The metaphor of a woman who is turned on getting VERY wet

[AlinaX]

She leaked like a shiv?

 

[bumpercars]

She leaked like a shiv?

I suspect he meant to say she leaked like a *sieve*.

 

[alohadave]

I suspect he meant to say she leaked like a *sieve*.

Well, a shiv will make you leak...

 

[AlinaX]

Well, I certainly hope [he meant sieve].

 

[onehitwanda]

Well, I certainly hope [he meant sieve].

Sieve of Damocles?

 

[AlinaX]

As if being a woman wasn't embarrassing enough, my new chastity belt had the effect of making my gushing arousal spray out in a hundred directions at once. "I love the way you shower me with affection," he said a grin, and I wanted to die.

 

[alohadave]

While I read the occasional chastity belt/cock cage story, when they leave them on long term, it always gives me the willies. I keep thinking about the skin conditions and infections that would lead to.

I mean, I feel gross wearing underwear more than one day, I can't imagine something like that for days or weeks at a time. Obviously it's fantasy, but still.

I had a similar reaction when I watched Man in the Iron Mask with Leo DiCaprio. He'd been I. That mask for years and when they took it off, he has perfect hair and skin (and no beard!). His face/scalp should have been a mess of zits, boils, ingrown hairs.

 

[MediocreAuthor]

While I read the occasional chastity belt/cock cage story, when they leave them on long term, it always gives me the willies. I keep thinking about the skin conditions and infections that would lead to.

I mean, I feel gross wearing underwear more than one day, I can't imagine something like that for days or weeks at a time. Obviously it's fantasy, but still.

I had a similar reaction when I watched Man in the Iron Mask with Leo DiCaprio. He'd been I. That mask for years and when they took it off, he has perfect hair and skin (and no beard!). His face/scalp should have been a mess of zits, boils, ingrown hairs.

Thanks, friend. I wasn't planning on going all day without puking anyway

 

[AlinaX]

Hygiene is important in all things, so regular cleaning is necessary. That doesn't mean you get to play with yourself.

 

[Kumquatqueen]

Hygiene is important in all things, so regular cleaning is necessary. That doesn't mean you get to play with yourself.

Exactly. I've written a couple stories with a gentleman with a cock cage, and taken care to ensure hygiene is described, being vital to not putting people off.

Stories with long-term bondage and no mention of dealing with piss let alone shit and periods always jerk me out of the storyline.

 

[Cali_Love]

“Oh, hello. I wasn’t expecting you so soon.” I felt a cinder block form in my chest as I recognized my visitor. It was the sinister Menopause.

“Yeah, sorry about that. Nobody ever does. It’s time.” The reply oozed with fake sympathy.

“Damn. OK, how is this going to work?” I knew, but denial was still in play.

“We’ll, today’s visit is pretty simple. I’ll just be turning your V-faucet off. For forever.”

“Oh. Shit. What happens next?”

“I’ll be back in about five years and fill your vagina with sand.”

“Noooo. What is my husband going to think?”

“Oh. You won’t have to worry about that. He’s being visited right now by Mr. ED and Mr. High Blood Pressure.”

 

[Bamagan]

His cock was less steel, more carbon fiber. Which normally isn't the best option for something about to take a deep dive under lots of pressure in a wet environment, but in this case I'd make an exception.

Should be a nice erotic horror piece once you get to the catastrophic implosion

 

[Djmac1031]

Should be a nice erotic horror piece once you get to the catastrophic implosion

Or, as it's called in the industry, Premature Extermination.

 

[Bamagan]

Or, as it's called in the industry, Premature Extermination.

One of the perils of not abiding by 'just the tip' promises.

 

[Djmac1031]

One of the perils of not abiding by 'just the tip' promises.

It's why proper protection is a must.

 

[Bamagan]

It's why proper protection is a must.

Agreed. It's irresponsible to have to call in the Coast Guard's Emergency Fluffer.

 

[james93]

I was thinking about this regarding the panty liner thread.

I feel - like a lot of things - this has got exaggerated. So if a woman gets wet when turned on (which may or may not happen to a discernible degree, depending on the woman and the circumstances), surely if she gets more turned on, she gets more wet. And if she is super turned on, her vagina basically becomes a faucet. The last, of course, doesn’t really happen.

Of course female arousal is less obvious than male. And wetness serves the same purpose as a throbbing erection in a story. But are we overdoing this? I find myself reaching for words like sopping and soaking probably way too much.

Thoughts?

Em

Consider describing secondary arousal characteristics.. such a willing to throw caution to the wind, face flushing, lowering of inhibitions, along with some tasteful words to describe her wetness.. like using a dessert metaphor or something that has shades of 'well-done'. I've described sexual arousal by just describing the degree to which her legs part as she gets more turned on.

 

[dasgoodshit]

And if she is super turned on, her vagina basically becomes a faucet. The last, of course, doesn’t really happen.

It actually does sometimes. Long distance and time are required, but it does happen. I was once with a woman that was so wet that it was hard to orgasm because there wasn't enough friction. She was literally dripping down her legs.

Erotica is often heightened reality

Not false

In writing, especially erotica/ porn, exaggeration is almost mandatory.

It certainly helps

 

[JaxRhapsody]

I suspect he meant to say she leaked like a *sieve*.

Yeah this. Not a word I use often. I've often mixed up stigma and stigmata, too.

 

[JaxRhapsody]

While I read the occasional chastity belt/cock cage story, when they leave them on long term, it always gives me the willies. I keep thinking about the skin conditions and infections that would lead to.

I mean, I feel gross wearing underwear more than one day, I can't imagine something like that for days or weeks at a time. Obviously it's fantasy, but still.

I had a similar reaction when I watched Man in the Iron Mask with Leo DiCaprio. He'd been I. That mask for years and when they took it off, he has perfect hair and skin (and no beard!). His face/scalp should have been a mess of zits, boils, ingrown hairs.

Imagine what the mummy in Night Of The Museum was supposed to look like.

 

[NoTalentHack]

As if being a woman wasn't embarrassing enough, my new chastity belt had the effect of making my gushing arousal spray out in a hundred directions at once. "I love the way you shower me with affection," he said a grin, and I wanted to die.

“Then he called me his little Water Wiggle, and the humiliation was complete.”

 

[Bamagan]

Yeah this. Not a word I use often. I've often mixed up stigma and stigmata, too.

Well, having stigmata might lead to astigmatism, right?

 

[MargotPayge]

Exaggeration is not a big sin when it comes to erotica, as long as it doesn't become so comical that it undercuts the eroticism of the scene. I have personally experienced near-faucet conditions, and it was fun and erotic when it happened, but if it's overdone in writing (i.e., "I withdrew my fingers and her category 5 monsoon hit me") it can ruin the erotic effect. It's all a matter of what the particular scene demands. There are no rules.

The exaggeration is what makes it great. My favorite porn is the kind where the woman is having fun. So: giggling, laughing, and smiling are all things I wish more people (including me) put into their scenes. So I find it sexy when someone goes over-the-top and makes me smile about sex.


Oh, yeah - the man can have fun too...

 

[AlinaX]

“Then he called me his little Water Wiggle, and the humiliation was complete.”

Is it a carrot? Is it a dildo? No! It's a... wtf?

 

[JaxRhapsody]

The exaggeration is what makes it great. My favorite porn is the kind where the woman is having fun. So: giggling, laughing, and smiling are all things I wish more people (including me) put into their scenes. So I find it sexy when someone goes over-the-top and makes me smile about sex.


Oh, yeah - the man can have fun too...

I remember reading an excerpt, I think it was on Reddit about a woman giving a guy a hand job and he was so excited, he came and it read something like; he couldn't contain himself, he exploded, she couldn't keep a grip as his cock slipped from her hand, flopped around like a loose firehouse spraying his seed everywhere." Great, ain't it?