BastionSeraphic
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Hello all! So I wrote my first erotica short story a few weeks ago and I would really like some proper feedback since I intend to write more stories of this nature. This story I'm posting is a story about two men named Maxwell and Kastor. Maxwell has recently been through some bad times in his life involving his family and his sexuality and wonders into a bar owned by Kastor for a drink and things pick up from there.
Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated, no matter how harsh or blatant or blunt. Thanks again!
Respite:
https://www.literotica.com/s/respite-3
Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated, no matter how harsh or blatant or blunt. Thanks again!
Respite:
https://www.literotica.com/s/respite-3