Took some feedback and posted another one-shot

First of all, thank you for the feedback on the previous post.

https://www.literotica.com/s/grey-6

Would you guys mind telling me exactly what you inferred from the story? Im gonna post what my interpretation of it here, just tell me if it matches and if not, what was your interpretation of it. Read the spoilers after the story please.





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SPOILER said:

Andrea Brown's sons are dead, killed by Greta. Her husband, a police officer, hunts down greta and her gang and extracts revenge but they've already lost what was most precious to them.

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That was pretty much my interpretation as well. But I was left wondering why a gang led by a woman would kill two boys, or what you mean by "busy saving the world".

As for the story, again, I think it's written very well, but not even a little bit erotic.

Thanks

hylas_ said:

That was pretty much my interpretation as well. But I was left wondering why a gang led by a woman would kill two boys, or what you mean by "busy saving the world".

As for the story, again, I think it's written very well, but not even a little bit erotic.

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Hey thanks for the feedback.

The next one will probably be erotic.