Angeline
Poet Chick
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- Mar 11, 2002
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Body paint its greatly over rated
Thank you; I've often wondered. I think I'd just rather have sex and then eat a Snickers bar, but I'm so vanilla.
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Body paint its greatly over rated
Chocolate and saltiness dont mix if you get my drift ... I have tried mayonaiisse as I love it so but all that did was put me off it lol
I thank you for your insightful observations, Angeline. In fact, i found them so insightful that i re-worked each piece: Just a few tweaks. But, alas, i guess i tweaked one too many times ... i submitted the reworked versions as EDITs and they were deleted. So, the links provided in Angeline's original post won't work. All this of course BEGS me to look at the works again again [sic] before i reresubmit them.
Thanks again, Angeline ... from the faux-sweetie to the real one.
steve porter brings us two poems, a dark sonnet, My Love is Like A Fallen Rose evokes a real melancholy as you weep with the narrative voice and sorrow at the passing of love and my favourite of the pair, This is a cultural exchange is fantastic description of a moment between two beings. I can't really say why it floors me in a poetic sense, but I just love this.
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took years of middle management and being a cult leader to learn how to write that way - I was hoping someone would catch "I AM JUST". A slightly different spin on Senna Jawa's therory.My pick of the day is This place blows by the sometimes curmudgeonly twelveoone. It's spare and seemingly simple, but (and this is what I like in much of his poetry) it is very open to interpretation. How should the reader define "blows"? "Shingles"? "I AM JUST"? And the ending, given some of the discussion on the forum of late, is pretty damn funny. Made me laugh, anyway. There's a lot to learn in this little poem about word choice and line breaks. It deserves at least three reads so you can see the variety of interpretations open to you.
Peace and stay warm and safe today.
Angeline
took years of middle management and being a cult leader to learn how to write that way - I was hoping someone would catch "I AM JUST". A slightly different spin on Senna Jawa's therory.
adding one...
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=345804
My Witching Hour by Swallowedscream. It has a mysterious feel to it, everything is not out in the open, which is good for starters. I would like to see her develop and think things out, she has good poetic instincts.
You must read What is may never be by WomanPariah. It's a lesson in how to make a sonnet timely and interesting in 2008. It's a very smooth read because of wonderful line breaks and enjambment with terrific word play. I don't get excited about poems I read here very often anymore, but this one really grabbed me. Great writing, WP!