Looking for a Beta Reader for Fantasy/Loving Wives story

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I'm a (relatively) new author with over a dozen stories published on Literotica. I'm not a writing major, and more of a geek learning to write erotica.

Over the past year and a half, I've posted stories a "Loving Wives" series and some others which always include my favorite characters, Ted and Jan, a swinger couple.

Literotica has a "Writers Challenge" for posting stories in October 2022, the stories to be based on charms from a magic shop type premise (this will be season 3 of the challenge).

My story is about my favorite couple (Jan and Ted, swinger couple) getting caught in a problem of a witch creating a "hot wife" type anklet. I believe this to be a unique take of a "hot wife charm bracelet" plot. I would like to find beta readers to provide plot and writing style feedback for a story of about 10K words.

Message me via e-mail or alerts to my profile or post a contact method here if you are interested in reviewing an MS Word version of this story before October. (This is already at almost 10K words, and IMO, ready for review.)
 
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I’m always happy to make suggestions as a now published mainstream author. I’m not an editor, but a writer in different genres. I’m always open to help out.
 
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