Zone & Tempest

[michaelmt1]

I have my first story up at last and have just added a new extra thread as well. The intro is quite long but it needed to be to set up the story.

It is in the si/fi section love to see some addition to this from every one. Remember this story is my first effort and i have chosen to write from a Female point of view which is a challenge in its self for a male.

I would appreciatte thoughts commenst suggestions from every one.


Mike

 

[SlidingInSilk]

link?

How about a link to help your readers find it faster?

 

[LauraSG]

Yes, please do that . We all forget to put up links, and looking for the story is a little tedious if we're in the middle of other things . Thanks.

 

[michaelmt1]

Link

Sorry all this is the link

Enjoy
//www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=c&story_id=579

 

[Zingiber]

Looks like a good story premise to go lots of possible directions. (Wonder if Julie will escape?). Reminds me of Jack L. Chalker's Flux & Anchor and Well World books.

- Z.