TheseLegs
Walker of the Walk
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- Oct 4, 2020
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I agree so much, I feel like I pretty much just said the same thing.For one thing, it seems like what you've written are a related series of standalone stories. There are some drawbacks to this, because it means that any subtle worldbuilding you did over there does not translate for readers over here. It definitely doesn't translate for me, who is just reading the one that you asked about.
I am really not so much about scores, etc, and I was being a little facetious about the 2.2 in the original ask. I am just trying to have fun and get some of my writing read. I thought this review might be fun, and hoped it would focus more criticism of the writing aspects, style and whatnot, that your reviews often include. This topic is not fun for everyone, clearly not for you, but since I reached around Khei's age the thought of pregnancy is arousing. I suuuuuuuuuuuper don't actually want to be pregnant so I sometimes write about women who do. Is this a pregnancy fetish, or just biology? Either way, I'm going to stay away from Loving Wives. Following category descriptions just isn't worth it.
Thanks again for your time.