Don’t get it right, get it written…until you have to get it right?

[Rob_Royale]

but to be honest the world really doesn't need more bad Star wars fan-fiction

Challenge accepted.

 

[intim8]

I find I edit my sex scenes less than plot-related stuff. It’s normally typos and “d’oh! you just had the FMC take her panties off twice.” They seldom get the structural overhauls that plot stuff does.

Em

So the edit involves explaining that she has two pairs of panties on?

 

[Emilymcplugger]

So the edit involves explaining that she has two pairs of panties on?

Sounds logical to me.

In an early draft of my current story I had a character remove her panties then a few paragraphs later stick her hand down the front of them.