donaldelliott11
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I'm only here once in a while, but I don't see much evidence that ideas ever become stories. I guess most would-be writers of erotica have pretty good ides what they want to write about?
But here is my complicated idea. It was inspired by some first-hand comments by a poster here on LitForum in another context. It has 2 bi characters. [A would-be author who is more comfortable writing straight sex, or gay sex, could focus on scenes of the one, not the other.]
An essential (to me) thread in this story is who knows what, when, and what other the characters think they know about who knows what. Is that clear? <smile>.
1) A dominant bisexual man has seduced a submissive married male co-worker. [Insert much gay sex here.] Dom meets the sub's unsuspecting wife at some sort of office party.
2) Dom decides sub's wife is pretty hot, so he seduces her. [Insert much straight sex here.] Dom enjoys sex with hubby in the office, and cuckold's wife in their home. He enjoys fact that neither spouse knows the other is cheating, let alone know that they're cheating with HIM. He's having sex with both of them.
3) Dom lessens wife's guilty feelings by outing his colleague (but not himself) to the wife. Shows her pics of hubby having some sort of sex with an unidentifiable male. They both, for their own obvious reasons, increasingly disrespect him, she as her husband/lover and he as his colleague/boss. When they are together now, they both get a thrill from denigrating him. They gloat that he's a clueless fool, and Dom gloats that wife knows hubby's a fag, but DOESN'T know that he is himself bi-sexual.
4) Hubby finds out. He first discovers he's being cuckolded, but not by whom, and he gets a masochistic thrill out of it. Wife becomes increasingly dominant in their bedroom. Forces him to give her more oral attention, and even feeds him surreptitious creampies, while denying him "normal" intercourse. He loves all of it (and knows darned well he's eating sloppy pussy!)
5) He arranges a hidden vidcam so he can watch them, and discovers the bull's identity. He gets even more masochistically excited. Allows them to continue all of it - the gay sex outside the house and the cuckolding inside.
6) I don't care how the author ends this. Cuckold could divorce the wife and fire the co-worker, though I'm not sure why he would. The wife could dump him, but again, why? He could let them know he knows everything, and wants to continue on his terms, whatever those might be.
I hope somebody has fun with this. Of all the good writers I follow, it seems that this might best suit Dixeenormous or Cyanlot, perhaps Walterio.
But here is my complicated idea. It was inspired by some first-hand comments by a poster here on LitForum in another context. It has 2 bi characters. [A would-be author who is more comfortable writing straight sex, or gay sex, could focus on scenes of the one, not the other.]
An essential (to me) thread in this story is who knows what, when, and what other the characters think they know about who knows what. Is that clear? <smile>.
1) A dominant bisexual man has seduced a submissive married male co-worker. [Insert much gay sex here.] Dom meets the sub's unsuspecting wife at some sort of office party.
2) Dom decides sub's wife is pretty hot, so he seduces her. [Insert much straight sex here.] Dom enjoys sex with hubby in the office, and cuckold's wife in their home. He enjoys fact that neither spouse knows the other is cheating, let alone know that they're cheating with HIM. He's having sex with both of them.
3) Dom lessens wife's guilty feelings by outing his colleague (but not himself) to the wife. Shows her pics of hubby having some sort of sex with an unidentifiable male. They both, for their own obvious reasons, increasingly disrespect him, she as her husband/lover and he as his colleague/boss. When they are together now, they both get a thrill from denigrating him. They gloat that he's a clueless fool, and Dom gloats that wife knows hubby's a fag, but DOESN'T know that he is himself bi-sexual.
4) Hubby finds out. He first discovers he's being cuckolded, but not by whom, and he gets a masochistic thrill out of it. Wife becomes increasingly dominant in their bedroom. Forces him to give her more oral attention, and even feeds him surreptitious creampies, while denying him "normal" intercourse. He loves all of it (and knows darned well he's eating sloppy pussy!)
5) He arranges a hidden vidcam so he can watch them, and discovers the bull's identity. He gets even more masochistically excited. Allows them to continue all of it - the gay sex outside the house and the cuckolding inside.
6) I don't care how the author ends this. Cuckold could divorce the wife and fire the co-worker, though I'm not sure why he would. The wife could dump him, but again, why? He could let them know he knows everything, and wants to continue on his terms, whatever those might be.
I hope somebody has fun with this. Of all the good writers I follow, it seems that this might best suit Dixeenormous or Cyanlot, perhaps Walterio.
