Sinstories
Yep, that's me
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I am seriously not a writer, everything I've written since HS has been technical white papers or process descriptions......
Would be interested in some feedback on whether I should go back and just be a reader.
First story https://www.literotica.com/s/not-quite-the-brady-bunch
It felt clunky and disjointed, especially the conversations, as I wrote it but seemed to be readable.
Story is about a girl and her stepfather. Rather formulaic from there.
I do wonder if part of my issue was trying to find realistic dialog and story-line in what is a rather unrealistic scenario.
TIA
Would be interested in some feedback on whether I should go back and just be a reader.
First story https://www.literotica.com/s/not-quite-the-brady-bunch
It felt clunky and disjointed, especially the conversations, as I wrote it but seemed to be readable.
Story is about a girl and her stepfather. Rather formulaic from there.
I do wonder if part of my issue was trying to find realistic dialog and story-line in what is a rather unrealistic scenario.
TIA
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