the story and get the participants together, my stories wouldn't be too long for most readers? Put another way... is longer really better?
All feedback is welcome!
Hi folks, I've gotten a little feedback about my second story "Fantasy Island" and while some of it was good, some of it was a bit harsh. I'm told I write like some guys make love... one orgasm and then I go to sleep. Since I'm working on a new story, I'd like to make sure that I improve in that area. The two stories I've published here both concern unlikely sexual partners. I guess my focus has been the conquest or the actual bringing together of the participants.
I can use my imagination and find all sorts of interesting twists to second, third, and fourth couplings.. <hehehe… pausing here to enjoy the imaginations... ahem...> I just wonder if, by the time I set up the story and get the participants together, my stories wouldn't be too long for most readers? Put another way... is longer really better?
All feedback is welcome!