This is actually a request for somebody to take a run-through of an old story of mine that is in bad need of an overhaul. It was featured in here at one time, but was removed due to underage content (actually not a major aspect of the story and one I want to remove).
The story is rather big, over 45,000 words. So not looking for a complete edit, but somebody looking over it to catch anything I missed the first time I posted it here and other advice would be appreciated.
The story is rather big, over 45,000 words. So not looking for a complete edit, but somebody looking over it to catch anything I missed the first time I posted it here and other advice would be appreciated.