Kantarii
I'm Not A Bitch!
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Looking for feedback on my latest chapter of "A Slut's Triangle". Chapter 11. The link is posted below. It's a transexuals & cross dresser theme story that is wrapped up in a love triangle. Looking for a decent critique, not so much on grammatical errors, but for flow of dialogue and mood, etc. thanks.
Kant
https://www.literotica.com/s/a-sluts-triangle-pt-11 (Kimbery and Ashleigh have sex)
Kant
https://www.literotica.com/s/a-sluts-triangle-pt-11 (Kimbery and Ashleigh have sex)
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