Seeking an editor...

Hello, I finished the draft of my first submission and need help specifically with the format of the dialog, but could also use other suggested edits. The length of my short story is 5.4K words and in Word (.docx) format. It is first time sex, straight/hetero based on actual events.

Thanks in advance.

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