Hi everyone,
Can I persuade any of you to give my 'Practice Dates' story a once over and let me know your thoughts? I've never written anything like this before and it'll probably be the last time as I was just writing this for fun rather than anything I'd seriously commit to, but I'd like to know how I did.
The story revolves around a young married woman being manipulated by her boss. It's not something I'd ever condone, but it was just a fantasy.
Thanks
http://www.literotica.com/s/practice-dates
Also this might sound rich given the theme, but I've had some disturbingly nasty anonymous comments about wanting the female lead to die in childbirth which I've since deleted. Do they crop up much? I think someone's taking it too seriously and might have some issues.
Can I persuade any of you to give my 'Practice Dates' story a once over and let me know your thoughts? I've never written anything like this before and it'll probably be the last time as I was just writing this for fun rather than anything I'd seriously commit to, but I'd like to know how I did.
The story revolves around a young married woman being manipulated by her boss. It's not something I'd ever condone, but it was just a fantasy.
Thanks
http://www.literotica.com/s/practice-dates
Also this might sound rich given the theme, but I've had some disturbingly nasty anonymous comments about wanting the female lead to die in childbirth which I've since deleted. Do they crop up much? I think someone's taking it too seriously and might have some issues.