LastLostIdols
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http://www.literotica.com/s/the-twisted-west-ch-01
Ok so I'd like some feedback on my first post. I'd prefer fair constructive criticism but I can take abit of bluntness of how horrible it might be, just want to improve it and my writing for the future so come on, hit me with your best shot.
It's a transgender & crossdresser story. Heading further into the story it's a fantasy due to the traditional plot of cursed man with every woman lusting after him, blah blah old idea, blah blah new twist.
So any help will be greatly appreciated. Thanks.
Ok so I'd like some feedback on my first post. I'd prefer fair constructive criticism but I can take abit of bluntness of how horrible it might be, just want to improve it and my writing for the future so come on, hit me with your best shot.
It's a transgender & crossdresser story. Heading further into the story it's a fantasy due to the traditional plot of cursed man with every woman lusting after him, blah blah old idea, blah blah new twist.
So any help will be greatly appreciated. Thanks.