jeyalakshu
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Fellas, this is my first story series in this site. Please read and make some comments in this thread about the story.
Any comments about grammar, story play, words usage, logic mismatch or any other are welcome.
Part 1: https://www.literotica.com/s/alternative-pt-01
Part 2: https://www.literotica.com/s/alternative-pt-02
Any comments about grammar, story play, words usage, logic mismatch or any other are welcome.
Part 1: https://www.literotica.com/s/alternative-pt-01
Part 2: https://www.literotica.com/s/alternative-pt-02
