Zingiber's Chyoo 2 Updates

[Zingiber]

This is my new "consolidated updates" thread for Chyoo 2. (You can also refer to Get Me To The Church On Time which is mostly Chyoo 2-enabled).

New stuff!

PheylonFirestorm (known on the forums as Wyldnight) has gotten In From The Snow back out of hibernation with a thread where the four stranded real estate agents decide to have some fun by starting a drinking game with Keith and Ginny.

Good stuff! I'm looking forward to the follow-ups!

-Zingiber


For reference:

Guidelines for In From The Snow (summary page)

The scene is a snowbound pass, so nobody is likely to be around other than our roadside rescuers, Keith and Virginia, and whoever they find and bring back to their cabin...perhaps a couple on a romantic vacation.

 

[Wyldnight]

I'm glad that you liked the thread I added to your story. I'm also looking forward to seeing what others will add to it. I may add another to it from one of the other directions, but I'm not sure yet.

I just noticed today that you made a comment on "A Descent into Dreams". You're right that it needs a plot-establishing thread. I'll probably be working on that today.

I would like to send thanks to everyone who gave me feedback on my stories and on my threads. They are much appreciated. You all have made me feel so welcome here. Again, thank you.

James

 

[Zingiber]

In From The Snow continues to revive and develop with this tension-heightening contribution by deathofcards in the "single black male" path from the introduction.

A mysterious owner of the car is discovered...so who's this that Keith and Virginia rescued?

-Z

 

[Zingiber]

Get Me To The Church On Time

Copied from a separate discussion thread...it was really supposed to be here in the first place!

Update to Get Me To The Church On Time

The groom's mother Betta takes an afternoon sex break with her writer husband between pre-wedding errands. When he says he'll need a little help getting started, she gets some lined up:

Call the pool boy and the maid.

-Z

 

[Zingiber]

Early Warning: out of town

I will be away from my usual Internet connection from about June 22 to July 6th, so thread approvals may be slow and erratic.

-Z

 

[Zingiber]

A followup by me to PheylonFirestorm's thread on the drinking game in In From The Snow. Meg hits, Keith has to drink.

-Z

 

[Zingiber]

Another followup to the drinking game in In From The Snow :Sabrina hits, Ginny drinks, Trish misses.

And Trish has to pay a sexual forfeit with Sabrina... what will it be?

-Z

 

[Zingiber]

Watch this space

I have a new story in, pending approval. Let's see how long it takes this time.

In the meantime, I've been contributing to JakeLyon's The Neighborhood and SparkyMan's Best Man's Diary. I owe some work to Imhotep's Weekend in An All Girls Dorm and some to my other stories.

Just checking in,

-Z

 

[Zingiber]

Story: When The Cat's Away

When The Cat's Away has been approved.

Synopsis: Parents' swinging 2nd honeymoon lets college kids party, but early return surprises everyone!

Category: Erotic Couplings

POV: 3rd Person Both Male and Female

The introductory threads start off the story in the middle of its course, when the parents' second honeymoon has ended unexpectedly early. From there, two story paths lead to flashbacks, and one to what happens next.

Initial Story Map:

Introduction (On The Plane Home) Hank and Veevee prepare to renew their Mile High membership on the red-eye.

- Introduction 2 (Meanwhile Back Home...) Gary and Lil seem to be having lots of fun.

- - Hank and Veevee start their swinging cruise with Veevee wandering off somewhere

- - Gary and Lil start off on the home front by cranking up Stu's super surf van

- - The Return: One stop from home...or a detour? Will it be Pleeease bump us! or Get us home!


Guidelines:

* Looking for scenes that are fun and sexy for the characters, and enjoyable to read. Develop their personalities and quirks. Each of the characters is more sexually driven and strongly tempted by more alternatives than they want to admit, and each has a sexual secret they want to keep from (most of) the others.

* Hank and Veevee are in their late 40s, but still going strong. They're active swingers, and each has had some bisexual experience.

* Their college kids Gary (21) and Lillian (19) are wrapped up in sex as a new, wonderful experience and tend to have strong (mostly positive) feelings about it. Gary's girlfriend "Bernie" Bernstein is similar. Lillian's "angel of mercy" Alison is more experienced and even-keeled.

* I don't much like non-consent themes, except explicitly as play (or played somewhat lightly, more toward embarrassment than threat, and with humor).

 

[Zingiber]

When The Cat's Away (update)

Continuing Hank and Veevee's cruise, Hank looks for Veevee. Where does he find her?

The first two choices (written by me):

At the cabin of the Walkers, their swing partners
(And just who is that young man feeding his cock to a kneeling Veevee?)

Out for a massage (And does Hank want one too?)

Would anyone like to submit follow-ups or alternative places for Veevee to wander?

-Z

 

[Zingiber]

Two threads in When The Cat's Away .

One of Peter's "graduation wish" options:
Peter crosses swords with Hank

Gary and Lil get things rolling with Gary's girlfriend Bernie planning to take Lil out shopping to console her for her broken heart. And Lil discovers that Bernie's mom is famous!

-Z

 

[Zingiber]

Mr. Cuddly Bunny!

AaronWebster helps celebrate his return by contributing a fun and provocative thread to Get Me To The Church On Time:

Wake the others first

in which our bride-to-be, going round to wake her guests, barely suppresses a surprised laugh at what must have happened last night in Mr. Cuddly Bunny's bedroom.

But then she starts thinking of this morning's possibilities...

Thanks Aaron! This will be a fun challenge to follow up.

-Z

 

[Zingiber]

AaronWebster adds a new path to When The Cat's Away for those who want to follow Hank and Veevee's plane ride.

Extending the teaser scene in the first introductory thread, Hank follows Veevee to the first class loo and... well, check it out for yourself!

Meanwhile, back on the plane.

Because it's not where you're going, it's how much you enjoy the ride.

-Z

 

[Zingiber]

I've added a followup to AaronWebster's Meanwhile, back on the plane thread in When The Cat's Away following the further airborne adventures of our adventurous couple on the plane home.

And what else but The Mile High Club in the first class lavatory.

which ends with a tight focus on a damp piece of clothing, and a question to which the next contributor will have to provide an answer.

What's the word?

 

[Zingiber]

The mice will play...

Imhotep has added a new thread on the home front in
When The Cat's Away following Lil and Gary's girlfriend Bernie (Naomi Bernice) as Bernie takes Lil shopping to console her for a painful break-up.

But Lil can't keep her mind off the shocking scene that brought an end to her hopes and dreams.

Find out what happened, and what's in "store" by following The Girls.

Or follow Gary after he drops off the girls and contemplates making a guilty little phone call behind Bernie's back.

Meanwhile on the cruise, Peter Walker has another alternative for the "graduation present" Veevee's giving him: Peter wants to see Veevee and his girlfriend together.

-Z

 

[Zingiber]

What do Lil and Bernie do when they think a salesgirl has her eyes on them in the lingerie-and-leather store?

Imhotep says: Look around some more

...and maybe Lynn, Lei, or Shaun will offer to help choose a nice sexy outfit. And adjust the fit in all the right places.

To which I added a follow-up thread:

That was nice, Lynn, can I see some more clothes?

 

[Zingiber]

Get Me To The Church On Time

The mother of the bride is wondering if she should quit dawdling in the shower with her daughter and fiance and help the best man get breakfast ready.

But AaronWebster tells her: You are persuaded to stay.

I liked it. Hope you do too.

-Z

 

[Zingiber]

Things are still hot in the bath house...

I've added a follow-up to AaronWebster's just-mentioned thread for Get Me To The Church On Time.

Carry on till you come!

since the mother of the bride was left, let's say, "hanging on the edge."

Is there still time for fooling around, or should they get on with the wedding day?

- Z

 

[Zingiber]

In From The Snow

With autumn in progress in the Northern Hemisphere, and winter on its way, AaronWebster gets us in the mood by adding some heat to In From The Snow:

After Keith and Ginny rescue a woman with hypothermia, they drift off to sleep.

Then Keith wakes last and joins the party late..

Does he pretend to be asleep? Can he handle all the stimulation and still stay cool? And how does he really feel about his wife getting it on with a mysterious babe they pulled unconscious out of a car?

Thanks, AW!

-Z

 

[Zingiber]

Office Morale

The sterling AaronWebster freshens up Office Morale with A visit to the Finance Department.

Helen's executive assistant Patty takes visiting exec Rick on a tour of the Finance Department. Finance has taken their own creative turn on Helen's office morale policy with a way to make spreadsheets and reports exciting all day long!

"Just excuse me for a moment would you," said Patty. With that the tall brunette kicked off her shoes, then unzipped and slid down her slacks. When she had done so, she neatly folded them on a bench and slipped her shoes back on. The turtleneck only half covered her panties like a short short minidress.

"Should I..?" began Rick.

"No, no, no," said Patty. "This is Finance. Men wear suits."

Thanks to AW for a new environment with lots of possibilities for potential thread contributors. (Choose a new character's perspective if you like, maybe Patty, the pale, willowy, soft-spoken executive assistant?)

-Z

 

[Zingiber]

When The Cat's Away

Daciasdesire leaves our young man Gary in a quandary. Though he thought Bernie was just a fun girl to spend time with, he's started to care for her. But Laura, the girl he really wanted, finally has time for him.

So what does he do?

Gary makes the call.

And NOW what does he do?

Please contribute your best idea of how to tie him up in more exquisite knots!

Thanks to Dacia for giving Gary occasion to stop and think. (What part of his body he thinks with is up to you, potential contributing authors). And extra thanks for her generosity.

Or for my less brave (or more cautious) alternative, But he can't do it. Maybe a nice dip in Bernie's pool?

 

[Zingiber]

Imhotep opens a new path for Lil at the mall. When her brother Gary and his girlfriend Bernie wander off with something mushy in mind, Lil takes off on her own with her new music CD, nursing her broken heart and wondering if men are worth the hassle. She starts looking at the women around her, especially including a pretty blonde in a gray wool skirt.

Lil on her own.

Whereupon she sits down next to another young woman with a fresh grievance, and they get to talking. Are men really such assholes?

"Without a doubt."

As they ponder the next logical step, the blonde woman pointedly listens in.

Read 'em!

-Z

 

[Zingiber]

When The Cat's Away + Auto-approval.

Imhotep contributes again to When The Cat's Away. Veevee, the pussycat herself, sneaks back into the ladies' room suspecting hanky panky in the stalls involving the first-class stewardess and a gold-sandaled woman passenger. When her suspicions are confirmed, what does she do?

Listens in for the moment.

But she's an active listener, to be sure.

P.S.: I've set my stories for auto-approval (3 votes averaging 3+ for Office morale, 3 votes averaging 4+ for the other stories).

Hopefully this will help if I get busy again.

-Z

 

[Zingiber]

In When The Cat's Away, Imhotep comes through with another excellent contribution to keep things cooking at the little lingerie boutique called Hot, where Lil and Bernie are winding up their shopping trip to cheer Lil up.

When store clerk Lei confesses in the dressing room to Lil that she always wears something naughty under her clothing, Lil asks what she has on today.

How about

Silky, black crotchless panties.

Not only do they look good, they turn on Lil so much that she takes the initiative in getting things going to another level.

But what about Bernie, peeking through the curtain as she waits for Lynn to come back?

-Z

 

[Zingiber]

Who's Who in When The Cat's Away

There seemed to be enough characters in When The Cat's Away that I added a Who's Who page. Possible plot/character spoilers, if you care about surprises, so I'm just posting the link.

Who's Who in When The Cat's Away (plot/character spoilers)

Some of my recent thread additions:

Alternates to Dacia's Gary makes the call find Gary wandering off to Bernie's house to see if he can hang out by the pool with her mom Joyce (with a couple of follow-up threads), or calling his summer employer, Mrs. Sonia Rubin, to see if she has a special job for him this afternoon.

Bernie also asks Joyce, Mom, do I look fat? What can Joyce do to make her feel better?

Submissions and suggestions welcome!

-Z