I uploaded two stories:
https://www.literotica.com/s/savages-ch-01
https://www.literotica.com/s/savages-ch-02
I got some votes on them, but no feedback or comments.
One of only two reasons for me posting them to Literotica is to get feedback.
I personally think Chapter 1 needs to be rewritten from scratch (it was written such a long time ago and some simple editing can only do so much)
Chapter 2 is also quite old, but I think it is much better.
I'm contemplating if I should even upload Chapter 3 (which out of the 4.5 I've written so far is the best one).
Looking to hear both the good and the bad sides to each story. Especially interested in the female opinion since, I'm kinda scared I write from my own male perspective too much.
Thanks in advance
https://www.literotica.com/s/savages-ch-01
https://www.literotica.com/s/savages-ch-02
I got some votes on them, but no feedback or comments.
One of only two reasons for me posting them to Literotica is to get feedback.
I personally think Chapter 1 needs to be rewritten from scratch (it was written such a long time ago and some simple editing can only do so much)
Chapter 2 is also quite old, but I think it is much better.
I'm contemplating if I should even upload Chapter 3 (which out of the 4.5 I've written so far is the best one).
Looking to hear both the good and the bad sides to each story. Especially interested in the female opinion since, I'm kinda scared I write from my own male perspective too much.
Thanks in advance