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The lights dimmed; the orchestra played, Ben embraced Martha, caressing her back and ass. She closed her eyes, surrendering to the alcohol and music and his dick pressed against her belly. Her nipples blossomed; she tongued his ear; Cupid’s dew collected on her panties.
“Everyone is looking.”
“Fuck them.”

I found OGG's article about writing 50 word stories. A nice challenge.

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Martha was in the bathroom when Ben awoke. He saw her image in the mirror, dressed in sheer red panties with a matching bra. He couldn't see her nipples but tried. He pretended to be asleep when he realized he might get caught looking. She made him hard.
 
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Well done, James.

I didn't originate the idea of 50-word stories but I was one of the first to use them on Literotica. You need fifteen of them in one post to meet Lit's 750 word minimum or you could post them as poetry.

For those who haven't read my prize-winning How-To: How To Write a Fifty-Word Story

Og
 
I think I came aboard about the time the flash fiction fad ended.
 
OGG

I like prose compression. The words are forced to do the work.
 
It was a dark and stormy night.

"I’m fucked,” muttered Bruce Decker, rogue meteorologist. Bad enough to have predicted clear skies; his assertion that it wouldn't get dark tonight would make Decker a laughing stock.

The phone rang. Storm Center Ten. It was ringing when Decker vanished into the deluge.
 
shereads said:
It was a dark and stormy night.

"I’m fucked,” muttered Bruce Decker, rogue meteorologist. Bad enough to have predicted clear skies; his assertion that it wouldn't get dark tonight would make Decker a laughing stock.

The phone rang. Storm Center Ten. It was ringing when Decker vanished into the deluge.
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That made my panties fill with Cupid's dew.
 
Erika pushed Monica against the wall; Monica offered no resistence. Monica's dark hair fell across her face in long beautiful dark waves as her left leg cocked up and wrapped around Erika's hips. She wore no panties. Erika fingered her until Monica came with a beautiful sigh. Night fell.
 
Five years and a half world away. Derek Bruce had predicted bitter cold, but guaranteed absolutely no snow. Now, if he hurried, he could stay ahead of the blizzard and lose himself and start over. Again. As he drove in familiar shame, the radio reported the city was shut down.
 
The window vibrated with the clap of thunder from overhead as the deluge of water poured from the sky. Watching the cold wet drops hit the window Michelle had the feeling of depressed resignation that comes with a winter thunderstorm. If only John would take her mind off of her depression.


*** fifty-one so kill me.
 
Pulling down her panties was when he noticed the birthmark, obscured by the flaming colour of the thick hair. Pushing his tongue between her nether lips it caught his eye again and distracted him enough that he didn't hear the sudden cessation of her soft moans.

"Whose your Daddy again?"
 
gauchecritic said:
Pulling down her panties was when he noticed the birthmark, obscured by the flaming colour of the thick hair. Pushing his tongue between her nether lips it caught his eye again and distracted him enough that he didn't hear the sudden cessation of her soft moans.

"Whose your Daddy again?"
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Big grinning smilies.
 
Thought I'd try my hand at this:

Micah kissed Evelyn hard; she returned his kiss with equal intensity. She wanted this; they both wanted this. As thought gave way to lust, they tore each other’s clothes off, and Micah threw Evelyn on the bed. They fucked wildly, kicking the sheets off in sweaty ecstasy. Darkness fell outside.
 
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They were certain they would never see each other again. Sascha reeled back in surprise when she saw Kenneth, and her eyes filled with tears. They ran towards each other and embraced, and Sascha’s tears overflowed, for now was truly the last time they would ever, could ever, be together.
 
"It's Vernal Equinox."

"Tell him I'm not here."

"He'll come back until you give him what's his."

"Don't you get it, Delores? I didn’t hide those eggs. I ate them!"

She went pale. "The Peeps, then. At least return Vernal's Peeps."

Peter's ears drooped. "Let him choke on them."
 
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"It's Vernal Equinox."

"Tell him I'm not here."

"He'll come back until you give him what's his."

"Don't you get it, Delores? I didn’t hide those eggs. I ate them!"

She went pale. "The Peeps, then. At least return Vernal's Peeps."

Peter's ears drooped. "Let him choke on them."
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This (not this example, the exercise) is really difficult hoping that the reader 'gets' all the implications and the bits that are only there if you make the right connections

ETA ><gasp>< shock, horror :eek: shereads actually wrote something.
 
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gauchecritic said:
This (not this example, the exercise) is really difficult hoping that the reader 'gets' all the implications and the bits that are only there if you make the right connections

ETA ><gasp>< shock, horror :eek: shereads actually wrote something.
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Now I have to keep coming back to check my story scores.
 
She lit the candle and said a prayer, bowed, crossed herself, and walked to the back of the church. The hooker was waiting; lying down with her skirt up and her legs spread on the pew. The devotee muttered a Latin prayer as she began going down. It was beautiful.
 
She shuddered as she saw the letter waiting on the mat - thick and ominous it was just like all the others he had sent. Hesitating briefly, she picked it up and opened the door to put it in the trash like the rest.
Cold hands closed round her throat,
"Hello."
 
Janie freed Tony’s hard cock from his loose fitting jeans, and slid her mouth around the head. He assured her he could drive while she sucked him. As the police officer took his statement, Tony watched Janie lick her lips with a grin. Tony realized he had under-estimated her prowess.
 
Once the house was empty, the dust settled, she collapsed on the couch and sobbed. It only last a few minutes, but it came from her soul and rattled the panes in the windows. Her companion just covered her hand with his, and waited. She was letting go, starting now.
 
Dante staggered out and sank to his knees on the grass. "Unbelievable."

Virgil dusted off his wings. "So. What did you think?"

Dante cast his eyes skyward. "Never in my wildest imaginings did I suspect the true terrors of Hell."

Virgil stiffened. "I was supposed to show you Hell first?"
 
lesbiaphrodite said:
Erika pushed Monica against the wall; Monica offered no resistence. Monica's dark hair fell across her face in long beautiful dark waves as her left leg cocked up and wrapped around Erika's hips. She wore no panties. Erika fingered her until Monica came with a beautiful sigh. Night fell.
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Yeah. That was hot. I'm going to have to try this. The fifty word thing, not the above scene. At least, not any time soon.;)
 
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