beta read a 13k nonhuman/SF&F crime and punishment story?

joy_of_cooking

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Title: The Summoned Help
Description: Old gangster worries about new girl and what she represents
Category: probably my SF&F debut

This one has zero femdom shoe fetish content! Not even self-deprecating cameos! I'm so proud of myself.

Ahem.

I'm usually pretty good with spelling, punctuation, and grammar. Looking more for you to read through with no especial care while jotting down notes about your reactions to the plot, character, setting, etc.

Send me your email by direct message if I don't have it already. I usually share a google doc or attach an msword file to an email.

No urgency. We both have lives outside writing.

Thanks!
 
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