Priscilla_June
Fanciful busybody
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Hey all! This may be pre-mature but a story of mine was posted today and I just wanted to hear some objective feedback. It started off with three 5 star reviews so I was quite pleased, but since then I got a bunch of either 1 or 2 star reviews.
So that begs the question in my mind, did my story suck or did I catch folks who hated the premise? It was posted in Fetish so I thought I would be immune from the LW trolls, but I would really love your honest feedback to be sure, I guess I feel prematurely discouraged because of it, since I felt it was a really good piece of my work.
Themes involved are pregnancy and male dominance primarily (i thought I advertised that up front), hence why I suspect some of this is folks who dont like the premise.
https://literotica.com/s/maternity-paper-chase
Would love to hear what you think!
So that begs the question in my mind, did my story suck or did I catch folks who hated the premise? It was posted in Fetish so I thought I would be immune from the LW trolls, but I would really love your honest feedback to be sure, I guess I feel prematurely discouraged because of it, since I felt it was a really good piece of my work.
Themes involved are pregnancy and male dominance primarily (i thought I advertised that up front), hence why I suspect some of this is folks who dont like the premise.
https://literotica.com/s/maternity-paper-chase
Would love to hear what you think!
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