New Poetry Recommendations

Tuesday

2 new poems by a foolish, tasty poet:

Frost
by The_Fool ©

I realize that I am porous
Desire for you seems to flow on through
From one moment to the next
As we share even just a fraction
Of time together

I realize that I am porous is a great way to begin a poem.


Poseur
by The_Fool ©

How truly graceful
Is my wandering thought
As I warm up to my desire
For this woman crawling
On hands and knees
Across the bed towards me

How truly graceful is my wandering thought--don't you just love that? Go leave comments for Fool.

I almost this one

Mall Land
by flyguy69 ©

and festive sex-toy shoppers.

Collegiate allegiance taut
across her tits, she sifts
the mall for blister-pack
orgasms that start in her purse
and finish in her trembling
knees. On a bench by Starbucks

I love this poem! blister pack orgasms! I want to own that line.

Wednesday, 12/8 New Poems

Hello Poets

Lots of good poetry on the New Page, all worth reading, but here is a few that caught my at first glance:



The first to grab by my attention is wildsweetone's and I have to say there is nothing like A Kiss that is delivered with a bit a steam to get another's attention in a hurry...

it's called foreplay for a reason.

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Thoughts Served OnThe Half-truth by Tristesse . One thing about having poetry on Literotica, you have to have a good title to draw in the reader with that first click, and Miss Tess accomplished as such with her poem. Half-truth and much wisdom. Real nice.

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DeepAsleep always has a story tell in his poems; they are facinating little glimpse on his real life and he gives us another look with his, In a Jeep, With Dirty Hands

My crew is a bunch of stoners that never have gas money.
Living job to job, we are dirty,
wrinkled, unshaven, crude, callous and to a man,
we are frozen fucking cold.
Married and divorced,
hired and fired,
jail time,
down time,
overslept, and underpaid.
We are all these things and
we do good work.

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That's not all folks... I have more

& BBL with them

12/8 New Poems cont.

Back


With more New Poems I gleaned from the the first page


HomerPindar's From the voyuer is of course, the flipside and sequel to his To the voyeur. Check them both out if you haven't already.

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On her writing spree in The Passion's thread, WickedEve has penned many beauties such as these: Unburden, Lover and of parades paroxysm and pensiveness - I especially liked the backbeat in the latter of her two poems posted today. Take a look:

quote from of parades paroxysm and pensiveness:

rom da da boom

march in crisp of winter night
to skeletons in rumba.

dance bones,
bones shake,
with fleeting sprig
of my kiss-me ache

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quote Unburden, Lover:

Slide the heart,
those constrictions,
history, each factor,
to the depth of me.

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The Waiting by PinkMoon is a poem you don't want to miss due to the vivid instant scene set-up:

Graven are the eyes of a crone,
staring naked upon crooked gothic cross

Those are my eyes
my deathmask

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I'm a pig for Maria2394's poetry. She always makes me hungry with her foody metaphors. This is tasty one worth every bite: seeded vs. unseeded

as she gave birth to half a dozen stars,
in humbled form of measly, slender seeds
cast from greedy lips onto the ground

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Box of love by tungtied2u is a touching write that I've been there and can identify with. Nicely done.

those moments are passed
but not lost, the feelings
were real, warmed us,
existed if only as a candles flame
briefly but bright

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Hey Poets, dont't miss these poems either: Doing Dishes on the Farm by foehn, Catty School Girls by Daisy May, In Our Stockings by Wanton Vixxxen, need by impressive, and Jesus Saved by jthserra.

Also, check-out new poet, doingmybest

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That's it folks, what I thought was good poetry of the day. Be sure to show your support of other poets, both more established poets and the newbies by commenting and voting. Remember, you get get what you give.

It's also a good thing, yup.

Encouraging, too.

This is my last New Poem's Review until next year, January, 07 2005 so happy holidays to you all. Much joy and peace be with you and your loved ones.




- neo

I'm just beginning to take a look at today's poems and I noticed this one:

Passion's Fervor, which is a premature Grab A Partner challenge poem posted by FinestSilk and written by FinestSilk and NoOtherName.

The line-dancing was done very well. It seems like the two used thier differen perspectives to their advantage, and the result is a really nice sensual tug-o-war.

There was a whole bunch of other good poems today. I'll read them and get back to y'all later. Just wanted to throw you guys an appetizer.

#L

And ye bigge yolde liste of rewievs...

Sooo, there are the rest of th Thursday party. Have fun.





for god's poet and October Odyssey III andInstead, I Write a Poem by WickedEve
The first is a lovely little seasonal sentiment, beautifully penned.
The second goes sexy, sultry and almost electric in erotic tension.
My favourite of her three poens today is the last, a very cool and accurate musing on something very, very hot.
[color=115511]I am on the midnight poem,
thought slowing, lower--
it's desert rock there.[/color]
[color=115511][/color]

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The Dance by NouveauLuneAttentes
A poem that starts like this can and will not go unmentioned by me. Oo yea.
[color=115511]She danced
A swirling catastrophe of woman
Pure and unadulturated
Her hips swaying in tandem
With the heartbeats of those
Watching[/color]

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Pills pills pills.. by Annora
Pills, pills, pills, pills, pills, pills, pills. Somewhere between satire, dead serious rant, and dark humour this poem is taking a stand on the issue of...guess what...pills.

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Just Another Day by postobitum
This sharpm smart and hard-hitting piece is stacked full of inventive metaphors, and dense with poignant notions.
[color=115511]Demons undulating in my comforter,
clear spirits making the air sizzle,
eagerly waiting to seize
the happiness in my open eyes,
my peace I fought so hard for,
the sanity in the side table drawer.
And let's not forget my holey soul.[/color]

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Intentions by she_is_my_addiction
Fractured, swift lines give us a very strong scene with few words. There are times when I feel I just lost track of what is being said, just to find that I get it again, as I read on. Intentional or not, it suits the poem very well.
[color=115511]intentions flow like the rain
careless drops
acidic
your tongue
casting long glances in my direction[/color]

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Stormy Weather and Lined Up by Magickal2
Here is a fresh face that deserves to have a bit of my attention. Structures poetry with a very well balanced elocution.

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Buying Karma by neonurotic
A swift and sweet little read by neon hereö I really like those little snippets of communication and interaction that he constructs those poems from.

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Precious Life by arienette
It's prose poetry day on Lit, apparently. And here is a new name that I'll bee keeping my eyes open for more goodness from. A series of very recognisable tidbits from different stages of life. Cleverly written and with a whole arsenal of spiffy images.

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In Praise Of Pretzels by denis hale
A really satly, sexy little tale. This piece of prose poetry plots a delightful scene, and shows us how the most unsexy things in the world becomes tools of joy, if you use them right.
[color=115511]Adrienne with her sweater off, and she's rubbing two of the pretzels on her stiffening nipples, making sure all of that precious salt
is collecting there.

Then she shoves one in my mouth.

A pretzel.[/color]

Friday Dec 10th


And a Happy Holiday season to all.
I am watching my 3 year old step grandson ( if thats a word)
So the reviews may be a bit edgy or refer to Spongebob a lot.

as always...blah blah blah...don't be so thin skinned...yadda yadda yah..pay no attention to what I think or say...I'm an idiot

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also the thermometer on my comments is left at 50%
doesn't mean that's how I voted
ok??
Jump to light speed Chewie.....



The ( sexy) Night Before Christmas - foehn
This has been done many times but this version is worth a read because of some great rhymes and the fact it doesn't cross the line into be porno.
It's a fun read and I loved this line:

I walked to the closet and chose a warm blanket
to cover your butt with. (I wanted to spank it.)

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I may have to rethink my views on rhyming poetry.
have some eggnog and give it a read

Overcrowding on the Head of Pin - postobitum
I've had my eye on this author and watched the progress...
I like this best so far..some great lines:

Accidentally spilt funeral urns
in day care center playgrounds
could be no less painful.

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and the images conveyed here could mean many things...
over all it's worth a read or two
some Dali-esque images and a message under it all.

Wayward Tears Echo Once - jd4george
beautiful in it's simplicity and almost European feel
I'd love to hear it as an aural submission with a woman reading the french lines.
The tenderness in your soul, my friend, is represented magnificently by your pen.
a Must read

Indigo Eyes - BooMerengue & Irishcatsmeow
the first collaboration poem and it has some great stuff
this line struck me

Trembling, she embraces her epiphany, waiting
as his eyes finally lift to her swaying abandon

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That is what a dance floor is all about
A great poem and a very nice joint effort
Thank you

Garden of Evil- The Mutt and Miss Oatlash
( I credited the Mutt first because he could never do it himself...being the sub..and just to be naughty for Miss Oatlash..a subbie joke as it were)
These two share a connection that some don't understand or even acknowledge
But it is evident in their collaboration.
It is seamless, and the message it speaks, tells of not only a partnership, but of learning and survival and honor.
Of trust and acceptance.
each knowing what the other needs and providing it.
I liked it very much
well done


Aiming Point - analyze this ( annaswirls and Liar)
I would be scared stiff to write with anna....but Liar did and the joint effort is stunning in that you can't tell who wrote what.

Without a script or whispered prompts
you too would stare for hours,
measuring time by shadows on the wall

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anna or liar...or both??
in any case a great read
check it out and wonder....


Benign Logistics - analyze this ( annaswirls and Liar)
This is too clever for me to even comment on
Like Lewis Carroll, or John Lennon's topsy turvy writings.....I kept seeing Alice in Wonderland and Jabberwocky, and Willy Wonka.....
Just read it
this should have an "E" next to it
sometimes when you see talent like this...you want to destroy everything you've ever written

The Graham Cracker Queen - jd4george
Another should be "E"...but maybe because I've been there too?
Nope
It's just to pure and true

didn't tell him I had her picture in my wallet
that she had signed "A friend always"
and that gave me the right to kick his face in.
He wasn't worth it.
Besides, he was a better fighter than me.

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Please read it....and see what life was like when jd4george and I were young
we never forget them do we brother?

Dragonspeak - jd4george
jesus...what you been doin' up there brother?
Another wonderful poem a bit darker than the others but with verses like this:

These words, this Dragonspeak that singes
my heart again with misspoken promise,
tender words that scorch me and tempt my innocence
to again surrender,

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How can you not want to read it??
well done
leatherbound - postobitum & flyguy69
heavy, rich, dense,you must go slow
and go over it again and again
find the rhythm and then that last line...brings it all home.
I couldn't tell who wrote what..and thats a good thing.

Woven Words - Catbabe and tathagata
yes I gave us a 5!!

This was free form at it's best...never having worked with Ms. Babe before and she, an editor on the spot, and me, and edit when it's all done, we managed to squeeze out this piece.
Most of the credit goes to her.
She took my usual semi religious transcendental crap and added some brilliant editing and imagery
ex:

I walk circular stairs of serpentine calls,
climbing into a minaret of the mind, filled
with archaic scents of forgotten language
that reveal perfumed portraits of the past.

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perfumed portraits of the past is hers
and that fit perfectly.
I wish she'd write more here even on the suddenly forums or whatever because her talent is immense
and
shes a hottie
; )
Thank you CB for you effort and patience and you beautiful words

Delayed Voyage Home - Belegon & Boomerengue
Another collaboration.
Boo is a romantic in the classic sense and Belegon compliments her so well in this ancient tale of a sailor returning from the sea.
worth a read or two at least
well done
after he swung it around the room - Wicked Eve
Knowing Eve as I do I was sure this was going to be a sex poem.
But it's even better
in her own style she pulls up a vision of that off kilter universe she lives in where things are always at a 45 degree angle.
I loved the idea of this one...though it did make me glad I'm not a relative
; )
Gloves - Nevadaman
A sweet simple love poem
and if you've ever bought someone gloves
you can relate

Love Gone Wild - Boomerengue & Lazarus
Boo's been a mad woman on this challenge
This poem with Lazarus is an erotic one
and my favorite verse:

The hearts that once were joined in innocence
now pushed them with passion towards a mutual goal
Aches ground them together in an explosion of lust
Two souls once broken now sin has made whole

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That's some pretty good writing
Give it a look


Sorry had to take a break to self medicate......
on with the show



House Call - Boo & Remec

Wow seems like Boo's done everyones.....errrrr in the challenge I mean
; )
This is an interesting one of a wily doctor from what I can gather.....
I think I'll grab my black bag and head to Boo's house


Steel Seduction - Boo & Flyguy69

I liked this ,a little misdirection is always fun



Tara Redux - Boo & Reltne

A " gone with the wind" behind the scenes??
again great echange of lines and the mood maintained
Boo seems to have taken poetic viagra.......


Heating Up - Guess who and average gina ( Boo)
These two yopung ladies take us to a juke joint to listen to Muddy Waters and watch hips sway like the watch of a hypnotist
a really nice collab.


L'amore le Absinthe' _ Boo and tathagata

yeah we went over 16 lines...I'm a rebel
I had a ball working with Boo and she kept me grounded
the result is a playful little trifle that i enjoyed writing very much


After Dinner - Remec and Average Gina


Yummmmmmmmm
reunited in the kitchen
erotic and hunger inducing in many ways
give it a read


Sunset's Fall - Collaboration
i wsh I knew who these two were..becaus ethe images are wonderful

To lose the sun is to gain the moon, find solace
in these velvet limbs, cinched on waist;
pressed, wet, against that penumbral cloud, 'twixt Venus

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Ohhhhh yesssssss
read this and let find out who they are..........


I Don't Want To Be Your Ex-Princess - Lady Jeanne

I love this because, in many ways, it lets us inside a woman's head
a place barred for many of us males...but this verse strikes a chord between defiance and vulnerability

and I'd wonder
if irrational delights are better than irrational lovers.

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A great line and a very interesting poem
i will keep my eye out for more


Down to the home stretch....................

tasting- Cordelia & The Fool

i put on 5 pounds just reading this..
an epicurean delight wrapped around a sensual core
give it a read and see if you're not checking the fridge for sexual aids

and last but not least

Disharmony Cocoon - Cerriwiden & tungtied2u

A perfect ending to the challenge
these two seem to have be mining the same ore and leave us with a poem as bleak as death valley yet filled with beautiful words and images
two great poets expressing one pain
must read

Ok enough for me
I must retire to my inner sanctum and feed my brain.......or something like that

as always feel free to mention anything i didnt
and do us ALL a favor and read everything and vote and comment
we need it to get better
have a good weekend all
slan go foill

New Poems

New Poems Review
Saturday Dec 11, 2004

Sorry if some feel this is a bit late
but I worked late and took a shower
cause what better way to spend a saturday
night than with the pussy (cat) and a list of poems
I'm exceited...<grin> "Honestly"
woohooo here we go!!!
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first on the new erotic poems list was "Christmas Haiku"
~hellbaby~ this was deep as is with most Haiku, and ho ho ho!

hellbaby~
had another poem post as well~
Understanding poker
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second on the list was poems posted by Uncle Pervey Charlie Brown's Cure
clip~
Charlie Brown tried to kick the football,
But Lucy kept jerking it back.
Lucy thought it was a lot of fun,
Til Charlie's foot jammed in her crack!
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Uncle Pervey's humorous poetry can be found
in many of his poems that posted today~
Itch Satisfaction~
Toothache~
Jamming Her Moon~


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Another Lorraine Bobbit
Daisy May
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You’ll never have me,
But dream on
If you will
Because all past men
Have hurt me,
And I’d rather be
Another
Lorraine Bobbit,
But collecting
Chopped peckers
Watching them rot
On my windowsill.

"Okay, no knives for Daisy May this
Christmas or scissors either...<grin>
Daisy has some pretty good poetry
submitted lately...this one included!
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Virgin Wedding
Blackie67

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Leaving stains of virgin blood
upon his wood she was staked
that night unto Him she was bethrothed.
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blackie captures the beauty of divinities
proper virgin deflowering~

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True Hearts
Atros
clip~
True Hearts
Falling in love
What obstacles they face
Old demons, Haunting them
Impossible to kill
Impossible to hide from
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atros ask's the question many new lovers
ask, "will we make it?" directing the question
in a poem~

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Forbidden
OsitoBlanquito
clip~
Incognito encounters,
Illicit intentions,
Intricate matinee.
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This poem is stacked with words that
spiral down the page creating a wirl wind
of a poem~
Osita had another poem post as well,
Hear her Here~

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Your My Flame
willowshadows

CLIP~
Bodies combined,
we meet for real.
Then our broken hearts
begin to heal.
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an erotic poem, short and sweet

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It's There
Miss Delicious
an erotic write~
clip~
She kisses him,
the passion ignites.
He gives in,
thinking of all the nights.
The kiss ends
and they can almost see,
in their hearts
what must truly be.
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eroticly pleaseing, a passionate
kiss that stirs kindrid emotions~

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endlessly spacious
steve porter
clip~
Endlessly spacious,
Unbounded and alone,
a mindless moonscape.
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a dream perhaps...or perhaps a place
this poem sends ya searching for visuals
to fill the words~
interesting poem~

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'Tis Mine
NouveauLuneAttentes
clip~
Some may say I am opinionated
Because I speak my mind
But I see it as my freedom
I speak it because it's MINE
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cute poem~
also posted by this poet was:
Diana~
Woman-Child's Rant~
December~
Cherry Blossom~
Sweet As My Revenge~
Torn~
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forgot
doingmybest
clip~by spreading ill about a something
you give a shit about it
by spreading warmth about something
you give a shit about it

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doingmybest's charming poem
filled with words that ricochet your
mental grasp from line to line <grin>

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Becoming one
idawniebabezi
clip~I'm ready.
I want to.
I need this.
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erotica extreme~
Hot Poem~
sizzlin~
a lit-erotica special~

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Kamikaze prayer (Grab a Partner)
tungtied2u

clip~
temptation tickled and indulged
spiraling, screaming, abandoned control
crashing in spontaneous combustion
kamikaze death midst erotic inferno

*written by lildarlin and tungtied2u for the Grab a Partner challenge
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very fun read~
a tornado of emotions and words
colaboration was a wonderful mix
that makes this an awesome poem~

tungtied2u also had another poem post~
To touch the sky~
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chinesse dress
Trent_Dutch
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(About the woman who taught me lust… With Alchemical undertones.)

She wore a Chinese Dress of Scarlet silk,
Like Cinnabar of ancient Al Khemia,
Embroidered with finery befitting of her,
In Jades and Gold’s and pearlescent Blues.

a witty write~
excellent poem!
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Only Jer such sweet and so so rare
fabmax
clip~

Mine is the treasure,. you the one light
Who every morning makes
The dream that has broken
And it's a whole new morning
I hear your voice as the blackbird cries



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a poem of a very strong and passionate love~
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Pussy McQuade
80niner
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Her puss was a sight, blond curly and tight
and her slit was a view to behold
The maid detected the gleam,
of a man who’s dream,
is of one who’s about to strike gold.
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a cute Ballad type poem with a
very clever wit to it...hehehe
and Hot Poem
erotica extreme~


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Have I told you lately
Annora

clip~ My love my treasure Merry Christmas you mend a heart with the strength
of a true artist using thier hands for making beauty out of wood.
wow what a humble write~
thank you Annora~
clip~
You spoke to me softly but firmly, guided me around the corners
You stole my heart, wrapped it in the glitter of the Northern stars.
wonderful poetry~
a muse~
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serenade
My Erotic Tale
lulliby in words~
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That's all the poems posted for
Saturday Dec 11, 2004~

Happy Holidays (((((wavin')))))

Sunday Poems

I'm not sure if tung had mentioned not being able to do Sunday reviews or if tung's just late. Either way, I'll just mention a few for Sunday.

There is No Tara
by postobitum ©

When tomorrows runs out
I will settle on the beach,
whisper to the sky.
I will promenade slow with the foam
and creeping soundless tides
pinching sand from my roaming.

A fairly good poem indeed. The above lines are the outstanding ones in this piece.

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Maybe I'm an escape artist
by steve porter ©

It’s a bit like a Gordian knot, isn’t it?

Well, isn’t everything? It’s the unraveling
that sustains our interest, isn’t it?

Good poetry with a great line about unraveling.

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life's ladder
by My Erotic Tale ©

If cats were kings and men were words
the volumes would fuel a nights fire

Needs a little work but it's a good effort and worth a read.

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Papaya Lane
by champagne1982 ©

I'll show you the way down papaya lane,
to the place where the mangos grow,
then lead you astray in our little grass shack,
at the edge of a coconut grove.

A sweet read. I thought it had too many adjectives, though. I may be the only one. I would have liked to have at least seen the adjectives tossed around and tumbled in odd directions, like: "at the coconut edge of a grove."

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Max Headroom Sings Leo Sayer
by denis hale ©

It's so
painfully
true dat
with only you
my baby doll

I'd file swap even
without a firewall,

This poem hardly has any feedback. I know it's one of those darn witty poems that doesn't have a heart bursting into a love flame. But wait! It does have "Divinity Candy to lick lovely lips over, tufted with frothy alabaster curls and tangy cotton cloud swirls!"

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Okay that's it... but what the heck. One for the cyber trail: Mockingbird by The Mutt

Sunday 12/12- late again

Before I begin, I want to apologize for my tardiness.

I have decided to take a break from reviews as my schedule is overwhelming and I cannot do justice to the poets and poems being posted.

Hopefully, I can return at a later date and pick it back up again.

That being said......off we go!

life's ladder by My Erotic Tale .
Has anybody else noticed the way MET's work just keeps improving and improving? His work gets stronger, more complex and richer textured with eac passing day.
A sample~
...If cats were kings and men were words
the volumes would fuel a nights fire
for laughter and song have been long sung
miasma and amber's ascend in night's desires
a life can not live in a paragraph's limits

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Force a Smile by Trent Dutch caught my attention with some interesting wording and subject matter.
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Steve Porter let's on Maybe I'm an escape artist in a clever and fun read.
Well, maybe he is, maybe knot....you decide~
Maybe I want to admit something to you,
but of course I refuse to be caught.
It’s a bit like a Gordian knot, isn’t it?

Well, isn’t everything? It’s the unraveling
that sustains our interest, isn’t it?
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For the woman I breathe by CharleyH.
There is a gentleness about this poem I really like.....oh, and it is very hot.....sort of like feathers tickling a ...well, read it yourself...and enjoy.....

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then.....while you're in the mood....take a trip down Papaya Lane with champagne1982 .
Great movement to this poem~
Come hula with me; sway those luscious hips,
in that sinuous way you dance.
Twisting your arms, in hypnotic swirls,
spin a libidinous trance.
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Let me..., posted by the Mutt , but written in collaboration with average gina for the Grab a Partner challenge, is an interesting and well laid out look into the mindset of a domme/sub relationship.

Let me control you
until you lose control
give yourself completely to me
and bind me until I am free.
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I'm only about a quarter thru the Sunday poems..will try to finish this evening....thanks for your patience.....feel free to help out and mention your favorites.....support your fellow poets!

Sunday & Monday

I just realized that I mentioned some Sunday poems on Sunday. So, I think tung and I covered most of them.

There is a poem by ElusivButterfly titled Dawn, which has an H. So, it appears to have been read and enjoyed by quite a few readers.

Dawn awakes with diamonds
Clothing the morning surf

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I have surrender for Sunday that I would appreciate comments on.

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jthserra brought us a wonderful audio poem on Monday.
Building

We always need more
intersecting lines on a blank page
ammonia burned blue lines
in subdivided and dimensioned designs
directions in plan, elevation and section

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Here's a poem you may find interesting:
Morning Fog
by sack ©

As the darkness slowly lifts
a chill permeates the leaden air
The black curtain slowly parts
to reveal the gray underbelly

Mist and steam
are a team
So it would seem
I could gleam

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Whine for the Aged
by Reltne ©

Cute poem, with too few words for an excerpt.

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A bluest poem:
Bluest Fields
by impressive ©

within bluest fields deep
greener grass breathes
a fertile caress of promise

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Witchery
by champagne1982 ©

There are sacred words to speak when air
no longer finds room in breathstopped lungs.
It is magic of the highest order.

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Jesus Came
by carolinablueelf ©

I'm mentioning this poem, because of it's slight controversy and interesting comments. I'm surprised there was not more discussion.

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I would great appreciate comments on fruit and crayons, which seems to have not really worked for most readers.

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That's it for Sunday and Monday, unless you'd like to mention one that I didn't.

Tuesday part 1

The first poem on Tuesday's new poem list is I Don't like Enclosed Spaces by Trent_Dutch ©

Hill sides of rock and scree,
Bare stone etched like the face of age,
Scoured by time and Nature,
And forces we cannot capture.

Quite good.

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A Catalog of Experiences
by seannelson ©

F. A night on a third-story suite with Chelsea X., that slightly chubby and slightly slutty nymph in who the world is won or lost; with the red moon shining in a bottle of Concordat champagne, drunk on a balcony over-looking a black sand beach and crashing Pacific waves.
$20,000

Poem? I don't know. Interesting read? Yes.

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pressing softness
by annaswirls ©

Today you drag softness
down my back and
ask permission to sleep
under my blanket
a little while longer.

Lovely to a point where you probably could not improve upon it.

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glass
by Willow Rain ©

The backs of my fingers rest against the wall.
The ceiling distorts as I watch it through the water, blinking.
Fine bubbles slide across my lips, as tender as your kisses before I slept.

Very good erotica. Give it a read. Offer some comments and vote on this one.

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heaven california
by Senna Jawa ©

A poem of few words, but when you read it, it's all you need.

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tuesday part b

annaswirls is preparing for winter like a squirrel.

Close your eyes
tuck your hair behind your ears
listen.

I have been wanting to tell you
I never loved you in autumn.

Words like these should get you through the winter.

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sack is in the middle of Masturbation

'nough said.

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A first literotica poem by wickedintexas:
Cheater

Her words of love are but lip service.
I'm only her world
Until she looks the other way.

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wed 12/15

I can help you out a bit Anna by mentioning a few as I have time..

My Favorite of the day

Morning Walk - Willow rain
Some of the images and writing here blew me away..and the last verse is magic
I have to give a small sample:

If I could only crush the sky with morter and pestle, I would.
I’d press it into little cakes,
and use it to draw you pictures of my day.

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and

The trees have become debutants overnight.
They chime their secrets to each other
when the youthful wind passes
dancing among them.

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I mean that's some great writing
please check it out and give this poet some encouragement


submission extreme - Wicked Eve

I have been informed, of course, that I missed the point of this...however, I think Eve is being modest.
I LOVE this poem for several reasons...but the line " The flight lies in the silk pet"
is profound ( in the context, of course, of the pet being allowed to be a butterfly)
this poem says a lot more than it seems to
and i think she knows that
; )
read it and ponder...

Thanks T! I am posting this unfinished as lit is acting up not letting me see any more poems. I will be back, came home early. cough cough

~anna


Watching you leave... Submitted by Man Ray (Erotic Poetry) 12/15/04

All I can say is this reminded me of "the rain in spain stays mainly on the plane" in that movie-- Pygmalian goes to Hollywood. If you like rhyme, you will love this poem.

~


Regret - Submitted by Willow Rain (Non-Erotic Poetry) 12/15/04

"There is a plan.
This is premeditated.
I am an accomplice."

I would be interested in reading more on this scene... after the dust settles. Intense topic.



How I Like It! -
Submitted by hotti (Erotic Poetry) 12/15/04

"Slap my cheeks
Til my ass ripples
Lick my lips
Bite my nipples"

see more of how hotti (or the character in the poem) likes it!

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A serial sumie - Submitted by WickedEve (Non-Erotic Poetry) 12/15/04

"...he was chosen for skin"

if I knew how she does it I would do it too. Somewhere beyond comprehension is where my comment lies. I love this.

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Why do I love you? -
Submitted by Seeker n Finder (Non-Erotic Poetry) 12/15/04

This is a sweet, simple (his own words) love poem. This is my favorite part, speaks to me.

"I love you because I always have.
Because you are my lifes breath.
My noble purpose to exsist."


~

Late Realizations -
Submitted by sparklgurl (Non-Erotic Poetry) 12/15/04


Sadness and longing. For more lines like these, check out sparklgurl's poem:

"Only in dreams are we to be together,
Only in dreams can our feelings be true, "

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Be My Brioche -
Submitted by herecomestherain (Erotic Poetry) 12/15/04

I love the title!
Here is an appeteaser:

"Be my brioche,
and I'll eat you
up for breakfast.
Be my marmalade,
and I'll spread you
thickly on my toast."

~

What colour are they today my love? -
Submitted by Man Ray (Erotic Poetry) 12/15/04

A rainbow of panties! Come check to see if there is a pot of gold...

"Only in dreams are we to be together,
Only in dreams can our feelings be true, "

~

A moment in time.. -
Submitted by Annora (Non-Erotic Poetry) 12/15/04

Today we are filled with monumental moments captured... here is a bittersweet moment between mother and daughter....

"Keeping my eyes away from the mirror as to not cry and mess up my make-up."

~

Mom's Phat Ass -
Submitted by Deadly Joker (Erotic Poetry) 12/15/04

Apparently, some boys want to do naughty things with their mothers. This poem celebrates this taboo, you might feel guilty if this turns you on, but it is just a poem damn it, does not have to be instructions or biographical. My kid still wants to marry me, hope he doesn't ever want to well, you know.

Here is a little taste.

"In the morning I jack off because I've been dreaming all night
About fucking my mom's ass and how it was so sweet and tight"

~

A submission extreme -
Submitted by WickedEve (Non-Erotic Poetry) 12/15/04

I did not originally read this poem as described by Eve in the comments. With either interpretation, it is a classic, a must read. Go see what you think, then scroll down to see the poet's intention.

"flight is in the silk, pet."


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A
Morning Walk
Submitted by Willow Rain (Non-Erotic Poetry) 12/15/04

Go read this. I am writing more on it later, my baby is home.

I am ashamed to say I am not familiar with this poets work yet. I Am posting her member page, if you are not familiar, I would do so, in fact, I am going to...

Willow Rain


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Delicate configurations
by steve porter ©

"Streamers of spent energy
permeate her nipples
and vaporize in the air. "

I am not sure I understand this poem, but I do understand the language, it is beautifully written.



Winters magic -
Submitted by Annora (Non-Erotic Poetry) 12/15/04

What a unique perspective on winter! I usually consider it a dull season, when there is no snow, but Annora sees all the color and beauty. For some reason I cannot get it to center correctly.


"Prisms of scattered
colors greet your
eyes.
What other
season
Gives so much beauty?"



Scent of a Virgin (Once Tried) -
Submitted by jthserra (Erotic Poetry) 12/15/04

I waited all day to read this Jim poem. Gentle and minimialistic. A nice read

"her fragrance
breached, tainted
twisted in his
triumphant kiss"


~


Santa's a Happy Man! -
Submitted by Uncle Pervey (Erotic Poetry) 12/15/04

Santa Claus made his "Debut," in the Divorce Court,
And he didn't think he'd need a lawyer there.
He waited for his turn, and then addressed the Judge,
"There's something here Judge that I think you're unaware!"

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Fertility Goddess! -
Submitted by Uncle Pervey (Non-Erotic Poetry) 12/15/04

There's a Goddess of Fertility,
And she's not much to look at, or see.
Her breasts hang down like airless balloons,
And she's got a rounded pot belly!

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I personally think she is beautiful.



Weasil Sam Gets Caught! -
Submitted by Uncle Pervey (Non-Erotic Poetry) 12/15/04

See if Uncle Pervey can sell you his bridge....

~

Weasil Sam Gets Out! -
Submitted by Uncle Pervey (Non-Erotic Poetry) 12/15/04


.... the story continues......



Okay that is it! I am sorry for being late, and for the lack of links, I am goinng to work on that a bit.

Nice writing poets! Glad to meet you Willow Rain, I will be back to read more of your work. Welcome!

Anna

Thursday Dec 16

Howdy poets. Here are the ones I dug.

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a Paris Rose un
a Paris Rose deux
a Paris Rose trois by My Erotic Tale ©
Lovely little rose colored snippets from the capital of romance. Should be read together.

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Casualty by Willow Rain ©
On the border between vignette prose and poetry, a chilling tale. Willow Rain suceeds very well in relaying the strong emotions of the moment to us.
[color=228822]I ask twice how she is doing.
They tell me she is in recovery and they will check,
chipper, bright eyed, cheery nurses that never give me answers.
I want to stab one with the dangling chained pen.
I want someone else to be a casualty.[/color]

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the River by His_pet ©
For some very lush writing, check out this lengthy piece. It's stacked full with warm and well rounded metaphors and breathes of mystery and magic.
[color=228822]waking with the sunrise... just the trickle of rays cresting the horizon as her cobalt orbs open, body pushing up from the lush grasses, arms raising high to almost touch the clouds so close, taking in the surrounding of her resting spot, the first opportunity she has had to see it fully, having arrived under the cover of darkness last night, lingering slowly as the full beauty of this momentous spot is revealed to tender gaze...[/color]

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Birthing hope by tungtied2u ©
Tung gives us some very sage advice in a poem that is just a such a delight to consider as it is to just read out loud.
[color=228822]Tread softly midst the possible
Lest you crack the moment’s shell
Spill out the effervescence
Loose the liquid of the almost attainable[/color]

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Stereogram Seduction by WickedEve ©
Some very good lines in this serenely sexy poem. Eve is one of the few people I know that can make intense erotic poetry out of almost any situation.
[color=228822]Orange-spice fusion exhilarates,
though teacup is sigh, trembled
near breathless fall.[/color]

...

And Forty-Nine? by jthserra ©
As always from Jim, a very good poem. I daresay that this was even very good for him, which says alot. Te subject is years...and inertia. And he tackles the subject skillfully.
[color=228822]It’s place I’ve been
grown comfortable in --
a little more each day
as cracks in driveways
and leaks under the sink
become a part of everyday.[/color]

...


More good ones:

Diner Divulgance by catastrophe ©
An eavesdropper's observations over a cuppa java. Intelligent, insightful and a great little read.

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arienette by she_is_my_addiction ©
I can't say exactly what this poem is about, I'm guessing a surgery, but the mood of thpoem from a bystanders perspective comes through very well.

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An Altercation! by Uncle Pervey ©
Short and funny. Go read and have a giggle.

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a fan by Willow Rain ©
Short, smart and sexy.

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Time to Heal by Honey123 ©
Short, simple and heartfelt.

...


#L

Friday's Reviews

I have a message from Santa....


Screw the milk and cookies!!


On with the reviews.

As always these opinions are solely my own and in no way are meant to be any kind of judgement , nor represent the views of others here...so take them all with a grain of Kosher salt ( I just threw that in there for our Jewish brothers and sisters ..Happy Hanukkah, Chanukah Harmonica etc

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As always I vote on the poem before I comment so the 50% reflected in that statement is NOT the vote and NOT counted towards your score....for those of you who care about that shit.


Hey Mister Santa - bearlee

This had an "H" within about 20 seconds
I suspect the " illustrations" had something to do with it.
But tis the season and a christmas poem deserves a look.


Hear My Name - Lauren Hynde

This is an interesting piece, although slightly maddening to not be able to see it all at once..it has some great lines

imperceptible
footsteps
of mice

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The genius of it is that you have to wait for it to come around again and again, and thus you are forced into her tempo. and her choice of how long you study each word.
This could be a very powerful way to present a poem
And a more unexpected/ less cliche ending word may have worked a bit better.
Certainly worth a look or 6


Blue- Green blues - Lauren Hynde

Now this I like.
An illustrated poem that looks like an album cover and the words match up perfectly.
Jazz and Miles and wet sidewalks and...

A sound that doesn't call
but awaits
leans in
against a streetlight

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That describes it perfectly
nice work

Alveolus - jthserra

I don't know a triolet from a sonnet from a haiku...but this pure piece works very well with the repeated lines at certain points.
It tells a story through a series of images that all have an emotion tied into them.
It's starling how much information is contained in the seemingly simple verses.
A Must read
and a brilliant piece of writing.
(BTW Jim..My server apparently hiccupped whist I was submitting the " your poem has been mentioned" comment..you may want to delete the extra 7 or 8 statements)



citrus - catastrophe
Very haiku like in not only it's subject but also the sparseness of it's words.
I love clementines and this made me want one
Love the ending also

photoshopped life - Wicked Eve
I'm sure I liked this for all the wrong reasons too...and she'll email me later and say " No you silly monkey..."
But in any case
It seems to explore the possibilities of all the different lives and persona's one can assume not just on Lit but anywhere on line..and how we save them, in an effort to remember who we have been.


Break for work...........

Friday part 2

see above post for all disclaimers yadda yadda yadda

Also I apologize for all the stutter posts about your poem being mentioned.
The server here at work is, shall we say, sub-fucking-par



Coming home - Willow Rain
One of my favorite " new" poets here she reveals a tender submissive side in, once again, new terms and images

He fits me to perfection,
taking away everything that is hollow.
Tender, my knees against his ribs,

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There is a gentleness and honesty here that is beautiful.

Winter Hibernation - Dreamsweet

No irritation, no desire, no lust,
just numbness in response to everything.

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I often feel this way all winter too.
this poem was very familiar to me in many ways..give it a read and see if you agree.


Coloring as fast as I can - sandspike

some great metaphors and my favorite verse

What color is love?
Hate really a darker shade?
A whole box of emotions,
Crayola never made.

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teacher - average gina & The Mutt

A collaboration poem thats smooth as southern sippin' liquor
give it a read


In A Green Dream of Gregory Corso - denis hale

denis hale's stuff is always like taking a hit of acid or waking up in OZ for me.
it's a trip,and you want to stop and look at everything along the way because you've never quite seen it like this before...
and right in the middle he throws this:

and my friend Billy Coyle came
leap-frogging the oily puddles
that pocked the deep green grass

grinning and glad
to see me again,

which was impossible

because
he'd OD'd
in this very park
on a warm Indian Summer
afternoon

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You just must read this...and everything he writes.
A Tapestry of Three Poems - jd4george

where to start?
In religious terms this would be what's called a triptych ( were it a painting)
Which in many ways it is.
I don't speak french..but once I'm home I'm going to translate the french verses.

This is a stunning piece in that they can be read as one long poem or 3 separate poems and all of them have wonderful language.

There is pain in the silence
of your turned back…

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how simple
how obvious
how awfully true
Please read this poem more than once
it is brilliant





Once Babylon - jd4george

This poem is dense, almost too much at once, you can feel the craftsmanship of it and it is daunting.
Yeats, in it's feeling, it recalls to me " Slouching Towards Bethlehem" in it's scope and message.

This is poetry
read it.
Please


Old Fools & Poets Lament - jd4george

This hit very close to home for me
and I expect it will a few others also.
The last verse is a treasure


It Worked for Faust - jd4george

A wry little observation on fame and how to attain it
it's all so easy
heh


ok that's it
My brain is spinning..there was a lot of good stuff today..now I need to self medicate and allow my brain to settle into the abyss for a bit.
Feel free to mention anything I didn't or to mention something I did and tell me what YOU thought it meant

Have a good weekend all
drive safe
Tathagata

I hope I'm not steppin' on any toes here, but I hate to see a day go by with no reviews. There weren't that many new poems today, but a couple of them caught my eye.

The first, [color=4682B4]Masochist Blooming[/color], is by an author new to me though, I see by the member page, not new to Lit. I'll have to go check out some of malcah_ms's other submissions.

A brief taste of a brief poem:

Arms stretched
to the ceiling,
Body pulled taut
like a drumskin.

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[color=4682B4]Valley of Glass[/color] by Du Lac is chock full of vivid imagery:

As the web grows thicker,
Wet and sticky like jam,
Childhood joys fade and flicker,

Go check out the rest.

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Stryderthorongil has a stunning Lit debut with [color=4682B4]I Woke Up Alone Again Today[/color]:

I pick up the box, sit on the edge of the bed, muscles tight,
teeth clenched, I stare at the box.
Small, insignificant, velvet coated, hinges on the back, a
small clasp in the front.
Breath shallow, palms sweaty, I open the box.
Sparkling, twinkling in the morning light, not phased by
feelings, I stare, numb, no tears, there are none left.

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And last, but not least, Belegon's [color=4682B4]History Book[/color] grabbed hold of me and just wouldn't let go. A bit o' that:

I know
I should leave off
thumbing through the pages
of my past.
Reliving old pains
does nothing to honor them.

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There are, of course, a number of other New Poems and these are just my favorites. Really, go see for yourself and tell us what I missed. Please?

new poems review

New Poems Reviews
for Saturday 18, 2004

(remember to leave comments on the thread
"to keep the new poems review thread clear")

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First on the new poems list was I'll never change by Uncle Pervey

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Now that I've grown older, and gotten wiser,
And I've switched my preferences to "Budweizer."
I'm still drinkin' like a fish in the water,
And I know I'll never change, but I "oughter!!"

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Yes uncle pervey ... you might oughta~
try some delicious wine perhaps~
uncle pervey also had a few others post as well
Barbie Dolls Disapointment
Twelth Christmas day orgie
Galloping Gormet
Backyard Neighbor tease

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Masochist Bloomingby malcah_ms

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Droplets of red
trail down my breasts,
my stomach,
streams of maroon
mapping my body.


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ouch...
gripping read~
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I love you for your greatest gift by Annora

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I note your desires are becoming known.
Yes, I love you. I love you will allow me to use your body
to fill in my spaces.

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Eroticly clever~
Annoras natural talent for writing
hot and erotic literature shines in this
poem, Annora also had these poems post as well
Merry Christmas
We are Net lovers
What Does it Matter

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Valley of Glassby Du Lac

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The valley so stunning,
Mesmerizing and cold,
Crystal mountains, rivers of ice,
Siren sounds echoes,
Harmony of a Valley of Glass,
Seducing songs glide,
Gently her hand does one grasp,


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an enchanting read~
vivid and alluring
mystique poetry

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I woke up alone again today by Stryderthorongil

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Standing in front of her place I stare down at the ground,
At my feet, bronze, rectangular, the grass neatly mowed, fresh flowers


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wow, powerful and endearing poem
leads in so many direstions into one
powerful ending, great poem~
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History Bookby Belegon

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Far better
to focus
on things you can change.
Leave yesterday
to pillow crying,


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encouraging poem~
inspirational, cute~
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a Paris Rose by My Erotic Tale

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that's the new poems for Saturday 18 2004,
thanks for the read~

NEW POEMS REVIEW
Sunday, December 19, 2004

There isn’t a lot of poetry today, and here I woke early with a pot of espresso ready to settle into no less than a hundred reads. Yet, it was barely a sip before I finished them all, which left me to conclude that poets are a lazy lot when it comes to turning phrases on weekends . Well, except for Uncle Pervey and PenguinFreak, who seemed to write most of the days selections. Certainly, they take the prize for most poems posted on this single day.

Being the pop culture whore that I am, Uncle Pervey did manage to make me chuckle with his celebrity poem TV’s Fantasy Sex Goddesses!

While I have read much better offerings by this poet, in fact just yesterday, and while the lines do not always keep rhythm with the intended flow, he does have a good sense of dirty humour, and like I said, I’m a pop culture whore.

Of course, if you want to get my attention, you need only use the name Lauren Hynde in your title. For this reason, I was immediately drawn to read Ode to Lauren Hynde. Who wouldn’t be? This was an offering by Sack, who seems, as of late, to be paying poetic homage to many on the Literotica boards.

(Is he kissing ass, I wonder?)

While recounting a tale of murder, it is obvious that some of his word choices are inspired by Ms. Hynde. I could have done without the images of bacteria and cells, they just didn’t work for me, but otherwise Sack turns a few nice lines:

like old withered wheat stalks
and
as they fade to black for eternity

Speaking of titles, Princess Rayann has one of the coolest titles of the day: lemon milk.

I just love this title. The poem is a much more creative BDSM piece than I usually see. I felt the title aptly reflected the narrator’s described relationship to pleasure/pain, and to the taste of cock. She does offer the image in conjunction to cum. It is a colourful reference indeed, since like the title itself, a cock is used with dual purpose. Very sly.

And these are ‘A few of my favourite things’:

From Du Lac’s Muse Music

Thankful the muse
Grateful to know
No longer unique
Alone no more to go.

The anger in Donagle’s Loneliness

And the twist in Steve Porter’s Babs Is Dead

Well, that's it for today folks.

monday new poems

New Poems

A Reign Again by jthserra. This is poetry with audio, I cannot hear it, but the poem, in print alone, is well worth a read. I especially enjoyed the images that this part stirred:
In my dusty rush to beat the rain
that beat the plain like drums
I heard drops resound a rhythm
as cracked earth healed
into a well-heeled soil -- rich and dark
that flowed away in rivulets....

Train Wreck by impulse. Wow, yes this accurately describes a train wreck, I have been close to lives like the ones mentioned here. Read it, and see if any of it relates to your life, I kinda hope it doesnt though. This is a dark, sort of desperate poem...

This Night Isby, Angeline.
Brrr!! a frosty poem, with a sortacreepy sounding snowman, and some spectacular imagery. I will admit it, I just adore this poet's work and I am glad to see her submit something this playful and intriguing at the same time
...Pale canvas beckons
for crunchy giggles,
and wing flutters
embrace flight’s
imagination....

Hokey Pokey by Reltne. This is funny, but very short, so I wont even drop a hint...


The Joke by Tristesse. This is a light hearted poem, fun to read and enjoy


Backflips into Green Morose by Temple of the Heart. I love the title, and the poem fits just fine into that title. I think it would benefit from a bit of restructuring, but all in all, I liked the alliteration and the word choices. I hope to see more from this poet, in this style.

In October, by jthserra. I have the oddest feeling I have read this before Jim, did you have it on the passion thread perhaps? I love the haunting quality you have given this, the softer tones, the silence of October seem sto jump at the whisper of...cold...very nice work

...twist tied and
tingling
barely wrapped
for the cold...

Lost Your pussy lately? by My Erotic Tail.. Yes, I have lost my pussy, but its been years, its probably all dead and dessicated by now...hmm, makes one wonder


Messenger, by Tathagata, I will brand as my favorite of the day. I have a thing about crows,Tath, I have had them bring me "messages" and I know they are a powerful symbol in many ways. I love the images in this poem, and especially loved the ending..thank you


and last, but certainly not least, I want to recommend Little Boy, by rikaaim, for the story it tells. It needs to be tightened, but the core, the feelings, are all there and are bare and aching to be read. Plase do so, and offer comments and helpful suggestions. I am pretty certain that quite a few poets have come here and been accepted solely on the basis of what may be an imperfect poem structurally, but some one had the foresight and the heart to welcome them ( and me) in, so lets spread som echeer and happiness ( this coming from the poet wannabe wearing the grinch hoodie


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well, that is it for me. I want to extend sincere thanks to WickedEve for stepping in last week. I had no internet acces and now way to even ask her to do the reviews for me, so I am very grateful that the poems that day were not neglected. I hope everyone has a Wonderful Holiday, what ever you celebrate, please drive safely and keep joy in your hearts, its a good thing, kindness is, spread it around

maria

Tuesday

There are only a few poems up at the moment. I have one approved but not on the new poems list yet, so I'm sure many more will appear in another hour or two. I'll be back later with reviews.

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Well, here it is hours later and no more new poems. I have a new poem, overcast attic, that's on my sumbissions page but not the new poetry list. I bet there are others. But at the moment, there are only 6 new poems. Go read them! I'll be back if more show up.

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Okay, more poems are now up.

The first one is an E poem:

eel skin bound
by annaswirls ©

set out, propped up by reputation
onion skin eyelids filter more
when open wide, pupil slit narrows
and tongue flicks the air for a taste
of the pressurized jasmine
that sends the signal
there is nothing worth biting here

Read and comment. I would comment but I'm not sure how I feel about it yet. Of course, it's noisy here with the elves. Anyway, get started with this poem and I'll return when it's quieter.

Tuesday

Have you read anna's E poem? Well, it's mentioned above, incase you haven't noticed.

I just read moon by My Erotic Tale. A poem about this kind of moon could have been poorly written, quite easily. But Art writes a fun, rather sexy, and brief poem, with lines like these:

balanced in swing
and poised

button flipped denim
walking away

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Solstice Midnight
by Liar ©

A new day will dawn,
a solar disc peek
over the ridge.

Shy now,
as if it hadn't
a hundred million times
already.

Lovely poem that's written only the way Liar can write a poem. I read this one twice. I suggest you read it at least once and leave him some comments.

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Okay, I just did two reviews and I will be back. I'm really slow today... in many ways.

Well, here I am eating my sugar free, fat free, carb free yogurt. Surprisingly, it has some flavor. Cool. Anyway, I get to this poem and I'm trying to look at it objectively, but... well, go read it. I want to see some other comments.

Then I moved on to an anna poem, sucking down the grid. When I read this part "for twisted Santa and inflatable Pooh. Wire frame reindeer dip and turn" I assumed anna had been sneaking around my neighborhood.
Then when I read:
that flicker, twitch and
reflect off high step boots
that press into mattress,
open and arched.
I knew she was NOT in my geriatric neighborhood.

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