[Generic] Beta Reader for Short Story Needed, Editing Help Greatly Appreciated

HankUric · Jul 20, 2016

[800 Words] Beta Reader 4 Short Story Needed, Editing Help Appreciated.

Was inspired by the following prompt and would like some help with beta-reading/editing a short ~800 word story. PM if able to help out.

Hypoxia;1329808 said:
Pretty experimental. The 1st-person POV is not a person but the fuck itself, telling of its experience from the inside. I'm reminded of a hentai illo showing cunnilingus as viewed from within, at her cervix looking out at the slurping tongue. How might A FUCK'S TALE go?

sr71plt · Jul 20, 2016

This is a better place to ask that question: http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=1161443&page=2

HankUric · Jul 20, 2016

sr71plt said:
This is a better place to ask that question: http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=1161443&page=2

Thanks! *Tips Hat*

[Generic] Beta Reader for Short Story Needed, Editing Help Greatly Appreciated

HankUric

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HankUric

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