OOC -- "The Heist" (Please Read: New Writers always welcome)

"The Heist"



This is the OOC and Interest Check, so feel free to post your questions and/or comments here.​

Main IC Thread

Introduction and Interest Check

Character Profile Page

List of Characters



The Story So Far -- a summary of the story.

The Setting -- Pics and other information about the Bank, the streets, the city, and more.


Updates, Notices, Etc. -- Posts worth reading, at least once, maybe more.

Introduction

Introduction​

This is the OOC and Interest Check, so feel free to post your questions and/or comments here.


Instead of my re-posting the Story Description here, please see the Interest Check. It has a full description of the story line.

If you have a question or comment that you think would benefit the other prospective writers, feel free to post an Interest Check Response here; or you can always PM me.

The Main IC Thread begins with the hostage situation already in full swing. Characters will be on the floor, surrounded by armed men. I am open to one or two characters being hidden in the bathroom or where ever; I'm sure they will eventually be found and dealt with.

Some of the Crooks are expendable. Writers are free to ask about dramatic situations involving "taking out" the Crooks, but remember the physics law about every action having an equal and opposite reaction...? Forget "equal". (I bolded the word "ask" because writers are not allowed to spontaneously "take out" a Crook. Without Crooks, there is no story.)

Character Profile Page

Character Profile Page​

To Participate:

1. Read the "Introduction and Interest Check" for specifics on the story, to determine whether this is the story you want to write in.

2. Read most if not all of the Main IC Thread so you are caught up on the story.

3. Create your Character by copying the Character Profile Page below, completing it, THEN PM'ing IT TO THE HOST. Do not post it here until it is approved via PM!! (Please refer to the CPP for Peter Taylor, one of the Host's PCs, for an example.)

4. KEEP YOU CPP BRIEF !! The purpose of a CPP is: first, to allow the Host to review and approve (with or without changes) our character; and, second, to give other writers QUICK, EASY TO USE information about your Character. DO NOT USE LONG PARAGRAPHS of information: brief, to the point! (If there is detail nuance and other "fluff"you think we need to know, add it to the end in "Anything Else...".

5. Once approved, post your CPP here and have fun.



(Delete all of the stuff in parentheses before PMing the CPP to the host. It is there to answer any questions you may have and should not be part of your final CPP. Thanks.)

CHARACTER'S NAME:
(Please pick something easy for the others to use in collaborations.)


WRITER'S NAME:
(Lit' ID and, if preferred, a nickname.)


CHARACTER DESCRIPTION: PICs ARE MANDATORY.
(Please do not use a pic for a well known celebrity; be original. There are lots of Modeling, news/media, and pic exchange site out there, with tens of thousands of pics of people who are NOT Angelina Jolie or Mel Gibson or that beaver guy ... beeber guy? Who ever. Also, not every character has to be a super model or Mister Universe.)

(Your pic is your primary description tool, but add anything else you feel you need to, such as age, height, weight, eye color, etc., that is not obvious from your pic. Again, see Taylor's CPP if you need more explanation.)


CHARACTER'S "PLACE" IN THE STORY:
(Bank employee? Customer? Cop? FBI Agent? Janitor? Crook? Keep it simple here; this is not background, it's "place in the story".)


CHARACTER'S BACKGROUND:
(Keep it brief; stick to stuff that will help the other writers imagine collaborative opportunities. Put the "fluff" at the bottom.)

(It's perfectly fine to be vague here; being vague allow you to roll with the story as the other writers post to it. Remember to only post what you think might play a part in future collaborations; we don't care if your Character won the science fair in middle school unless it's going to become part of a future reply or collaboration, right?)

(If you post background information in replies during the course of the story, please return here and add that information to this section with the date IN RED to draw our attention.)


CHARACTER'S SEXUAL BACKGROUND:
(Again, brief! Fluff at the bottom.)

(These are two distinct areas of information: First, stuff other characters know (are you sleeping with a co-worker, or is your "partner" in the bank with you?); and Second, stuff no other Characters know but which you want the other writers to know, for collaboration. Again, it's perfectly fine to be vague, as above.)


WRITER'S PREFERENCES CONCERNING SEXUAL COLLABORATION:
(Here, you are encouraged to include "fluff". It is important for us to know what you enjoy and don't enjoy writing about. Please describe how you write sex, including (if possible) a link to a previously written sex scene -- not an entire RP (which requires us to search through hundreds of replies for the "good stuff") -- so we can see how you write.)

(Explain your writing: do you like erotica or porn, the difference of which is defined in Taylor's CPP; do you chafe at what I call the nasty words (cock, cunt, etc.); do you write erotica or porn descriptions; are there forms of sex you like or do not like to write; will you write same sex, anal, forced, multi-partner, masturbation, exhibition, etc., etc. ... I think you see where I'm going with this. The more we know about what you like to collaborate in, the better.)


CHARACTER'S INTERACTIONS IN THE SRP:
(As your character interacts/collaborates, if there is anything specific you want other writers to remember, please return here and post it with the date in red.)


ANYTHING ELSE YOU WANT TO SAY HERE:
(Like it says, anything else.)

List of Characters

List of Characters



The Crooks​

Peter "PT" Taylor -- PIC -- Writer: AGuyWhoWrites

Thomas "Tommy" Cramer -- PIC -- Writer: AGuyWhoWrites

Theo Gray (NPC, for now; wanna play him, ask host.)

Gregory "Dirt" Grimes (NPC, for now; wanna play him, ask host.)

The Hostages​

Jennifer "Jenn" Brown -- Writer: HottieKatie
--- Bank Customer

James Statham -- Writer: Knightmare27
--- Bank Employee

Abigail Parker -- Writer: Belinda35
--- Bank Employee: Portrait Pic, Body Pic

Sophie -- Writer: HottieKatie
--- Bank Employee: Portrait

The Authorities​

Note: Many of these Characters are available; simply ask the Host for more information about adopting them.

Lieutenant Davis, Harvey City Police -- (NPC, for now; wanna play her, ask host.).

Sheriff Jill Keenan -- (NPC, for now; wanna play her, ask host.)
--- Hints have been made that she is bi-sexual or lesbian. See last paragraphs of this post.

"Federalie" -- NPC and available, however, there are some secrets that she will not yet know but will play a key part in her role. It should be quite a twist; ask Host for details.

"Unidentified agent" -- Writer: HottieKatie.
--- Homeland Security, although little more is known.

And Others​

Samantha -- Writer: HottieKatie.
--- Pizza Delivery girl and Cramer's "squeeze".

Charmaine Cramer -- Writer: HottieKatie
--- Cramer's Sister (not on sight ... yet)

I find this story appealing, you can count on me for it!.

Will be following the details

CHARACTER'S NAME:

Peter Taylor


WRITER'S NAME:

AGuyWhoWrites (aka Tee)


CHARACTER DESCRIPTION: PIC 1 2 3 4 5 6

5'10", 202 lbs; well built (from military, then military prison)

Hazel eyes (though he wears the shades most of the time).

Significant knife scar across back of his neck; another across the inside of his left fore arm.

Wearing a bullet proof vest over a nice (jacket-less) suit. (He entered the bank in the full suit and, when the shit hit the fan, shed the jacket and pulled the vest from his briefcase.)

Armed with a 9mm Desert Eagle. Has a smaller 9mm Taurus in an ankle holster.


CHARACTER'S "PLACE" IN THE STORY:

Crook -- "boss" of the 3 men working with him.


CHARACTER'S BACKGROUND:

Former Navy SEAL. Last rank was Chief.

He and the heist crew hijacked a Navy payroll vehicle. The charges didn't stick, but he spend two years in the brig while the Navy attempted to find the missing money.

Eventually a good lawyer got him out of jail and discharged (dishonorably).


CHARACTER'S SEXUAL BACKGROUND:

June 3, 2011 KNOWN ONLY TO CRAMER, Taylor was "fooling around" with the daughters of the heist's planner, which may be why the heist fell apart when the crew was only minutes into it.

You'll learn more as time goes on.


WRITER'S PREFERENCES CONCERNING SEXUAL COLLABORATION:

I write erotica, not porn, which I saw defined here once as:


In addition, I don't write nasty: you won't see me using cock and cunt or writing fuck me hard in my hole or cum on my face you stallion. Come on, really?

Now, Peter Taylor is a bit of a freak, and that will show at times, but I am totally capable of writing a XXX sex scene with R-rated terminology and phrases.

I've written vanilla, multi-partner, forced-familiar, rape, and (as a female) same sex. I have no problem writing male same sex, though I haven't yet. I will write bondage, although I will sound like a guy watching a bondage video. (My personal experience with bondage, while not limited in frequency, is limited in scope; think zip ties and forced-familiar.)


ANYTHING ELSE YOU WANT TO SAY HERE:

I like to collaborate on the one- and two-liner scenes between two characters -- sex and/or back-and-forth conversation -- in Side Threads, which I link back to the main thread. They are easier to follow, and therefore more enjoyable to both write and read.

I will collaborate with any writer who asks, but I like to see other writers collaborate with one another as well; it's a bit overwhelming sometimes for the host if every one wants to ONLY collaborate with him/her.

I prefer to "perform" the Side Threads at a time when both (or all) writers are available to finish the scene entirely. It prevents the Main Thread from being held up while we spend two or three days writing a Side Thread.

CHARACTER'S INTERACTIONS IN THE SRP:

Day 1, 10am: Attempted a bank heist, which resulted in a hostage situation.

The Setting​

The Bank -- exterior shot of the Suburbia Savings and Loan.

The Lobby -- as viewed from before the vault.

The Bank Vault -- located in the center rear.

Inside the Vault

"MoneySafe" Vaults -- an "overflow" vault system popular with new or small banks; ours is both.

The Story so far​

This is a summary of the story so far. While it will help to familiarize new writers to the story, it is in NO WAY a substitute for reading the entirety of the Main IC Thread.

Prior to Day One of the Heist:

--- Cramer, one of the crooks, has been fucking a pizza delivery girl, Samantha, who he met at the Crew's motel. (This is important later.)


DAY ONE:

9:30 am --- A Harvey City Police Officer, Lt. Davis receives a tip that a bank is being cased. She calls for the aid of Harvey County Sheriff Deputy Jill Keenan and they each bring their officers and deputies to watch the bank. (FYI: "Deputy" capitalized always refers only to Keenan; "deputies" lower case refers to all the deputies, including Keenan if the point of view is from someone other the Keenan.)

10:02 am --- The heist Crew invades, herding everyone (or so they hope) to their faces on the lobby floor. Almost immediately, the alarms -- which were supposed to have been disabled -- sound, surprising them.

Keenan and the others are also surprised when the bank being robbed is not the one they were staking out, but the Suburbia Savings and Loan, two blocks behind them.

As the Authorities are rushing to the bank, a dark van speeds out of the parking lot, over a curb, and onto the highway. Units take chase.

Within a minute, the bank is surrounded. From inside the bank, Cramer fires a shotgun, shattering a plate glass window. The authorities pull back and surround the building.

10:15 am --- Post #1 -- our RP begins. (The entries above come from replies that follow this one. They are Post #3, 4, and 18.)

11:10 am --- The FBI arrives. (They were tipped as well, which will be established later.)

12:05 pm --- A half dozen "Fed-looking" vans show up, parking away from the rest of the Authorities; they are filled with suited, sun glass-wearing men and women who, with the exception of a young, mysterious Agent, do not approach the others.

12:30 pm --- A Federalie arrives; she's 1000 miles out of her jurisdiction, yet Deputy Keenan's boss instructs that she is to be kept fully in the loop. (See
this post for introduction of her.

1:10 pm --- The hostages are herded into the Conference Room and given pee breaks; Taylor, with Jenn as a chaperone, monitor the females, as Gray and Grimes watch over the males.

1:40pm --- After the last female finishes, Taylor and Jenn have sex in the bathroom. (The flirting began almost immediately, but the "activity" begins at Post #28.)

Overlapping with this, Samantha has arrived with a pizza order that Taylor playfully called in before noon. Cramer, eager to see Samantha, demands that she complete the order.

2:05pm --- Samantha flees the scene. Cramer comes unglued. Pissed, he goes to the back of the bank to be alone, but instead finds Abigail hiding in the Employees Restroom. He is rough with her ... then proceeds to rape her.

2:10 pm --- The pizza arrives, traded for two hostages, and is distributed. Taylor begins to notice that James is showing attention to Sophie, who has sidled over closer to him.

2:15 --- Taylor invites James to the lobby to offer him some "alone time" with Sophie, under the impression that the two are a couple. Taylor tells James that either he fucks Sophie and lets Taylor watch ... or Taylor will do the girl himself.

2:20pm --- Taylor finds Cramer and Abigail at the end of the rape. Cramer returns to the lobby, dazed, while Taylor takes charge of Abigail.

2:25pm --- In a crazed daze, Cramer ventures out onto the sidewalk, demanding to see Samantha. Taylor retrieves him, but not after a mysterious female voice -- the still mysterious Homeland Security Agent, calls him on the phone and guarantees him he will get what he wants.

2:30pm --- The Crew is back in action, with Cramer back to his old self. They begin the search for the "treasure". Minutes later, Cramer gets a call from his sister, who demands he surrender; the two of them have sexual tilts that are certainly going to get them in trouble.

2:50 --- Sophie is released to the mysterious Homeland Security Agent, who threatens Taylor: try to come out of the bank before dawn, and everyone dies.

4:55pm --- Informs all that they're staying the night. (See previous link.)

Deleted. (Made a double entry, sorry.)

CHARACTER'S NAME:

Thomas "Tommy" Cramer


WRITER'S NAME:

AGuyWhoWrites (aka Tony)


CHARACTER DESCRIPTION: PIC of Cramer

36 years old.

6'1", 195; lanky.

Walks with a slight limp in his left leg. Grimaces a lot, and not only while walking; obviously in pain.

Cramer is wearing a bullet proof vest over a long sleeved black shirt, with jeans.

He is armed with a 9mm Desert Eagle (just like Taylor's) and a 12 gauge sawed off shotgun.

CHARACTER'S "PLACE" IN THE STORY:

Crook -- part of Taylor's crew; Taylor's best friend.


CHARACTER'S BACKGROUND:

Former Navy Petty Officer (not SEALs).

Under Taylor, he and the heist crew hijacked a Navy payroll vehicle. The charges didn't stick, but he spent a year -- the shortest of the sentences -- in the brig while the Navy attempted to find the missing money.

Eventually, he was discharged (dishonorably).


CHARACTER'S SEXUAL BACKGROUND:

He likes things "hard", but you would never know it by his in-the-public-eye interactions with others.


WRITER'S PREFERENCES CONCERNING SEXUAL COLLABORATION:

Same as in Taylor Profile.


CHARACTER'S INTERACTIONS IN THE SRP:

3 June 2011 -- Part of the heist crew.


ANYTHING ELSE YOU WANT TO SAY HERE:

Cramer is a secondary PC. Once he decides that his crew needs to enjoy themselves while being held up, Taylor will certainly try to find a willing play thing for his friend.

Deleted. This space reserved for a future NPC, or PC, or danish with sprinkles ... who knows.

CHARACTER'S NAME:

Jennifer "Jenn" Brown


WRITER'S NAME:

HottieKattie


CHARACTER DESCRIPTION:

Pic

Quite beautiful woman, long black straight hair, quite tall (5'8 or so) and thin wearing a black short dress.

She is a bit defiant and she doesn't look very scared, maybe she trusts the police are taking them out with no problems, But when the time comes, she could do whatever needed to save her life (or others, deep inside she is a very compassionate woman)


CHARACTER'S "PLACE" IN THE STORY:

Hostage


CHARACTER'S BACKGROUND:

She works in something in which she helps people (maybe nurse, old people attendant or something) which kind of explains her compassionate character and willingness to help others in need.


CHARACTER'S SEXUAL BACKGROUND:
Haven't think of this, I'm open to suggestions though.


WRITER'S PREFERENCES CONCERNING SEXUAL COLLABORATION:

These are the things I've written so far:

The "longest ones" being:
Post #1
and
Post #2

Not much, and just setting posts, given I've been here for 2 days only, but I'm willing to give the best of me.

However I can adapt to any type of writing, being descriptive and not "nasty" if needed

I can write about anything but: rape, violence, underage, bestiality, scat, incest, heavy bondage. I don't usually do non-consent but I could write about it in this case given the character I've portrayed (since though she wouldn't be happy to do some things, she could if somebody was released).


ANYTHING ELSE YOU WANT TO SAY HERE:

No problem with the "side threads", in fact I think it is a good idea not to mess things up.

CHARACTER'S INTERACTIONS IN THE SRP:

Updates, Notices, Etc.​

These links will take you to pages that have information that are of value in knowing ... how much value is for you to decide.

What NOT to post in the OOC !!

Picture

CHARACTER'S NAME:

James Statham


WRITER'S NAME:

Knightmare27


CHARACTER DESCRIPTION:

25 years old, 6’, 190 lbs., very slight “padding”, but mostly fit

Dark brown eyes

Extremely short, almost black hair

Wears regular business clothing (white shirt, light grey suit pants, red and grey striped tie)


CHARACTER'S "PLACE" IN THE STORY:

Hostage


CHARACTER'S BACKGROUND:

Bank employee. This is his first full – time job. He is a college dropout who used to study engineering, but found that he had more of a head for practical stuff than theory.

He is unmarried and kind of unlucky when it comes to relationships. At the moment, he does not have a partner.

His parents are alive, but they live in a different state, and he does not see them often. He has an older brother who is in the military and a younger sister who is in college,


CHARACTER'S SEXUAL BACKGROUND:

Very occasional sexual encounters in college – mostly kissing and fondling, and has only gone “all the way” a handful of times.


WRITER'S PREFERENCES CONCERNING SEXUAL COLLABORATION:

I am very much into bondage, both as a dominant and as a submissive. So if anyone wants to add some elements of that, I would enjoy it.

Other than that, “vanilla” sex is good, too. Really, I am mostly interested in telling a story, albeit an erotic one. Open to try almost anything (except maybe extreme humiliation).

“Nasty” words do not bother me, although I prefer not to use them, as I find them a bit crude.


ANYTHING ELSE YOU WANT TO SAY HERE:

I am new to erotic roleplaying, but have roleplayed non – erotic before. So please be a bit lenient on my roleplaying in sex scenes – I’m a virgin, so to speak.

CHARACTER'S INTERACTIONS IN THE SRP:

Day 1, 10 am: Got taken hostage in the heist

Originally Posted by Belinda35
CHARACTER'S NAME: Abigail Parker


WRITER'S NAME:Belinda35

CHARACTER DESCRIPTION: pic

Age: 45 years. ethnicity_ White.
Height: 5'5 measurements: 36-25-35
Eyes: brown Hair_ dark brown, shoulderlength, bob
Not a tall, but well shaped woman with a pretty face, looking young for her age. Today she wears a black top and a grey pencil skirt, black tights an black pumps.

CHARACTER'S "PLACE" IN THE STORY:
Bank employee. She was just off to the toilet and is not really aware what is going on, but heard some noise and decided to keep in the toilets, waiting for what is going on.

CHARACTER'S BACKGROUND:
She doesn_t work very long in the bank. She just has been divorced and is single by now. She is quite shy.

CHARACTER'S SEXUAL BACKGROUND:
Being divorced and not easy at all, she has decided to become platonic.

WRITER'S PREFERENCES CONCERNING SEXUAL COLLABORATION:
You can do everything with me except god-modding. I like being dominated as much as you like.


CHARACTER'S INTERACTIONS IN THE SRP:
Once again, no god-modding (telling me what I do, say or wear). Anything else is fine.


ANYTHING ELSE YOU WANT TO SAY HERE:
See above.

Hi Belinda!

Nice to seeing you join us

To add a pic to a word you just select a word with you mouse and clink on the "insert link" button (it is the one below the "smilies" icon ) paste the link in the little window that opens, accept and that's it!

Thank you, I'll try to change it. By the way, would it be possible that everbody writes the characters name over each post in the ic thread?

Something like:
"Jane Doe

Hearing the noise, Jane opened the door, etc."

I find it a bit difficult to figure out the storyline in the ic without it, especially if you join later.

I'll try to do it from now on.

I've tried to do it before as much as possible saying at the beginning of each paragraph who was talking ans so... and stating clearly when a new character appeared... but I must have forgotten in some places. If you get lost in any of my post, just tell me and I'll edit whatever needed

Ok, good idea. I'll start all my IC posts from now on with the underlined character's name.

I almost forgot to post the bio!

CHARACTER'S NAME:

Sophie


WRITER'S NAME:

HottieKattie


CHARACTER DESCRIPTION:

Pic

27 years old, voluptuous and tall woman.
She doesn't usually fall for co-workers, but starts thinking about making an exception with James


CHARACTER'S "PLACE" IN THE STORY:

Hostage


CHARACTER'S BACKGROUND:

She is bank worker. She has been in the business for 10 years, but has recently moved to this town.


CHARACTER'S SEXUAL BACKGROUND:
She is quite open in her sexual relationships.
Hasn't had sex for a while as she has moved to a new place and doesn't know people to hang around with.


WRITER'S PREFERENCES CONCERNING SEXUAL COLLABORATION:

This is my SRP Profile
And here you can check what I've written so far.
But, anyways, to sum up, I'm not really into "rough" sex and prefer detailed posts (although I can be nasty and quick if needed )


ANYTHING ELSE YOU WANT TO SAY HERE:

I tend to post once a day in the mornings (GMT +1). If I'm not too busy I may post again in the afternoon and at nights; but mainly on weekdays, weekends tend to be computer free

CHARACTER'S INTERACTIONS IN THE SRP:

Just for everyone's information, the OOC Thread includes a timeline, called The Story So Far, in which I am keeping track of the events. It may make it easy for y'all to visual time and space ... sounds like the Twilight Zone or Star Trek, doesn't it?

Thanks for the heads-up... It sure does make it easier to keep track of stuff!

Just a note to everyone:

I have to get off line for several hours. It would be nice if everyone could just catch up their characters to the point where Taylor has returned with Cramer, and then we can all enjoy Fathers day. I have some important Authorities related posts I want to put up before we go too much farther, and I simply don't have time for them right now.

if you are bored and need something to do, go check out "The Real World".

Tee

HI y'all!!

I've been away for the weeken and you all have been writing a lot!!

I'll try to catch up with my three chractaers right now. I'll write one post and will include something for Sophie, Samantha and Jenn (who's been in the bathroom for too long without saying nothing xD).

I'm thinking about getting Jenn out of the bathroom at the same time Abigail did, maybe they could meet and she'd help her (and then she would confront Shades on not being able to control his gang... just an idea ). I'm not sure about the bathrooms being next to one another, although it would be quite logical. Thus, I guess Jenn would have heard what happened between Cramer and Abigail. I'll write as if it is the case. If not, I can edit the post, so anything I get wrong, just tell me

Cya!

Done!

Hope you are pleased with the result hehehe
Anything wrong, just tell me and I'll change it

I'll be offline for a while but I'll check it up in some hours.

Cya!