robertreams
Literotica Guru
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Okay here goes. There is a story of mine, posted here in 2009
http://www.literotica.com/s/best-friends-47
After all these years I received today an anonymouse comment: "I should be ashamed to say I am a retired English teacher. If this "Terribly written" story was any example, it is "no wonder our kids today can't read and write."
I went back and looked and yeah, maybe too many commas and some bad punctuation around quotes. (I had no idea in 2009 how serious a thing writing for Literotica was. Now I try to use an editor every time, but some things can still slip by.
Here's my question. Yep, some errors. But horrible writing? Oh well, I'll toss it out there and ask what you all think.
http://www.literotica.com/s/best-friends-47
After all these years I received today an anonymouse comment: "I should be ashamed to say I am a retired English teacher. If this "Terribly written" story was any example, it is "no wonder our kids today can't read and write."
I went back and looked and yeah, maybe too many commas and some bad punctuation around quotes. (I had no idea in 2009 how serious a thing writing for Literotica was. Now I try to use an editor every time, but some things can still slip by.
Here's my question. Yep, some errors. But horrible writing? Oh well, I'll toss it out there and ask what you all think.