I'm a long-time Literotica reader and I've had a story I've been mulling over to write for nearly a decade. In order to get into a habit of writing regularly, I decided to start this spin-off of a character that doesn't appear until much later in the main story.
This is the first chapter and, looking over it, Is see that my transition partitions don't appear between paragraphs (the *********** that signal a change in scene). So, if you run across that before I can edit it and get confused, just know I'm aware of the issue and will figure out how to address it soon.
Other than that, I really just hope this grabs you and you can give me feedback on quality, editorial issues (grammar, sentence structure, etc.)
Thanks in advance for your time.
https://www.literotica.com/s/a-lady-qandisa-tail-last-rites
This is the first chapter and, looking over it, Is see that my transition partitions don't appear between paragraphs (the *********** that signal a change in scene). So, if you run across that before I can edit it and get confused, just know I'm aware of the issue and will figure out how to address it soon.
Other than that, I really just hope this grabs you and you can give me feedback on quality, editorial issues (grammar, sentence structure, etc.)
Thanks in advance for your time.
https://www.literotica.com/s/a-lady-qandisa-tail-last-rites
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