UnderscoreRedhead
Casual Writer
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- Dec 31, 2021
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Hey all! I finished my first story a little while ago and I would love some feedback.
If you’re up for a longer read, all five parts (posted in four) are up to read, but all constructive criticism is welcome!
Reading it again now, I think it definitely gets better as it goes on, I did more editing on the last parts. What are your thoughts? How’s the pacing? Too much story? Not enough? *Warning, contained themes of NonCon* Thanks!!
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4/5
If you’re up for a longer read, all five parts (posted in four) are up to read, but all constructive criticism is welcome!
Reading it again now, I think it definitely gets better as it goes on, I did more editing on the last parts. What are your thoughts? How’s the pacing? Too much story? Not enough? *Warning, contained themes of NonCon* Thanks!!
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4/5